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Thebravenorse
In the end, I hope you had the time of your life.
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Very good. I like it so far.
cool I like this story please continue
I have to say I am interested. Your writing style give it a light but enjoyable feel. I do fine it interesting how these two will do battle over him. I would think there would have been more stories about these two fighting over Spike like this but to my surprise there aren't many at all. I can't wait to see the how each one will try to seduce our favorite dragon. Luna comes off as the aggressive type while Celestia will try to play the lady.... that is till she see what Luna tries to pull off then the kid gloves come off and she start working that glorious flank lol. I was just thinking it would be funny if he was working so hard because he want to start his own life and saving up so he can get his own place.... which then the sisters will offer for him to stay there and work or them. Tell me that wouldn't lead to some interesting times between the three of them lol
And we're off to a rollicking start.
Great goddesses, it's My Little Pleasure Island all over again
; which isn't bad per say 
but, still Spike's goin to hav one hell of a vacation 
. Wonder what Tia n' Lulu got planned first for t un-inspectin drake 
Awesome cover photo: Check
Great title: Check
Proper chapter titles: Check
Indentation: Check
Punctuation: ughhughh meh (can be improved)
Story: Double Check
Dialogue : step above ughhughh meh
NOT spelling CELESTIA'S name wrong 14 times : ughhughh nope
Just say, Spike
! There relationship, besides being friends and a team of two is all that needs to be said if no one ask. Especially in a story where, Twilight is a possible shipping.
And what is with to trains? Does no one use the chariot any more!
I haven't read this yet, but when I do I think he will have to choose or go harem
The word is Insists
Incest is an unnatural relationship between family members.
Its kinda short but I can feel some sweetness in it.....
Good so far but could use so editing. The large amount of hugs with no back story was getting a little creepy.
Sweet, but creepy.
4766709 OMG! I love that story
and haha... yep, Spike has a crazy weekend ahead of him 
Also, I have fixed (most) of the mistakes that you all told me about, and others that I have found. I'm so happy that you all enjoy the story so far :) that's the whole reason I write, is for your enjoyment.
4766991 That story was amazing.
This is going to be good.
great story, Norse, I'm wanting more... but shame it's rated teen (if you know what I mean)
Dragon's in heat isn't he?
4767524 That's odd, becuse I don't see a 'Teen' tag... *cough*.. your welcome
During that week is the same time their heat cycle kick off.
Oh for the love of... I'm trying to keep my favorites list at least within sight of SFW.
Sly motherf-ing writer, changing the rating after I invested the time to read and come to enjoy the story....
Hugs for everyone
4766691 You have a point it is usally one or the other. Though there is a fic each with a princess fighting with Rarity for Spike's heart. Though it would be interesting to see just what they will do to win Spike's favor. Something tells me that Spike knows how much of a mare magnet he is, just not how big a one. Though I am curious just why he is overworking himself so much. Something tells me that the princesses will lose track of the first objective.
4766991
Well, at least 
doesn't hav as many mares after his tail lik in that fic 
; Altho these two mares are t princesses so who knows what will happen 
4767820 I think you are right about that one I mean when you are fighting your sister for a hunk of a dragon kinda hard to stay focus lol. I all I can say is Spike has to be clearly attracted to them and see it I mean come one Luna couldn't have been more clear. Celestia came off as a friend but Luna.... Yeaaa a blind man could see what she wanted. And so far I am with Spike Luna seems like a lot more... fun
. But who knows what Sun Butt has in store lol. I just find it funny there are quite a few of ether sister going against a mortal mare for him but this might be the first one I have seen where it is the two of them going against each other which seems like it would make the most sense since they seem like they would be each other's biggest competition
4767886 Yeah I guess it just takes someone to get off their butt and do a good idea. Luna does seem to be the more fun loving out of the two, though we don't know how Celestia is behind close door or what she has in her closet.
Considering the rating for this story it is safe say there will be fun in the future. If its with Spike's conset, with him straped to a bed, or whatever either one or both thousand year old mares can think up well we'll just have to wait and see.
Can't wait to read this. Even your COVER ART it hot as hell.
You gotta be a damn good writer to make that happen.
IT.IS. BEGUN.
It looks like Spike has the affections of two princesses. Is there a bed big enough for the three of them?
And will he be going back to Ponyville after the end of the weekend?
BOTH!!! or luna either or.
more pls
spike...........you're doomed
4767552
Heeeyyy your avatar is Peewee!
This could be retitled: Spike and the Alicorn Sammich.
A good read regardless.
4769561 haha, I like that
sounds good, it would be a shorter title too. Yea, I'll change the title to: Spike and the Alicorn Sammich. Good Idea 
4767552 Pretty sure males don't go into heat.
4769597
I honestly didn't think you'd take that seriously, 
kudos.
May the best alicorn (luna) win!
4770744 I came here late. What was it called beforehand?
4770993 The Dragon, The Sun, and The Moon
well I do not really like ... I am fascinated by your story and I hope very very anxious your suguiente chapters truth very many stories and seen the truth but yours really intrigued me but let me also let you fascinated takes shape as the truth a great story I let my more gentle and cordiar greeting and follow well
I really hope Spike will pick both of them. A good story nonetheless.
4770842 after seeing what I said earlier im havein 2nd thoughts, I think you should have an ending for both of them because having one ending for lune/celestia just doesn't sit right with me
Hello everyone!
I just want to tell you that the next chapter is in the works. It should be done in about two (three tops!) days. It just depends 
Thanks once again.
4771325 The old one is nice but I prefer the new one
4779866 That would be a nice harem.
Well gee, straight forward is a major understatement for this scene.
4781488 Well, when Luna wants something she doesn't beat around the bush
Who agrees with me? 
Ordered on a vacation? The really doesn't seem like much of a vacation to me.
4781618 Well, they had to make sure that he would come. Just telling him to come to Canterlot wouldn't work, because of how hes been acting lately