Humanity has spent thousands of years perfecting the indoors, so why would we want to go outside?
After accepting a dare from Diamond Tiara, Scootaloo got lost in the Everfree forest and never returned.
In her last moments she wrote down her final thoughts and feelings on a note, found in a clearing next to a large amount of dried blood...
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prin-cess-lu-na
Pretty good, though I will admit that the story was a little too fastly paced. It would be better if it was longer so it would be more effective.
Overall, good story!
Just the right feels.
Nice piece of literature you got here.
Good story, however it feels a bit rushed. You should go into more detail. Also, a few grammatical and spelling errors, but other than that, a great idea for a nice, yet short story. To be honest, it got me right in the feels.
Yeah, it was a little too fast for my liking.
A few errors, but it's still nice.
These feelfics really make me wanna strangle Diamond Tiara.
It was written in a rushed monor purposefully. It was meant to Mage Scootaloo's note seem a bit frantic and panicked.
Although I'm not sure this actually took effect.
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Erm...
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I wanna strangle her anyway.
4222370 luna the dream walker.......... fairly certain that she could help fiund scootaloo, and wou,d conskdering she knows the filly.
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Re read Scootaloo's note. She gets lost and is interrupted in her writing well within an hour. She would not have had time to sleep.
Very interesting description, I am most intrigued. Get back to you after I find the time to read it. This is going in my to-do list :)
Well.. I read it. That hit me hard. So much better than expected. I love it when a story leaves me moved. Amazing job my friend, AMAZING!
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Many thanks!
what about diamond tiara i didn't see here getting any blame or even feeling remorse
SHE SHOULD BE PUNISHED! SHE DID THIS TO SCOOTS!
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Oh trust me, I've got some... plans for her in my other fic...
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ALRIGHT i can't wait 
Good work, but one question, where did Scootallo get the paper, and whatever she used to write that letter? Other than that it's a good piece.
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I have no idea. Believe it or not this was the second thing I ever wrote on this site, and became the earliest officially after I cleaned up all the shitty fic I never planned to finish. Maybe Scoots took some saddlebags with her? I dunno'. Past me wasn't as good at think a story through, my early followers will remember.... I'm so sorry for anyone who decided to follow me back then, I was awful.