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You have my attention. I'll be watching this. Some excellent world building going on here.
Very interesting. The tenses of the sentences are sometimes hard to follow, but overall this chapter is pretty good. However, when Celestia was wondering what Nightmare Moon gained from her attack, you wrote Appleloosa instead of Dodge Junction.
"She wouldn't attack Canterlot."
Mmm Yes Yes she would~!
The Sure fire way to get attacked, Say it won't happen!
Good story so far! We are gonna be watching this!
4086733 Thank you for spotting that! I'll fix it right away.
Despite the odd premise (pirates wtf) this looks extremely promising.
The Dread Pirate Nightmare Moon, eh?
Well, I guess no one would surrender to the Dread Pirate Luna...
I FUCKING LOVE THIS CONCEPT!
C'mere, so I can kiss you!
Pirates + Moonlight... gotta track this one!
Hm, Moonlight, is it? And so far not a Tragedy tag, only Sad? I am intrigued.
You have a big problem with walls of text. Consider hiring an editor and excising a few of those. Few minor errors too, but an editor should fix those as well.
To be honest, the execution is so rough thar I couldn’t get into this. But it's a nice idea for a fic nonetheless, one that I've puzzled over a lot myself.
4090441 Yes, I do need an editor, but every time I would contact someone for help I would not get a reply. It's extremely frustrating because I've contacted dozens of people who said they were available to be only be met with silence. I self-edited to the best of my ability, but of course things slipped through the cracks. Thank you for the honesty, though.
Hopefully, I will get an editor soon and get this fixed all nice and pretty.
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If you hadn't already, check out the Overly Extensive Editors group. Never used them myself, but lots of respectable authors praise them for being thorough and honest.
4091302 Okay, I'll go check them out. Thanks!
My attention has been quite thoroughly caught.
When is the next chapter
Yay,Reading at midnight was worth it. Happy writing my good author :).
Wow! Nightmare Moon destroyed and caused sooo much destruction, all, because of trying to get a stallion! She must be very
about him!
This story is very good and I hope you update soon.
I can understand when she goes to great lengths to hunt a single pony BUT when she kills hundreds if not thousands of innocents to get to him? Then she crosses a line. Past justice .. Past vengence ... all the way to madness.
somepony needs to kick the stupid out of her and make her less of a selfish bitch ...
Ohhh! I cant wait for more!
4195491 Holy crap! I love your avatar!
4195438 I noticed that you used Trixie there
You'll just have to keep reading then to see if somepony does.
MOOOOOOOOOOOOOAAAAAAAAAAAA!
4195083 much destruction, many deaths, wow
You'll have to keep reading to find out why then. Until then, my lips are sealed and I fade into the mists.
This was a really good second chapter! Good job!
4195553 Aww, thank you!
I have to admit that my skills had quite a bit of rust on them when I started writing the 1st chapter. I had not written anything in years, so I'm trying to get back into the swing of things and find my voice again. The second one is starting to show more of my style.
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and Trollestia/Molestia dont quite fit in for any non sexually applied justice ... 
I only used Trixie because there is no Angry Celestia version of
although ... i will admit that Mollestia applied justice would be pretty funny
I was just afraid NMM was going to pull out the "I killed all those innocent ponies because HE made me do it!" card ...
oh yea .. I definitely want to keep reading
All I can really say is that I hope Chapter 3 comes sooner. Really enjoying this so far and I can't wait to see what comes next
I must say, I have a really good feeling about this story of yours. Looking forward to even more riveting chapters.
Until then, have a nice one!
Ooo look 100 likes, nice going would be a shame is someone where to *click* woops my bad.
Need More Fast Please
More plz.. This story rocks!
Ps: They need a Maud icon..
i really like this story hope to read more soon
i know i commented on this chapter before and i am sorry to bug you i was just wondering if by any chance you know when you might post next chapter
i understand that life can get in the way and i don't want to rash you or anything i just asking if you don't know that is okay and take your time on making a grate chapter
4195573 so is this story dead...or what?
4195573 so is this story dead...or what?
like the idea of this story,
Cool, I hope you revisit this soon 'cause I really want to see how this story will play out