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Sealcake
I like the night sky and how time passes by. Feeling pretty gay tonight.
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Well, I hope you continue this story. This is clearly an alternative riff on the Nightmare Moon saga, with the elements defeated & Twilight Sparkle NM's prisoner! It looks like Nightmare Moon has turned Twilight into a clone of sorts of her sister Celestia, that's definitely a different way to become an alicorn than in the series!
Finally, at the end of this chapter, the remaining Mane 6 begin to awaken. What could they do to defeat Nightmare Moon and rescue Twilight?
Please continue!
I what to more of this
interesant
You mean "interesting"?
3632478 Buck
Ugh, now I have to fix that
I'd like to see more.
Have some editing.
"Nightmare knew in the first moment she saw her that Twilight was, probably, an unbreakable mare."
Sounds better, having a consonant sound after "an" sounds very awkward (and it's probably grammatically incorrect, even when "probably" is not the word being referred to, but I'm not quite a master of grammar).
""And... that was all?"
Missed a space there.
"Her legs, pelvis, and, well, anything that the goo had managed to reach, were much more bigger than before, just more smaller than Nightmare Moon's respective parts."
"Twilight refused to watch and closed her eyes during all the process, when she opened them again, a pair of black wings were happily positioned in her sides."
"It was like millions of small drills were piercing her skin, twisting a part of her very soul."
And, of course, "interesant".
3632841 Ok, random guy, thanks you (I really mean this
) too. Now I have more to work on 
3633055 Sure, Spanish
Glad someone asked that 
I am liking the shaping of the story. If you would like I could edit for you
I liked it! I love any stories involving Nightmare Moon and Twilight! Especially ones like this one. Can't wait to see where this'll go.
What? What does this have to do with the story? Anyway Cool story DID RAINBOW WAKE UP OR SHUTTERFLY!??
3770253 Absolutely nothing, my sir (well, I was kind of angry, so I tortured Twilight for my lost piece of tooth
).
If I get enough time, chapter two will come after I write "Twilight's scepter"'s second chapter. And we will know what pegasi is the one who woke up, DUN DUN DUUUN!
3771557
Oh Okey! Its just really nagging me on which one woke up my guess is Rainbow. Also WHY IN THE HELL IS ZECORA THERE?!??!?!?! and Oh look theres Celestia :3!
I will never forgive my friends, you monster.
Shouldn't that be "forget"?
Would love it if you would continue this :D
I hope you continue this soon
3897353 oh dear luna you're useing 1 of atryl so luna picture for your profile
One of the pegasus? Rainbow? Fluttershy? Who in equestria is it? please continue!
I really like it hope to read more soon
I want a update
Update it please!
I love this story more please
More more more please
i know i commented on this chapter before and i am sorry to bug you i was just wondering if by any chance you know when you might post next chapter
i understand that life can get in the way and i don't want to rash you or anything i just asking if you don't know that is okay and take your time on making a grate chapter
also happy holidays
wow found this again, and really enjoy the premise still, sad it was never continued.
Love the story, too bad it hasn't been continued. Hint hint