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Spike was always an odd child. Growing up as the son of Princess Celestia, his only friends were his mother's protege, Twilight Sparkle, and the groundskeeper's son, Garble. But when his life is shattered before his eyes, Spike is revealed to have terrifying powers. Fearing for Spike's well-being, Celestia sends Twilight and Spike to Ponyville so that he may learn to contain the animal inside him. Here they will make both new friends........and enemies.

My Little Pony belongs to Hasbro.

Wolverine and the X-Men belong to Marvel Comics

Chapters (3)
Comments ( 40 )

This looks okay and I'm curious where you will go with this.

I cant wait to read more. I wish I could write as good as this.. :heart::heart:

I can't wait to see more

I got to see here this is going, I wonder where any other mutant will come into place. There are so many different things you can do (wouldn't be surpise if pinkie becomes Deadpool... just saying it isn't a party with out the merc with the mouth lol:pinkiehappy:) But anyway I am wondering how will this go. I would be interesting to see a time jump (even if it comes alittle down the road) so we can get a teen or young adult Spike (Logan) and having him having to reveal the thing he has been hiding for so long to protect his new friends and life.:moustache: ... bub

4169913 This is going to be the first in a series of X-Men based stories. There are going to be characters revealed to have mutant powers later.

4174711 OH that is interesting, so do you plan to do many stories each different origin stories. Then have them all come together under the x-men banner. (I still go to ask are you going to do the age jump or keep him as smaller Spike for this I know you prob don't know yourself yet or don't want to share it. Just something eating at the back of my mind. ( Even if his mutation made him age up to become a better predator as well as enhance his abilities) -wink winki-:moustache:

4169913 And there will be time jumps, much like in the grapic novel.

4174747 K well knowing that you are a true fan I am now for sure going to be on top of anything you put out. I can't wait to see how you are going to tie in Spike and everyone else into the x-men universe.
Oh have you read Deadpool and Pinkie Pie.
It is a great read and will have pissing yourself laughing in no time.:pinkiehappy:

4174758 I'll make sure that I do.

4174735 Spike will mature with the time jumps. I don't plan on basing it entirely on the movies or comic books because I want the story to retain some originality instead of just ripping everything from the movies and comics. So most of the story events will be loosely based on the actual X-Men Universe. The next story will be about the Weapon X program and the introduction of the X-Men.

4175770 K that is great, the more you talk the more I want to read it. I like some direct clones done over, but I feel you are making the right call. This type of story need to have more of a personal touch to make it truly blend well.But even with my growing interesting in the story and all the answers you have provided so far I still cant help but be left with more questions then answers lol. Guess that is the sign of having a real interest in the story lol.

This was a nice introduction and set up chapter. I showed up alittle of all the mane 6 and some future problems that might pop up. I do find it interesting how Spike described Shy, (oh I hope they hook up in this story as funny as it is I can see "Logan" with someone like Shy way more then someone like Rarity).:moustache:

4218731 Sorry, I'm more of a Sparity fan and I'm already planning to include elements of it in the story. But I will be pairing Fluttershy up too. Best to tell you now and my get your hopes up for nothing. And if this makes you want to rip me a new one, that's fine with me. I'd like eight (Charlie Brown Ghost Ass :rainbowlaugh:). But considering how positive and supportive you've been with this story, I wouldn't really expect that kind of reaction from you.

4218815 Lol don't worry, I would NEVER get pissy or give a author shit for what they decide to do. You are giving me a interesting story for free, what right do I have to say. And I have nothing against the Spike x Rarity pairing.In fact it was the pairing that got me here in the first place lol. I believe you will make her interesting and a fitting love for our "Logan". Now I am even more interested in seeing how you will build up their connection (taking care of a shitty abusive ex is a good way to earn some point in her eyes lol):moustache::duck:

A possible FlutterSpike? I approve. Though it looks like Thunderlane might become a problem later and I can see Spike saying 'bub' from hanging around Mac in the future.

4219274 Here's the basic character conversion from Wolverine: Origin to Spike: Origin without spoiling future storylines.

Wolverine: Spike

Smitty (Logan's employer and friend): Big Macintosh

Dog Logan/Victor Creed: Garble

Comment posted by DragonPony deleted Apr 12th, 2014

4219274 No flutterspike from what I've been told sorry lol. As I said I am sure thunderbitch will get what is coming to him, all he has to do is lay hands on someone Spike cares about:moustache:

I can understand you having a writers block. But I can say tho I have been waiting for this story to continue. I want to see your Spike slowly become a badass. First thing first he has to skin that Bitchlane alive. :moustache::duck:. Hell I would love to see him do it while he is protecting Rarity from him.

Does Spike have some connection to wolves, because if he can command them that would be awesome.:moustache:

4324178 In Origin, at one point Logan is confronted by a wolf in a forest. He defeats it andestablishes himself as the alpha-male and eventually ends up leading a pack of them as he hunts deer as if he were one of them.

4324984 Man I can't wait for you to get to that point. I always loved that part lol.:pinkiehappy:

thunderlane is going to learn a new meaning to the word pain.

I think this needs an alternate universe tag.

I am happy to see a update for the story. It is fine that their is romance in the story. Most people overlook it as a aspect of Logan but romance IS a major driving force in many of the things he does. Not to mention this is still also Spike and we all know how he feel about the mare':raritywink:. I think He might have to gut alittle punk (trying to keep it clean lol:derpytongue2:) once he finds out about Rar and Spike:moustache::duck:

4711682 I know what you mean. In almost every version of X-Men there is, one of the more subtle aspects is the fact that Logan is part of a love triangle with Jean Grey and Cyclops. I like to think that that's the reason why Logan and Cyclops never got along very well. Hell, the whole basis of the setting of the Wolverine is that Logan is still mourning Jean's death.

Comment posted by ZombieTwin deleted Jul 18th, 2014

4712018 Yea I mean SOO many of his best stories involve him dealing with a romantic partner. i have a poster on my wall when Jean came to Logan and tried to hook up with him after finding out Scoot and Emma were messing around in each other minds. I know all his heartbreak is what made him who he is but I still can't help but hope yours has a better love life even if it gets alittle rocky at times lol.

6274657 That's what I get for typing on a fucking Kindle.

6274815 it's fine but I just thought you were messing with us

:>6274815 KO PLEASE say that the next chapter is coming soon. :pinkiecrazy::pinkiecrazy::pinkiecrazy::pinkiecrazy::pinkiecrazy::rainbowdetermined2::rainbowdetermined2:

to thunder lane: if god had wanted you to live he wouldn't have created spike

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