During a trip to investigate strange occurrences in England Bayonetta and Jeanne are some how transported to Equestria and now must find a way to return, but once they come across the ponies of this new land Will they still want to leave, or will there arrival be the end of the Umbra way?
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I think you meant Angel
Bayonetta should be friends with Discord, he could really play the music if she fis fighting
Or the Music is part of her magic, i just start to want this because i want to see Twilights face, i don´t know why her, probably because she would be interested in new Magic.
Let them cause their own Chaos please^^ Oh well i think i would not mind if they start to be a bit calm from time to time.
Which could be Bayonettas and which could be Jeannes best friends..... Bayonetta maybe...Rarity (Gossip)....Discord....(she could get her Witch stuff)....and maybe Fluttershy because Fluttershy is to gullible or could be. Well just suggestions, i don´t really want these.
I don´t know which of them you want to pair with Big Mac, but it looks like he is one of the probably two colts you picked for te pairing.
Well definitly better than Big Mac and Fluttershy, the only one i could image as his Marefriend is Cheerilee. Well or one of them.
I let you suprise me. G
Good work.
5127520 ya, use auto correct and it changed to angle, caught it most times but it slipped out i think
What game is this?
5149135 Bayonetta, or to be more exact after the second game Bayonetta 2
5149145 thx for clearing that up
You just need to fix a little bit of your grammar and you got a great story.
I think i need a bit helpt to like Big Mac in here, but i don´t hate him, he is just not my favourite, but i am open-minded.
I can´t wait to see how she respond to the main six, I don´t know how Bayonetta and (...forgot the other one) are with their personality in the second Game, but i hope Bayonetta is still tricky enough to make Twilight, Rarity or Applejack a bit upset with a briliant lie or her cocky behavior.
Ahhhh take your time but i think i want more already, right now i think i take it in my (still favourite) folder. You could say it takes the first step into my favourites. I startet to seperate my top favourites and the other ones i still like.
after i saw my last comment i knew it is maybe a bit to early to ask, but is there a new chapter soon? What i mean is, can i know how often to you want to upload?
5218285 mmmm, i don't really have a scheduled,its just whe i can. As fr the next chapter I say its 50-60 % done
5218925 Well thank you, i assume if i wait for it, i get probably something even better so take your time.
That´s all i wanted to hear.
darn, the moment i was ready to read more i reached already the end of it
I think it helps that i finished Bayonetta 2 yesterday, to get me even more excited about this story.
I think you managed to get their personality right mostly, actually i can´t say for sure that something is maybe not right.
To make it a bit shorter, i like it and i am happy with how you made them.
If i see the added pictures below a story image i always think, that´s are the most important ponys in the story, what i mean is are Twilight and Big Mac both a possible romance for Bayonetta and Janne? I think i agreed to Big Mac and Bayonetta, but i would like Bayonetta X Twilight and Janne X Big Mac if they are both in for a romance, but i would say let them start the real romance in the middle of the story.
I thought you wanted to show Rodin, but instead of him it was Discord, still good but i would like him to be able to open a portal to Equestria or Discord do something to invite him there. I don´t care if they are maybe friends, but after i saw which strange Rodin had in the second Game, i would assume he don´t need to let Discord get on his nerves.
Madam Butterfly, for that one moment in the game i really started to like her, i never thought i would really like her that much for it. The first moment i saw her i didn´t thought so much about it, but right now i notice i like her rather much.
Well i don´t know how much time you have, but i think i would like it if the chapter is a bit longer, i don´t care if i have to wait a bit longer for it, but it would be probably more satisfying. And for the possible Angels, which i think are now in Ponyville, i think all of them should be able to see them, because they have more Magic there than on Earth. I don´t know if it is a good idea, but i think i would be ok with them being able to see the Angels.
5232717 you actually hitting a bunch of nails on the head, or have a close idea to what I'm going g to do. Nice to see someone who thinks like me. Also how would you like to act as a Beta for me?
5233674 you mean Betareader? Well why not, i don´t want to promise to much because i can´t correct any grammar (that would be an editor right?), but i could try to tell you what i think about the next chapter or what you need helpt with. I could tell you what i would think you should do and thinks like that if you want, but i think that is more or less exactly what Betareader means.
Yeah i have plenty time at the moment, and i honestly already start to try, to make a few more detailed comments.
Longs story short, yes i think i would like that.
PS: Nice to know that i am not that wrong about how the story is probably planned.^^
5234726 Great! I just need an email or something similar to send you chapters
This is where the fun start
Hmm...this crossover is not bad, but you really need to use spell-check though, there are too many misspelled words.
sorry again, but nice idea with the pictures and the music within. I would like to see the moon river song in there too, somehow i started to really like it.
Seeing it like this a second time, i think you really have done a good job with it.
Nice job so far. I sense Loki making an appearance soon
Damn yeah! I like it when Bayo kicks demon ass than angel ass.
Great Crossover I can't wait for more!
Yo, author you still alive?
I would like to have a new chapter please.
I would like to ask if a new chapter is possible.
Nice touch with the music buddy love this
Do you write anymore? I would like to see some but I'm afraid of starting if it'll never be updated again. But I'll probably track it either way.
Nice story though I'd suggest looking back in it and edit it cause theirs some obvious misspelled words littered around. Overall the story seems very interesting.
Wow I love it
Keep going!
Why do always good crossover Stories have to be incomplete