• Published 6th Mar 2014
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Honey Pie - SPark



The victory over Queen Chrysalis has left a single changeling stranded in Canterlot, alone and broken. A certain pink pony is also alone in the Canterlot night. What will become of this unlikely pair?

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Bonus stuff

Changeling Q and A
(Prepare to fire the head-canons!)

Q: How does the chain of command work with the under-queens? Does Chrysalis control the under-queens, who then control the lesser changelings(Chrysalis -> under-queens -> drones), or does Chrysalis control them all equally and the under-queens are just stronger changelings(Chrysalis -> under-queens and drones)?

A: Chrysalis has the ability to directly control/give orders to any given drone, but tends to not bother. She is obsessed with conquest and ponies, and considers drones to be a bit beneath her notice, so she lets the under-queens direct them. Even in a healthy hive, however, the queen tends to delegate quite a lot of the running of the hive to the under-queens.

Q: Since changelings have a hive mind, does that make them able to know what the other is thinking at all times?

A: Any given changeling within a hive can see what any other changeling is thinking if they want to, and many drones (Sweetcake among them, before losing his bond) are a little lazy and like let the hive do all their thinking for them, so they hardly have thoughts of their own. Others, however, tend to be a little bit more individualistic, and will only "check in" with the hive when they run into something they can't figure out for themselves. Either way, most changelings seldom bother to see what any other changeling is thinking, they're busy with their own lives and duties. The real effect of the hive bond has more to do with mood, emotion, and the spreading of emergency information, such as when the hive is under attack.

Q: Have the other hives have any contact with Equestria? Have they tried to engage in diplomacy?

A: The other hives lie within Equestria, so they've definitely had some contact! Chrysalis Hive's territory is Canterlot itself and the small towns that lie nearby it, including Ponyville, and stretching out into the badlands to include Appleoosa and Doge as well. This is a little bit unusual, though. Most hives are actually quite urban. They feed on ponies, so they go where the ponies are. There are hives hidden in or near every major urban center in Equestra. (Manehattan has two.) Chrysalis Hive is also a bit unusual in the hive proper being a long away away from any pony habitations, but the original founding queen did not want to build a hive right under Celestia's nose, so it was located well away from Canterlot, even though that's where they do most of their feeding.

The other hives have not, however, tried any sort of diplomacy with ponies. It is the Prime Directive of changeling life that ponies should never know changelings exist. None of the other hives/queens would approve of what Chrysalis has done in letting ponies see changelings moving openly at all.

Q: Are your changelings distinctly male/female, hermaphrodites, or neither?

A: 95+% of them are infertile females. That's what the term "drone" is used to mean in my stories, even though it's technically a bit inaccurate (drones in bees are males, not females.) A small percentage in a given hive (around one in a hundred) will be fertile females, aka. under-queens, and an even smaller percentage fertile males. (The males are incredibly protected, though it varies from hive to hive whether they are pampered princes or near-slaves, but they absolutely never leave the hive and a pony would never be allowed in to see them.) The single queen is also, of course, fertile and female.

That's strictly physiologically speaking, though. As far as gender roles and gendered personalities the way we (and ponies) tend to think of them, most changelings would consider themselves to have no gender at all. Infiltrators, who spend a lot of time around/as ponies do tend to settle into a particular gender and stick with it, since learning how to comfortably fit both gender roles is difficult, it's easier to stick to taking just one gender. This is why Sweetcake feels comfortable with "Mister", and doesn't bother to explain that it's not physically accurate. Technically he's actually female, but he doesn't think of himself that way.

Q: Do they sing when they work?

A: Yes! They are probably not as prone to bursting into song as ponies are, but they do sing.

Q: Are they prone to any form of 'sibling rivalry?

A: Generally not, no. All changelings feel a strong loyalty to the hive which tends to prevent that kind of thing. The exception is under-queens, some of whom tend to constantly try to one up each other in various ways in hopes of ending up queen eventually.

Q: Are there holidays of any kind?

A: No, changelings are not prone to "wasting" time and effort on things like that.

Q: Do Changelings play tricks on each other for fun, if and when they have free time? Is that even possible, due to hive connection?

A: It would be incredibly rare for a changeling to do so. An individual who liked surprising and pranking others would be regarded by the hive as borderline insane, but it's within the realm of possibility. Some pranks would be easier than others. The hive bond would prevent things like sneaking up behind someone, but though all changelings within a hive can sense each other, they are not actively reading each other's minds at all times, so tricks and pranks would be possible.

Q: Do different hives have slightly varied looks between the Changelings from each hive such as different spines, eye colors, or carapace patterns?

A: Yes! Most of the variations are subtle, but differing hives have distinctly different "accent colors" ie. their eyes and the things I've been calling "wing cases" since that's the nearest insect analog I can come up with for wtf they are.

Q: What location is this hive in?

A: Chrysalis Hive is in the badlands, on the far side of the Everfree from Ponyville.

Q: Do they prefer dirt or rock for the beginnings of their hive, IE: open field vs. mountain terrain?

A: Rock. Especially soft sandstone which is easy to work. Urban changelings will tend to take advantage of any old, unused pony structures underground too, such as abandoned sewer lines or subway tunnels.

Q: Do Changeling queens gather at any point to discuss matters of territory or other subjects?

A: Changeling queens almost never leave the hive (Chrysalis is once again atypical.) They do "gather" by means of drones, as the queen can use the bond to speak through a drone.

Q: Do they like toast or tea?

A: Only the infiltrators would have had the opportunity to try either, and it would depend on their personal taste.

Q: Do changelings potty? We know all changelings feed on love, but only some versions eat food, others just pretend, and some find a way to avoid the situation altogether

A: As mentioned in the story itself, my version of changelings do require solid food. They are omnivores, but live on a diet that primarily consists of mushrooms. Fish and cooked insects such as locusts/grasshoppers tend to be used to add variety to that rather boring diet.

Q: Would that make "hate" a way to sicken a changeling? Or is [directed strong negative feelings] just an emotion they cannot feed on leaving them starving but otherwise unharmed?

A: Hate would sicken a changeling if the changeling tried to eat it, but feeding is an at least partially voluntary act (it can be done subconsciously too, while sleeping, but not unwillingly.) You can't force-feed a changeling. So yes hate would make them sick if they actively fed on it, but they wouldn't.

Q: Can polymorphing be used to cheat injuries?

A: No. Injuries translate across when a changeling shifts forms.

Q: How deep does the polymorphic ability go? Does it merely change the wrapper but not the insides?

A: It makes macro changes, but not micro changes. Ie. it does go more than skin deep, you could x-ray a changeling and it would look like a pony, but if you drew a little blood or tested their DNA, it would not be pony-like at all.

Q: If it goes deeper, could that be used to shapeshift into a restored changeling after suffering a broken limb? What about loosing an entire limb?

A: I suppose with a good supply of love energy, the shift could be used as a kind of healing spell, but it wouldn't be something the average changeling could do.

Q: Do changelings get sick?

A: Absolutely. I haven't put a lot of thought into changeling-specific maladies, though, as they don't come up in any of the stories I've told so far.

Q: Can a drone become a fertilizer by sheer will? I know there are species that can change sex at will if necessary, so I guess the same can go to actual reproduction.

A: No, simply wishing it were so is not enough to change sex for a changeling.

Q: Also, when they take a pony form, do they become physically fully functional?

A: This is kind of a "yes and no" question. In pony form they do have functional genitals, but as it is a macro (structural) change rather than a micro (biochemistry) change, they don't have the hormonal responses for arousal.

Q: Are they limited to ponies-only, or can they shape-shift with other species? If so, is there a size limit (like breezies or buffalos for example).

A: No, they're not limited to ponies only, but there is a size limit. It's a fairly flexible one though. Chrysalis seems to be about the size of Celestia, and yet easily takes the form of Cadance, who is quite a bit smaller than Celestia, after all. And of course Sweetcake's stallion form is a good bit larger than his natural changeling form.


Misc. Q and A


Q: Will Sweetcake form a hive bond with the rest of the Mane 6?

A: No. Sweetcake's bond with Pinkie was a very unusual thing. It happened because of the dual factors of him being completely cut off from all mental contact (and thus being subconsciously and consciously desperate to somehow establish some sort of bond) and the fact that he and Pinkie were feeling very similar emotions and were in very close contact for some time. Other changelings could conceivably form bonds with other ponies under similar circumstances, but for Sweetcake to form a bond with any other pony, he would have to first lose his bond with Pinkie Pie.

Q: Will Twilicorn be in the sequel?

A: No. The sequel only jumps forward a month or two in time, and is still before Twilight's ascension. As I am enjoying writing in this universe, it's entirely possible that eventually alicorn Twilight may turn up, but for now I have no specific plans to include her.

Q: Is it okay to use ideas from this story in stories of my own?

A: Absolutely! It would be hypocritical of me to steal my setting and most of my characters from Hasbro and then turn around and demand that nobody else use any of the things I invented. (And if you do, I want a link!)

Artwork!

(All art is by me, since I haven't gotten any by anybody else.)


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I had never felt or tasted such love as Pinke was suddenly pouring into me.
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My new form was still pink, like Pinkie. I'd made my mane and tail short and straight though, and I shaped a horn.
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Author's Note:

Hope you enjoyed these sketches, and the various world-building material about changelings.

If you want to read even more about changelings (and about Sweetcake and Honey Pie), please check out Honey Pie II: The Wrath of Chrysalis.

P.S. If you'd like to support me in making more stories like this, consider becoming a patron.

Comments ( 97 )

You are a god damn hero.

4196198 How did I not notice this comment? Anyhow, glad you liked it! Also thanks for contributing to the changeling Q and A.

4214438 :pinkiehappy::pinkiehappy::pinkiehappy:

i cant wait for a sequal

4214480 Don't wait, the first chapter of the sequel is up. :pinkiehappy:

See?

Looks good, can't wait for the sequal.
Keep up the good work. Deus tecum.

4214749 The sequel (or the first chapter of it anyway) is out now. :twilightsmile:

4214752 I saw that right after I commented. Talk about timming.
Reguardless, thanks. Looking forward to reading the first chapter.

YES! MY IDEA WAS USED! HUZZAHHH :heart::heart::heart:

including Ponyville, and stretching out into the badlands to include Appleoosa and Doge as well

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4214913 Pfft. I'm almost tempted to not bother to fix that typo. :pinkiehappy:

Q: How does the chain of command work with the under-queens? Does Chrysalis control the under-queens, who then control the lesser changelings(Chrysalis -> under-queens -> drones), or does Chrysalis control them all equally and the under-queens are just stronger changelings(Chrysalis -> under-queens and drones)?

YES! My question was the first one listed! Ya'll can go home now. :twilightsmile:

Also, Mister Changeling is actually female? That messes with my head almost as much as Pinkie Pie does in an average episode.

4215083 Thank you!

4215066 :pinkiehappy: I like to play with gender and identity concepts a little.

Ha loved the story and the Q/A part. Gotta get to next story bit before I cry. Keep up the good work! :pinkiehappy:

4215271 Hmmm, that's an idea. Although I don't think it would give Sweetcake Pinkie sense himself, but he could possibly use hers somehow.

4215352 Thank you! :pinkiehappy::pinkiehappy:

Technically he's actually female, but he doesn't think of himself that way.

I sense some hot girl on girl action coming soon! XD:rainbowlaugh: JK(Although could still happen:applejackunsure:)

I wonder what rhyme would have a changeling song. And the hivemind's fav music type.

Headcannons are fired, and headcannons collide with one another.

This was a great ride all the way through, though some aspects of your headcannon regarding Changelings conflict deeply with my own.

Anyway this was a great story, so perhaps a sequel? :pinkiesmile:

~favorite~ ON TO THE SEQUEL!!!!!! ~gallops away~:pinkiehappy::rainbowderp::twilightsheepish::twilightsmile::trollestia::twistnerd:

(Manehattan has two.)

it's the mafia and syndicates ! srysly

Chrysalis hive's territory is Canterlot itself and the small towns that lie nearby it, including Ponyville, and stretching out into the badlands to include Appleoosa and Doge as well

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4224072 I cannot possible change that typo now. :pinkiehappy:

Perhaps you should cre8 a group for the Honeyverse™* if/when you get spin-off links. I look forward to reading all of the stories in this 'verse, and want an easy w8y to find them.

~Vriska Serket

*:derpytongue2:

4224906 Well, I guess if anybody else writes anything in this 'verse I might. I don't really see that happening though. And of course you can find anything I write pretty easily, it'll be right here in my account. :twilightsmile:

A: Absolutely. I haven't put a lot of thought into changeling-specific maladies, though, as they don't come up in any of the stories I've told so far.

Changlings subjected to a sudden loss in nutrition after a long period of heavy feeding can occasionally suffer from a unique illness characterized by sudden feelings of emptiness, loss of work ethic, and, if left untreated, increased chance of heart attack. It is colloquially known as "Lovesickness".

*Rimshot, followed by chorus of Booing and rotten apples*

I saw this story when the second one came up in the feed. Curious, I looked at the info for the first one and while waiting to drive back to base one day I gave it a go. The story is short, perfect for an afternoon read. Yet Its well put together, an interesting tail, very cute and tender. The love between then is apparent and sweet, And I have to say you did a wonderful job writing it.

4226717 Aww, I am really glad you liked it so much! :pinkiehappy:

4227390 :pinkiehappy: Nothing but the same ships all the time is boring, right? :twilightsmile:

4228817 Thank you! :pinkiehappy:

Oh dear.

I forget how long, but I've long known that Pinkie Pie would be the pony making friends with & comforting the changeling inexplicably lost and form-locked in the middle of Ponyville. And sure enough, here we're going to have Pinkie Pie making friends with the changeling lost (and possibly form-locked?) in Canterlot.

(I should probably be doing something else. Whatever.)

What fun!:pinkiehappy:

Sweetcake's bond with Pinkie was a very unusual thing.
...
for Sweetcake to form a bond with any other pony, he would have to first lose his bond with Pinkie Pie.

So literally a once-in-a-lifetime thing, then?:trollestia:

I imagine Twilight could emulate the bond given sufficient motivation and research (now that she's got a possible research subject), but I'd kinda expect that to be a temporary thing.

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I once read a story where there was a sickness among changelings called empathy sickness. Where changelings begin feeling love and fall in love with the pony they feed off of.

:heart:

4237510 Somehow I managed to not reply to your comments yesterday. Well, better late than never. :pinkiehappy: Anyhow, thanks for leaving them and I'm glad you liked the story!

4246955 Aww. It is awesome that this connected with you so much. Thank you. :twilightsmile:

4253550 It's a rule I'm totally aware of. I just don't always spot when I've missed doing it. :twilightsmile:

4254000

"Too Many Pinkie Pies" is Season 3

Man, I thought it was a season 2 bit, but you're right. Apparently Pinkie has become unstuck in time here!

Bucking is what AJ does, with her apple trees. I can't imagine that being existing slang without everyone giggling whenever AJ talks about her job

I always figured it was about like "come". Yes it has a totally dirty use, but you only snicker when somebody uses it in a clean context if you're a 15 year old boy.

Thanks for the error fixes. :twilightsmile:

4254287 Thanks again! Though you honestly don't need to explain the rules of grammar to me, mistakes like the coma where I should have a semicolon are because I failed to notice, not because I don't know why. :twilightsmile:

4254490 Thanks again! Though "Chrysalis Hive" is correct, it's the hive's title. Hives are called by the queen's name. Floret Hive, Chelicera Hive, etc.

Q: Can polymorphing be used to cheat injuries?

A: No. Injuries translate across when a changeling shifts forms.

Heh. I once had a role play character (cyberpunk; no ponies involved) who used her shapeshifting ability like that, but it wasn't exactly 'cheating'; because of the incompatibility of the two forms she could shift between, the injury was actually force-healed, which meant getting all the pain of the entire recovery process in a few seconds instead. If the injury was too serious, just the pain could kill her if she'd try that. So, somewhat useful, but far from practical :unsuresweetie:

A: This is kind of a "yes and no" question. In pony form they do have functional genitals, but as it is a macro (structural) change rather than a micro (biochemistry) change, they don't have the hormonal responses for arousal.

They also, obviously, wouldn't be fertile...


By the way, you really have to learn to use possessive on names ending on "s" :raritywink:

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By the way, you really have to learn to use possessive on names ending on "s"

Can you please give an example of where I've done this wrong? If you mean "Chrysalis Hive" I've already explained that this is not a possessive, it's a title.

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If you mean "Chrysalis Hive" I've already explained that this is not a possessive, it's a title.

Ah. It seems users don't get reply notifications unless you actually post your reply in the same chapter the comment was posted in. So I never saw your earlier replies when I commented on this last chapter.

So if you reply on comments, you should always first open the chapter in which the original comment was made, and reply from there. The only reason that doesn't apply to you here is because as author, you get notified of all comments on your story anyway :unsuresweetie:

4254817 That's weirdly broken... if you can't reply unless you're in the same chapter, then when I go to view the comment, it really should take me to the chapter.

4254824
Yup. Blame Knighty :facehoof:

The only reason I noticed you replied at all is because comments on the main story entry end up on the last chapter... so for the last chapter reply, it was in the same chapter as my comment.

4254338
Aheh, sorry. The reason why people repeat errors is usually because they apply grammar purely by feeling, without knowing the actual specific rules. From experience as editor, I know it's best to spell it out at least once :twilightblush:

(...especially since that's generally been the way I learned those things, on this very site :derpytongue2:)

4254878 Eh, I know you were being helpful. :twilightsmile: I have a bit of a blind spot about commas sometimes, in that I just don't tend to see most of my comma mistakes, even though I know perfectly well how they work. (And apparently neither do the folks who helped proof read this one!)

4255380 Yay! Glad you liked it. :pinkiehappy:

Beautiful story!:twilightsmile::heart::yay::pinkiehappy:
It's a masterpiece of Pony literature.
Plus the title shares half of my name (and the title of two songs by The Beatles...hehehe...beetles...hehehe..love bugs)!:pinkiehappy::heart::moustache::rainbowkiss:

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I So Totally Did! :twilightsmile:
I hope to do half as good as this with my own fanfics. Hey, would you believe me if I said I once had thoughts for doing a fanfic called Honey Pie?

4256218 Ha! That's funny. :twilightsmile: I have a habit of using songs to inspire my writing, or at least borrowing titles from songs.

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