• Published 11th Mar 2014
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F.A.T.E - kyuubi gear



In a far distant area called new port city. Six bronies: max, jack, Corey, Sam, dillon, and clayton. Will be chosen to be with there favorite mane six ponies, as they embark on an adventure that will change there lives.

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Comments ( 46 )

Lol, this story is bad.

4230622 :rainbowlaugh: I know and yet and I keep writing it for fun anyway :twilightsmile:

You have definitely re-defined what it means to be a good story. Well done.

4230622 I mean yeah it's bad, but nothing wrong with having a bit of fun now is there. After all it's just a story :twilightsmile:

4230636 after all, it's all just harmless fun

4230644

Absolutely.

But it's still bad.

you know, with everything iv seen in comments and the like to dislike ratio.....
im willing to give this story the benefit of the doubt.
starting tomorrow lol.

4233510 mhm, now as for the sequel. I will be taking a lot of time to get it done, mostly because of work this week. But I get the day off on my birthday on Sunday, so I'll have more time to get to work on the sequel. I already have 9 chapters done so far and I still need to work on chapter 10

4360186 yes, yes it is. Anyone wanna some popcorn and a front row seat?:rainbowlaugh::pinkiehappy:

4360186 then again the like/dislike ratio means totally crap to me, just as long as I have fun with my work. I could give a shit about the like/ dislike bar

4457887 I am good man I like the story can't wait for more :rainbowdetermined2:

4458250 I'm glad your having fun with it:twilightsmile:

4471578
No, it doesn't work like that. Because HUMANS DON'T HAVE ESTRUS CYCLES!
Also, that "syncing" you mentioned? Nothing but a theory.

4479505 you are correct, and there will be more gurren lagann references in F.A.T.E 2 and F.A.T.E 3. There will also be transformations as well, but will get to that latter.

4479491 ah to answer your question. Sadly no, dillon is not going to be the main character now that clayton is killed, he's just trying his best to be like him in his own way

4479505 oh yea, I do have another anime refrance that will be in F.A.T.E 6. But that's going to be a surprise, unless you can guess what it is. :raritywink:

4593243 ah ok, well I do have a story that was going to be made called F.A.T.E: origins, were I basically talk about the how the boys all became bronies and how they all met and became very close friends. I will also talk about how Lucy as well in the story, but like I said. I will work on that after I finish the other six stories to the sequel.

But thank you for pointing out about well everything :twilightblush: and once I get the series done and work on the prequel to this. I will surely let you look over it, if you want to.

4593243 but I understand why you wouldn't dare read the rest of it, and honestly that's fine. :twilightsmile:

5009265 Skype has been acting up lately and stuff...

YAY~

5010558 aw man really, that sucks

5010914
If only I could hear your succulent voice whispering in my ears.~

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Forget I said that. Also, how do you do the emotes on mobile?

5012166 hehe, it's fine. Well i don't think that your able to use emotes on mobile

5012299 in most cases, it is

5013391
Bucking StarBUCKS.
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See what I did there? Me niether~

4068465 Yo, I can try drawing them. Would take me a while but I could do it.

All I need is just descriptions of them and a few weeks to work on it. Maybe even a month or so. You know, because of school~

~Your Faithful Lover... Uh I mean Reader?

5018748 sure thing, that's fine with me.

5024148 K, I'll work on it once I get the descriptions.

5024817 alright, wait. Do you want there younger versions or there older versions?

4089404

WHAT? WHERE IS HE? WE MUST BAN HIM FOR BAN EVASION!

Sorry, I just fucking hate him.

5222084 thanks, and oh well. Just as long as I have fun writting is all that matters to me:twilightsmile:

5227510 its the best when what you have fun with is loved by others, and I love gurren lagan...but for the rest of the F.A.T.E. series (which I am excited to read) im asking for as much originality as possible, its odd reading a story that I feel I've already read (btw....giving Clayton Kamina Glasses was a bit...over the top...don't ya think? the similarities are enough as it is XD)

5231029 :twilightblush: sorry, I really do apologize for all of that. But I kinda have some bad news about the other stories that will come.

The first three will be on a gurren lagann like subject, then four and five will be on something different with as much originality as possaible. The fifth story will be like an attack on Titan like theme for the story. Again, I am really sorry for all the refances, and I really am working to do as much originally as i can. I'm glad you like the story and I hope that you'll like the others as well. And yea it was a bit over the top with Clayton having kamina's sunglasses XD

Again, I am truly sorry about this.

5744947 thanks and just changed the rating

5971318 :rainbowlaugh: I know, I had a odd time spelling it

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