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kyuubi gear
Always walk with your head held high and never give up for what you believe in. -my quote I am a very kind person and I am very happy in making new friends. Skype username is kyuubiXX
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Worst. Parents. Ever.
Meh, It could have been worse.
Interestiing. Please read what you are writing typing out loud and ask yourself does it sound grammatically correct. I like the idea but I kept getting sidetracked by the incorrect grammar and spelling and continuity. Like cutting him with a kayaks sure and he doesn't get jailed.
I can't get agood description of the characters. I mean I do see the name and stuff but I have no idea what hair color they have or eye color and so on. But it very good I must say
Hmmm a very good second chapter
4067487 like I said. I type way too fast on my notes on my iPhone.
4067632 well, Clayton has short black spiky hair, max has brown spiky hair, and dillon has a buzz cut. As for Corey, sam, and jack that is up to the readers imagination. Now I can put up a few more chapters if you all want me to.
4067632 also, someone did ask me to draw the characters, but my artwork is not up to par.
Awsome
I tried. But by Luna, I just can't read this anymore.
4087128 that's fine, I can understand why.
Found the new Theater Critic gaiz!
4089404 XD
4089356 meh like I said, it could have been worse
*Their. Please change that in the description, and remove all redundant wording. And please use proper sentence structure, and capitalize pronouns.
4099393 ah I see, *aheam* allow me to change that in the description.
4099393 also about the mistakes in the story I deeply apologize for them, but this is what I get for writing too fast on an iPhone. But as for the sequel I am taking my time.
4099548
'desorption'
... Are you doing this terrible writing on purpose then?
4099555
Ah, well, if you ever need an editor.
4099556 so sorry, I kinda have a habit of writing too fast
I really don't mean it I swear.
4099560 and thank you very much
4099592
Not a problem. You're perfectly free to shoot me a note sometime if you ever need proofreading. ~
4099614 *aheam* very well, again I am terribly sorry that I have made so many errors in my own story. Although I still hope that you'll still stick around for the ending. But if not that's alright as well.
4099625
Hey, don't beat yourself up. People make mistakes. And as you write, you learn (although I'm sure using an ipod doesn't help for accuracy.)
I will stick around for the ending, don't you worry. Just see if you can correct those errors sometime. It's easier on the eyes and makes comprehension much more enjoyable.
4099652 right I understand, it's not that it bothers me at all, I can take other peoples options on anything. I just shrug off the negative stuff and move on. I'm glad that your addressing the problems in my story, I'm happy that your being honest on the number of issues that are very wrong with this. And that to me is 20% better than some like or dislike.
I say this to everyone:
Always walk with your head held high and never give up for what you believe in.
I say my quote to everyone that I meet, because I know that even if there story is good or bad. I'll still be there to give it a shot, and be more than happy to see more from them.
Oh dear
I really have to stop going all 'motivation speech' all the time.
So sorry
4099668 You still seem self-conscious though in referring to yoursef, so I will still say to relax.
Motivational speeches are always great, and being in that mindset is very healthy this day and age. "Have no regrets, only experiences, and move forward."
Honest criticism is a good thing to do, in my opinion. So many people ask for it inherently by posting their stories up on this site, but don't receive it. And at the very least, productive or not, learning how to both deal out and handle criticism are good skills to learn. I'm trying to do it more often.
4099679 well I know that you'll do great. And as for being self-conscious, yea in a way I am bit but I'm working on it time and again.
Hmmm it's kinda funny really.
It's funny how I received so many reads on ponyfictionarcives and a bit on fanfic.net that everyone wanted a sequel, meh. The only reason I wrote this was because I was always tired of the writers on fanfic.net just stopped posting there stories. So I decided to make my own, and in over two years book one of F.A.T.E has over 29,506 reads on ponyfictionarcives. Hell I'm still surprised even to this day how many reads it has, and how many people that I have talked to say that this story inspired them and other stuff and how they wanted a sequel (which I had planed to do a year ago), even though I still get crap for that damn infamous chapter 14 (oh god all the hate mail I got for that damn chapter). But anyway I will work on my self-conscious more.
But I'm just happy that I get to write what I love.
I was onto Iris the WHOLE time Owx!!!!!
4102240 yea, just hope that the other chapters will be ok
4107637 *aheam* allow me to explain. You see the reason why I killed off Clayton was because that he was kinda in a small way the loyal motivater of the group. He was kind, loyal, selfless, always putting his friends and family first before himself. He was that kind of guy that you could respect and love. And his death (although it's gonna get real depressing right now), would spark the change on how much the group has grown and how strong they have become since his death. Now I did have in my original script that he would be gone for good.
But...the question is, did I go with the idea or not.
Don't ya just hate cliffhangers
But I still for the life of me will never understand how this one character of mine got such a huge amount of fans. No seriously, Clayton alone has so many damn fans it's ridiculous. And you can only imagine what they wanted to do me when chapter 14 came out.
So much hate mail that day......
I shall now post a video in honor of Clayton
4107958 XD now that made my night
4107973 true and yea, I really do need to look over this so I can look for any grammar mistakes
He's alive right? Please tell me he's not dead because he was my favorite.
4108880 I'm sorry buddy, but I can't really say
Is it wrong that I hate every single character in this fic?
4116930 meh I don't care, if you hate them then go on a head and hate them.
-he swung the katana around and broke a vase-...o.x....- he brushed the pieces under a rug and tossed the katana away hiding behind the couch-
......H-heat season??? O.x!!!!! Nonononononononononononononononononononononononooooooono DX
.........at least I didn't lose my eye to a katana.....I lost it to snow and rocks...meh....
4121302 hmm, looks like I'm gonna have to fix that chapter it seems.
*See downvotes in comment section*
Oh, that's never a good sign, let me just have a look at the stor-
Well, that's it.
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4122029 *shrugs* capitalizing the letters I'll do. As for the rest of the story, meh.
4121991 just a story no big deal really, true it's bunch of crap. But meh, nothing but a little harmless fun is all.