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*Their. Please change that in the description, and remove all redundant wording. And please use proper sentence structure, and capitalize pronouns.
4099393 ah I see, *aheam* allow me to change that in the description.
4099393 also about the mistakes in the story I deeply apologize for them, but this is what I get for writing too fast on an iPhone. But as for the sequel I am taking my time.
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'desorption'
... Are you doing this terrible writing on purpose then?
4099555
Ah, well, if you ever need an editor.
4099556 so sorry, I kinda have a habit of writing too fast I really don't mean it I swear.
4099560 and thank you very much
4099592
Not a problem. You're perfectly free to shoot me a note sometime if you ever need proofreading. ~
4099614 *aheam* very well, again I am terribly sorry that I have made so many errors in my own story. Although I still hope that you'll still stick around for the ending. But if not that's alright as well.
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Hey, don't beat yourself up. People make mistakes. And as you write, you learn (although I'm sure using an ipod doesn't help for accuracy.)
I will stick around for the ending, don't you worry. Just see if you can correct those errors sometime. It's easier on the eyes and makes comprehension much more enjoyable.
4099652 right I understand, it's not that it bothers me at all, I can take other peoples options on anything. I just shrug off the negative stuff and move on. I'm glad that your addressing the problems in my story, I'm happy that your being honest on the number of issues that are very wrong with this. And that to me is 20% better than some like or dislike.
I say this to everyone:
Always walk with your head held high and never give up for what you believe in.
I say my quote to everyone that I meet, because I know that even if there story is good or bad. I'll still be there to give it a shot, and be more than happy to see more from them.
Oh dear
I really have to stop going all 'motivation speech' all the time.
So sorry
4099668 You still seem self-conscious though in referring to yoursef, so I will still say to relax.
Motivational speeches are always great, and being in that mindset is very healthy this day and age. "Have no regrets, only experiences, and move forward."
Honest criticism is a good thing to do, in my opinion. So many people ask for it inherently by posting their stories up on this site, but don't receive it. And at the very least, productive or not, learning how to both deal out and handle criticism are good skills to learn. I'm trying to do it more often.