Ponyville's resident human attempts to adjust to living with Celestia as his roommate while also avoiding Princess Twilight's crazy romantic overtures.
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Fantastic!
The suspense, the romance, the humor and the action...Brrr, I couldn't have done it better myself!
Next chapter soon please, this story is a real gem
The love I feelz for and from this story is over powering!!!!
No crazy bitch twilight's love doesn't count
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Wow, I never expected to see you in the wilderness that is another story.
Very few stories leave me not craving, but crazy for more.
DUDE. Yours does.
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Dude, be glad he's just revising this story. When he first wrote this back on /mlp/, we had to wait for weeks.WEEKS. or what felt like weeks
Dammit, I need more!
Moooore!
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Also, very few stories manage to make me this MAD at a character. Twilight deserves a fate worse than death.
And by the way, why didn't they deal with Twilight as she was deprived of magic?
... I know, I'm a dirty fighter.
if it were me i'd have probably snapped her neck by now. but thats just me. kudos author, keep it up.
Why does this line frighten me so much?
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Spike's actually chilling in Canterlot, hanging out with his old friends and having the castle chefs bring him gems for breakfast lunch and dinner. I originally had him planned to assist Twilight but realized he's way too smart (and too used to her psychotic episodes) to go along with her BS, so he doesn't make an appearance in this story.
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Yeah, the average wait for a chapter back then was about 3 weeks. But you guys'll be getting one every few days until the story's finished. Yay!
That was just pure epicness.
I love this story. Bravo and good work.
Finally they got that out there. Who knew how long they'd beat around the bush about their feelings.
Also wow, Rarity. Twilight being insane I can see, but Rarity's trying to help Twilight rape a dude... eternally.
That sound... I know that sound.
"All units to battlestations!"
__Music__
*Foe Twilight Appears!*
*Celestia uses Distract! It's super effective!*
*Captain uses Silent Attack Order!*
*Pinkie uses Pinkie Cannon!*
*Big Mac uses Applebuck!*
*Applejack uses Applebuck!*
*Applebloom uses Frying Pan!*
*Foe Twilight has fainted!*
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"Toss 'er overboard!"
The story is really consistent with 'tons of action scenes that gives a lot of insight into what is happening. Though the story suffers from Anon being someone which makes him unique, this can easly be repaired by givin him a name. I love the story keep it up.
"Your abilities have grown immensely, my faithful student. But it also does my heart good to see that you remember the basics of what I taught... even the flaws."
At any rate, I'm expecting Celestia to utterly DESTROY Twilight in the political arena here, because lets face it, Twilight has spent most of her reign running about chasing after human dick instead of actually running her nation. And one doesn't rule a nation solo for a thousand years without building up quite the stock of political favors.
awwww anon and celestia are becoming more then friends!
Everyone, I bring an important message, listen to what I have to say:
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I'd prefer her dead though...
Oh, Rarity. I would have thought you of all ponies would recognize irrational insanity and being under duress, would take your defeat with more grace.
Reading this fic Always brings a smile to my face.
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4023877 I guess you could say you were, kitten out of your game!
4023345 Nive profile pic sir :)
4024063 O SHIT!!!! it just got real.
This chapter was so action packed!
The thing I love most about this story is that you are descriptive, but not overly so. You leave enough unsaid that it allows the reader to picture it in their mind!
Great work as always!!!!
The DESTRUCTION made this chapter a hoot to read. The rest of the chapter was excellent to.
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4chan is were this fandom originated, if not for /co/ giving the show a shot this site would not exist and you would not have made a fool of yourself.
You know this fic could like double in lenght if we found out after twight was defeated that at some point an emotional parasite was planted on twilight like nightmare moon but instead of feeding on jelousy and lonlyness it fed on love and lust and celly and anon have to find out the 5 W's about it
This is when discord comes into play because to keep him down, there must be element and harmony, which there is none of. Also, I find it weird that cadence or shining hasn't gotten word of this or the sparkle family. Fluttershy wouldn't stand up for this assholeness just as applejack didn't. And the charges are racking up against spergle, I'm surprised that there aren't protestors or insurrectionists. The townspeople must be concerned to some degree that their new princess is making wrongful decrees, attacking citizens, destroying property and endangering lives in general. Chop her fucking head off and carry it through town.
4023533 It's good to know that at least Spike knows not to encourage twilight.
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Actually, you'd be surprised. Ponyville is where most of the craziness that would've been observed by any bystanders took place, and since Twilight (and sometimes her friends) has nearly destroyed the town on multiple occasions in the past they're sort of used to this kind of stuff by now. In any other place, they'd be freaking out, but explosions and magical purple pony shenanigans are just another Tuesday for Ponyville ponies.
As far as what the other characters are up to, that'll be revealed shortly.
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Damn, you got me! I laughed out loud at this, good show.
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You made an obviously false statement.
Your statement is demonstrably false, the fandom would not exist if not for 4chan, this story and enumerable others would not exist if not for 4chan and there is a non-zero chance that this writer (who if you must know is a well regarded writefag for AiE) would not be writing if not for 4chan
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So you assume that because I don't cloak my words in expiates and insults I can't possibly be associated with 4chan? Let me debacle you of this notion.
/mlp/ for life motherfucker.
In short; you continue to make yourself the fool with your baseless notions and ill-thought-out opinions.
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Let it go man. It's clear that this guy is determined to hate no matter what anyone says.
*butthole clenching intensifies*
4025639 I think Ponyville is home to a Hellmouth.
Anyway, thank you for writing this. It's good to see there are writers who can actually cultivate a relationship between characters instead of just "I LIEK YOU. SEXXORZ PLS. KTHXBAI". Whether the love becomes romantic or remains platonic, you can tell its there, and I earnestly want to see what becomes of it.
I'll admit, when I first saw this story, I was like... "meh, sounds interesting." Then I started to read it.
HOLY SHIT, I love this story! I can't even begin to describe just how much I love reading this story.
Also, Twilight?
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Originally she was... likable, if a bit misguided, but this... JESUS TAP-DANCING CHRIST, I want to STRANGLE her!
Kinda surprised no one has called in cadence to prove/disprove twilights obsession as 'love'. I mean, she is the princess of love and all that...
Well, this was a nice thing to have to unwind with over the weekend after a very tiring and trying work week. Ah was glad to get this one more chapter to read before Monday rolled around again and look forward to reading whatever gets uploaded by the following weekend as Ah'm pretty sure Ah won't get to read them till then.
So let's see, T-Sparks is totally batshit crazy which is actually pretty on key for someone that totally can't deal with unrequited love and just happens to have the powers possible to "coerce" someone to her viewpoint. That is something you've nailed perfectly with this, of that Ah can assure you!
N-not because Ah've gone that crazy, mind you, but just because Ah've dealt with that type of love before and am well aware one without a strong mind can go bonkers because of it. Heh...
Of course, that makes her really easy to hate for being a total....ugh, it's so bad Ah can't even think of a proper word. Psychotic works but it doesn't seem strong enough....and seriously, why is it AJ was the only one that had the apples to tell her friend she was being ridiculous? Ah can only imagine if Flutters, Rares, and the others had done the same she probably wouldn't have come close to going this far off the deep end. Though to be fair, at this point she's so far off the deep end she's circled back down to the shallows. Haha...but seriously, they aren't exactly being good friends but encouraging something they know isn't right.
I loved I Dream of Luna and Ah'm totally digging this one too and can't wait to see where the journey takes us now that they're on the spooky and mysterious island of untold horrors. Hahaha.
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Actually dude, Ah had the same thought mahself once Ah read that she wasn't able to cast any magic.
Why didn't somepony there just charge her and then deck her punk ass right in the muzzle?
Ah know Ah would've if Ah'd been put through any of what she's put our motley crew of heroes through.
Anon Ah get, he was busy making sure they're crash-landing was as safe as possible, but seriously? Nopony else there thought to just charge and mercilessly beat the ever-loving crap outta her? Maybe Ah can see Mac not hitting a lady, but come on! Cellie is like twice her height. One well placed smack with a hoof from her and T-Sparks would've gone down like a sack of over-ripe apples.
And ah don't agree, it's not dirty fighting like you said; rather, it's seizing the opportunity of when yer opponent is foolish enough to think they are untouchable and doesn't realize their guard is completely down leaving them vulnerable to your wrath. With someone like psycho T-Sparks, there is no fair fighting...which is why Ah can't wait to see her finally get taken down at the end of this delightful ride!
This has actually been an extremely enjoyable fic for me, haha. I love the mixture of seriousness and, well, not--as well as the mix of sweet and just absurd moments.
I don't know, it strikes a great balance for me.
Awesome, awesome work.
Also I love seeing a Celestia pairing that actually comes off quite well.
I had the good fortunate to happenstance upon this story when hunting down more questionable materials for delightfully unsavory purposes. I am eternally grateful I didn't merely shuffle this off into my Read Later list as this has easily become my favorite horse story I've read over the years. Just.... nothing I could say can bring justice to how absolutely glorious this story is, and the speed it's coming out at is extraordinary. I eagerly await future installments with bated breathe, comrade.
Still no pressure. Would be crushed if this epic simply poofed before reaching its fantastic conclusion. I cheer for you Horsey Word Man! Bring justice to the unkempt usurper!
I want twilight burned alive her horn chopped off and her family watches and smiles
:)
Would it be wrong for me too say how much I hate THIS version of twilight and how I wish for her to suffer as she cause so much pain and drama to poor anon? And then repeatedly stabbing her in the eyes and head of her being so crazy with a HUGE obsession. And then give a hard bitch slap, again repeatedly to rainbow, rare, but give a small tiny slap with a finger to Fluttershy since she's isn't like the others.
So yeah, is it still wrong for me to feel this way?
Btw this is good story making. I approve. Honestly it's a bit of a shame to see sparkle like this, but well this does sort of happen. When you thrust power to a novice when it come to royalty. If I was training someone to take the throne, I would at least make sure that they don't go mad with power, and a hands on experience, like a intern. But with loads of rules and regulations.
How do you have the uncanny ability to turn seemingly random fuckery into a full-fledged plotline? It quite honestly baffles me.
Props to you, and I look forward to the action-packed ending soon to come, I'm sure.
I honestly thought this was some sort of college fic... I'm glad I'm wrong.
This is absolutely ridiculous. Prodigiously fantastic. And positively one of the best things I ever read...
And I was thinking of this before I read the airship battle. I was ready for a heartwarming, crack like slice of life fic... not an epic adventure!
Oh well, I'll enjoy it nonetheless. Also, I tend to favorite only complete stories. As in I love this immensely and never want to take my eyes off of it ever.
While I find the other commenters reactions to be rather violent and uncalled for, which confused me, learning that this story was originally from 4chan suddenly made everything make sense.
But onto my thoughts: Torture really isn't warranted for Twilight here. She hasn't been malicious, causing pain and suffering to cause pain and suffering. She's simply been a bumbling idiot that is in denial and refuses to get her hormones in check. But she showed ample evidence of this before she was given half control of a nation with political favor.
Am I the only one here considering the fact that Celestia was pretty damn irresponsible with practically shoving her position to the nearest sucker? She's insistant with saying she truly thought Twilight was ready, but the scenes in the story where this is explained, she still gives off a constant vibe that her main thought was GTFO ASAP!
Disclaimer: I'm enjoying the hell out of this story, and I don't really give much thought for Celestia's contribution to the issue. Twilight is still acountqble for her irresponsibility.
4023729 I don't see how Celestia is going to pull off a successful gut punch...
In this case, perhaps it should be "speak of the devil and she shall appear.