Good job in making me start to hate Twilight in this story.

This was just.... AWESOME! But I now hate twilight in this one. Just... Evil. I think discords been giving her lessons

Maaan...

Why don't you go knife Twi's friends already?

And then knife yourself a couple times for good measure... Liberty or Death!

I was starting to think that Anon would need to make another journey by himself with the airship, with the thoughts of revenge fueling him on after Celestia's sacrifice. But it's nice to see all the same that Cel is fine. Now they can GTFO of Equestria together, explore the world. Find a way to get Cel's I'll-informed decision righted.

I genuinely have no idea where the story is going to go. By god, I look forward to what happens next, more than ever!

What I don't get is wtf IS Luna doing? Also, why isn't there a threat of killing himself, etc. Liberty or death as someone pointed out.
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Also, you're only NOW hating her?

4017317 Because anyone who has actually had personal experience with suicide knows better than to half-assedly consider it as a choice. You can say you'll do this or that because "you don't fear death" or "you'd rather die than be trapped", but when it comes down to it, most will fight instead of just going "lol, I kill muhself". If there are multiple options, suicide is the easy way out.

As for what Luna's been up to... chances are she's been incapacitated in some fashion.

At the rate Twilight is going, the Nightmare can't be too far behind.

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She is actually worse than any villain that I can think of.

I suppose Luna is busy doing whatever she was doing during the Changeling invasion...

Ponies + Airships = So much win it hurts!

PRAISE THE SUN!
Also, DEATH TO THE PURPLE MENICE!

Anyway, when you said invisible barrier, how would he know it was an barrier? For all he knew it could be nature being Celestia's bitch.

On another note: I F@CKING LOVE YOU, MAN! THIS STORY IS SO AWESOME, THE AWESOME METER'S CHARD IS OVER 9000!!!!!!!!

Damn, Twilight sure goes from "hopeless stalker" to "batshit crazy, lust-driven super villain" real quick.

I want to behead Twilight Sparkle.

Twilight is such an adorkable spazz, even batshit crazy, she's still somewhat logical.

I truly adore this story. Playful Celestia is so funny to imagine and seeing you take your time to develop their relationship makes everything so much better. Yeah i'm laying the ham so thick, you could feed the small village with it for a week, but i think both your Anon stories deserve as much.

I want this to happen to Twilight.
g-ecx.images-amazon.com/images/G/01/dvd_FUN_Broly/DBZ7_Large.jpg by broly and then her head blown off with a shotgun by me. This is the only way I can express my hate for Twilight. Still great story

For some reason this line “Why? What's the problem? I know I'm not built like one of your Earth horses but I'm not as fragile as I look!” made me think this up.

"Draw me like one of your Earth Horses!"

Well, this is interesting?
Still a few more pages to read before I catch up with the most current chapter.
Wonder where Luna is. Ether she's incapacitated by Twilight or Celestia had done a great mistake of releasing her from the moon seeing as Luna doesn't seem to even bother to try to stop Twilight or save her sister.
Also nice job on bat shit crazy purple princess.
AJ as usual is the only reasonable pony amongst the group. Glad to see that at least one of the mares is brave enough to stand up to the crazy nut with the crown.
Would be nice to see an input from Shining about the entire situation and even more so from Cadance.

Wow, clones or not, this turned super dark in a hurry...

Wow well played Twilight I'll give you that. Also as the other comments have pointed out I can't help but wonder what Luna is doing. Maybe she approves of this lol.

Okay, really. THAT WAS THE MORAL EVENT HORIZON. Twilight Sparkle, in this fanfic, is forever branded as a Complete Monster.

Forget wimpy-ass chewouts. I want Anon to break her snout with his fists and rip her fucking eyes out with his thumbs when she's not expecting it. I'm not exaggerating. I want EXACTLY THAT to happen, rating change to Mature and all.

4017617 She's way past that point.

4039357 Agreed.

Huh. Who would have thought that Twi is going to go all "Nightmare" not because of death of her friends(when she is immortall and what-not) but because of her own vagoo horniness which damaged her huge brain.

AJ, only pony from mane 6 who isn't retarded.

I like this story, and I faved it but I can't help it but.... well. Story seems a little unequal(not sure if I should use this word in this context). From one hand we have mad Twilight (I can handle it, mental ilness can be caused with no aparrent reason and go batshit fast) but I can't fathom why even single pony from mane 6 is willing to asist her in this mad quest. Even before she started building Rape Dome they should turn their backs on her.

One more thing. Where is Spike?

Fuck Twilight. Manly tears were almost shed. Almost. That was fucking awesome, the letter and everything.

Congratulations, you have made me despise my favourite pony beyond all else.

4031081 i say call in the liberation fleet and the space marrians i even think the chaos heritcs want in on it too

4069748 the anonymous space marine chapter reporting for duty.

I am hating Twilight more and more as I read the chapters. I never really like her to begin with anyway. Yay Celestia!
Liked the story.

Fken hell Twilight... turn your friends into terrorists why don't you?

twily is going all hal 9000, dawg...shit aint ballin'

I knew Twilight was gonna do something Crazy but holy sh@t!
Anon and Celestia need to take that ship to Griffin territory for their own safety.
I really hope Luna just goes full badass and saves Celly and Anon.

simply awesome

By the gods, Twilight's really showing her yandere side...

Ah out of all the stories I've read none get me so emotional, by that I mean I get pissed off at Twilight and scream at my phone how much of a cunt she is.

WHEN ARE THEY GONNA KISS DAMN IT i'm impatient as hell but come on

Cels letter never fails to bring me to tears, such a strong friendship between two people is beautiful. Wow that was really sappy but this is one of them thoughs amazingly crafted stories that keep me on this site. This is easly one of my top favorites.

4027359 At this point she doesn't deserve such a merciful death.

There's a flash from her horn that’s so bright you can see it through your eyelids

Second read through, and I'm just now realizing that Celestia used Solar Flare. I'm ashamed to call myself a DBZ fan...

Hey, can I kill autismo spergle now? I'll make it look like an accident and then I can syphon her dead body's magic to restore celestia's.
and then eat the meat off her bones.

Twi hasn't learned not to poke the human, yet. Now she's going to learn the hard way why we're the apex-survivors of planet Earth - because everything that screws with us dies.

I got one thing to say before I go to the next chapter...

Twilight is INSANE

This is easily one of the best, and a personal favorite story so far.

5326141 Humanity our greatest strengths will always be our greatest weakness and that is why humanity is badass.

I always hatred twilight. Least favorite pony on the show. This isn't much an escalation on that.

Or it wasn't, at least.

Twilight. You monster.

4672242 twilight, meet my bestie... Tom. He is the owner of 83.5% of all the netherworld, he thinks that you have committed so many sins that you deserve, in order: * pulls out flaming scroll*
1.396 years in the halls of torture
2. 46288 years in the molten lands of greed
3.826449 years in the wastes of limbo
4.and finally the worst punishment of them all...dinner with him, his wife and his in-laws.
I agree with three of them
SEE YOU IN HELL BITCH

“Now, from what you've said, neither of us have really done this before, but it can't be too difficult. I promise I'll go slowly until we're both better accustomed to it. You have nothing to fear, and if worse comes to worse the snow will help cushion your fall...”

... You know what you did.

My little sister must be really, really mad with me.

I think by now we can infer that Twilight has probably done something to her.

I think readers' reactions to Twilight says good things for any future human clone rights. Though, I doubt anything more than organs and bones will be cloned in the future. By the time we get that advanced, it'd still be cheaper to just build battle droids.

After that, I'll be coming to collect you

At which point he will play along for a little while and then kill you when your back is turned. Damn the consequences.

Awwww man, Twilight holy shit. You've stooped to using explosive clones?
Holy shit you've gone off the deep end... several chapters ago.

Awesome work on this once again dude, shit's gettin' real!
MUST HUG SOMETHING!
*grabs bear*

Late comment is late compared to the chapter date but......

5326141 ... And everything else.