Ponyville's resident human attempts to adjust to living with Celestia as his roommate while also avoiding Princess Twilight's crazy romantic overtures.
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Stop with these updates damnit!
I've no time to read it and you've dumped almost 70k words in 2 days on me
Translation:
Keep going and don't slow down.
I you so much for these updates.
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Well then, initially, she's delusional enough to not care if the love is real or not. Then later, she wanes him off the spell until she thinks he really does love her. I dunno, I just really want to see a story where the crazy villain wins. Maybe I'll just have to write one myself...
Will there be a third chapter today? Because I totally want a third chapter today.
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Yes, the final chapter and epilogue will be up in a few hours.
There are no brakes on this train.
Damn dude. I gotta go to work tomorrow and your updates aren't helping on the sleep department!
Author, stahp- I can't read all these horse words!
I was supposed to do homework today. I haven't even eaten yet- I'm gonna starve catching up on this fic.
Seemingly infinite amounts of information? Much of which is false? Accessed by a relatively small object? By god, it's the internet! Everypony run!
This is a great story, you are my new favorite author.
woooooooo! now i feel bad for celestia and anon.
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Don't listen to the gatekeeper. Keep 'em coming! I like these updates. I want to know what happens :P Also, there are way too many cliffhangers in this, Mr. "and it all goes white."
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"Sir, I'm afraid you've gone mad with power"
"Of course I have, have you ever tried going mad without power? Its boring, nobody listens to you."
Hot diggidy damn... I hope you realize we'll be expecting you to finish this soon with two days straight of double updates...
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I assume from the delicious irony?
4057608 Sincerely hoping there's gonna be a sequel of some sort.
4057608 Yes. Just... yes.
woooo new chaps... need more feed the beast
4057672 Don't feel so bad yet. The author didn't say that he gave her the stone only that he held it out to her and the world went white which was hopefully from luna's spell.
There's a couple of options i'm hoping happens but i'll keep them to myself for now since he said that updates will be up soon.
4057608 I Love you So so much.
4057516 Well rarity is so blinded by her own fantasies and delusions that i doubt she even knows the current situation or even cares to find out about it.
Rainbow is basically a dumbass being blinded by her loyalty to the point that twilight's happiness is the only thing she cares about atm.
Fluttershy is.... well fluttershy or to reiterate fluttershy is anonverse fluttershy and is somewhat unhinged though she hides it well here.
4057065 Yes, punishment in the form of a crowbar beating. It actually builds surprising amounts of character to those who survive and in some rare cases an unfounded and unhealthy fear of people wielding crowbars.
I feel the need to quote Uncle Iroh here.
"She's crazy, and she needs to go down."
Hot damn... These chapters have been simply badass.
and listening to this made it all the more epic.
Someone needs to make an animation of this battle.
Everyone give a slow clap for Princess Luna, who apparently is so busy being bitchy at her sister that she fails to even think that the source of the darkness she was worried about might be the other full alicorn that's been going nutso this entire time, and for failing to notice the giant magical Death Star being built in the middle of Canterlot.
Your update speed is ludicrous.
I can't really see twilight bouncing back to her previous personality after investing this much time and effort into chasing anon.
Forgive my simple,brutal mindset,But i'd have just killed the bitch in as quick a matter possible,Even if it did involve kamikazi'ing
4058138 Thats it?....Jeez,I can do that without even pumping the damn thing again.
Awwwww, Poor Celly.
Great, now instead of going to sleep i'll be waiting for the last chapter. By the way grats this is one of the best stories i read
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Holy crap. I almost can't handle all this awesome.
YOU ARE EVIL!!
I Cant Read This Fast and I need to Work tomorrow.
I don´t say this often but
STOP THE UPDATES!!!
And you are AWESOME
Bad ass as fuck battle, shame Twilight is a crazy bitch. She cheated with those fucking ghosts. I pity her, I really do. Death Star piece of shit, can't it just burn... At least she isn't going all Darth Vader and shit, even though she has that fucking shard which is all evil and shit. Fuckin' Dark magic...
Ah. Kinda sad the sphere is solid. It'll be nice if this was freaky thingie like one angel from Evangelion rebuild. Yes, Ramiel.
Your FFIV fanboyism is showing. (And, from the wayshrines, soulgems and evil floating crystals, I'm guessing a Dawnguard fan too).
At any rate, If I didn't love Lulu before (her being a bit of a bitch this story, notwithstanding) I would now.
SI VIS PACEM PARA BELLUM
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Forgive me but sometimes I must be a smartass
If the "ship" twilight is piolting is made out of stone then the barrier would be on a thin layer of water because stone is flat and water sometimes stays on the surface if this were to be true the water would freeze at such altitude and this making the ship unable to attack because the lighting would connect to the water and shock twilight so if she were to be standing on it she would floating witch means she would have to use magic to be in control of it and if she were inside the ship there would be no air and she would be forced to leave also the ghosts if they are able to be projected then that would mean there is either a portal like gun the forces them to go in that direction or there is a material that they can't go though so in that if luna was able to cover the ships main points with it she would be invincealbe to the attack
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Well, that's disappointing to see Luna was so blinded by everything else she ended up as dumb as the rest of them. Again, though, Ah imagine it probably has to do with her mindset still not fully catching up to the current times. Doesn't really excuse Lunes acting that way though.
Man, Ah don't know if anything will be an appropriate punishment for Psycho-Sparks at this point...she's just...gone so far off the meter we're in uncharted terrortory here.
...and yeah, that misspelling is on purpose.
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Damnit Spergle!
Look, I hate to be that guy but
What does that even mean? Do you even know what being Autistic means?
Oh! If this Anon is green 4chan anon that might make sense that he is using "autism" as an insult.
All I could think of was Skies of Arcadia and "MOON CANNON FIRE!"
Ok, Luna is pretty awesome here.
You know? Why not try Harem from the first place? maybe they will not cause freaking chaos.
Progenitors.... Harbinger... Twilight being controlled by the shard.
I'm seeing a reference here. Or am I wrong? But I see a certain Saren, the Protheans, ans Harbinger...
By the way, this story, alhough somewhat random at times, is one od the BEST advenure stories i've read!
Holy fuck... that is some straight up legit dark focre magic right there man...
scary.
NUUUUUUU, Anon, whatcha up to boi?
And poor Celly ;w;
Nice job
I currently hate myself for two reasons due to this story.
1. I noticed something, completely weird, and yet relevant at the same time.
2. I failed to notice it sooner.
Anything pertaining to this fic will have an A before them. Anything pertaining to the other series will have a B.
A. "The Progenitors that came before ponykind."
B. "The Precursors that came before humankind."
A. "The great weapons they built."
B. "The great weapons they built."
A. The fact that seemingly nice ponies are being corrupted by an ancient artifact.
B. The fact that seemingly nice people are being corrupted by an ancient artifact.
Anybody notice any relevance? I'll give you a hint. It is a video-game series.
One of the two main characters fell into Dark Eco and became a Precursor due to it...
THAT'S RIGHT!
JAK AND DAXTER FOR THE WIN!
I frequently wonder pretty much the same thing. When Celestia sends them into odd and dangerous situations, (EX: Discord or liberating the Crystal Empire) why doesn't Celestia send a least a squad of soldiers along? A soldier for each of them to pair up with (would be funny to see Fluttershy's soldier try to take direction from her but she is too passive to ask/tell him to do anything, that he is at a loss of what to do when the two are separated from the others) when they are in dicey situations.
At least a combat medic!!
Alternatively, why didn't Celestia tell the soldiers at the wedding ceremony to go with the girls, or why didn't a group of them go to join the girls?! The battle royale with the Changelings would have been a bit more epic with soldiers in the fray!
Then again, the show is about six women being tough, independent, and taking shit from anyone when the country is at stake.
Also, Faust is a bit of a feminist. (Nothing wrong with that)
LMAO!!
Oh Luna, this is why we love you! (Maybe not so much in this story, but as a character in MLP:FiM....Oh you guys/gals know what I mean!)
God DAMN, I love my Versa!
Holy shit do I love this story one of the best ones I've read in quite a while
I got my own ships to compare twilights “Ship”. Allow me to introduce you all to the USS Montana, IJN Yamato, and SDF Olympus mons. Her flying building isn’t going to be able to stand up to 16 inch battleship shells or anti ship missiles; If all else fails, I’ve got one last trick up my sleeve that hasn’t failed me yet, the FSPAR torch. A weapon capable of steam rolling entire ship fleets on its own without support. It fires a beam of energy so powerful, it has more in a single shot then the sun has put out in its life span. Twilight can’t stop the Olympus if it fires, thats for sure.
I wonder if Twilight gwt sebt to Tarterus after getting her horn removed...
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Considering her ship took 2 blasts from a weapon capable of destroying mountains, yeaaaah think your fancy ships aint gonna do much there my boy lol