Ponyville's resident human attempts to adjust to living with Celestia as his roommate while also avoiding Princess Twilight's crazy romantic overtures.
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Literally perfect timing.
God damn...
Wow, that's three out of three for those predictions I made a few chapters ago. 1. That Celestia had planned to use an orb on Anon. 2. That there was a second orb. And 3. Pinkie was Luna's agent.
WWWWWHHHHHHHHAAAAAAAAAAAAAAATT!?!?!?!?~!?!?!?!?!?~?~?!?!?!?!?!?!?~>?!?!?!@?!?!?
Bloody funny as always and fucking brilliant too. I wonder what kind of plans they have for the future... And the Mane Six are going to Equus... I think that's what it's called... Awesome! Let's hope Anon gets himself an orb too, so he can be with Celestia for ever and ever... They can also double date with Luna if Discord goes through with his plan. How fun. She seemed to like the Anon in the other story, so why not? Bah ha ha ha, would definitely be fucking something.
Your musical accompaniments in this story have been very good.
When I listened to this as I initially read the story I was surprised at how well it followed with my reading pace.
Then I went back to reread it at the music starts, and I really felt the emotions from the prose and the song combine.
Ascension/Apotheosis indeed.
Very well done. My thanks for you sharing this with us.
Why isn't twilight dead.....she needs to go......SHE MUST DIE
4060427 The shard drove her nuts. No shard, no crazy Twilight.
.................. So this chapter gave me feels, and shivers, and made me jizz my pants out of how awesome it was.......
FAN-GASMS! SO MANY FAN-GASMS!
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GAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAA! MY BRAIN! MY TINY, RAINBOW COLORED BRAIN!
I am not haunting, I am spooking. This is haaaaauuuuunting!
EPIC, just EEEEEEEEEEPIIIIIIIIIIIIIC
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Best. Fucking. Story. Ever. (even if I have lost sleep reading this)
Holy God that was fucking AMAZING!!!
Makin bacon.
This story was alot like an anime in a way. In the beginning it was light-hearted, Funny, And unserious. but as the story progressed it became much more serious. but you still sprinkled a bit of comedy into it. Bravo!
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Heh. Funny.
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I have to admit, I was loathe to continue reading around chapter ten. I couldn't see any way for him to escape his inevitable servitude.
And yet you not only let him escape, you did it with style. Good for you.
But what's stopping Celestia, Twilight and Luna from sending the other five elements and Anon to collect six more Orbs, to be used amongst themselves - eternal Anon, Alicorn Element Bearers. Cower in terror, Discord!
it took me so bucking long to finish READING this chapter...
I like this story!
That was a good two hours well spent.
Omg reading Celestia's apotheosis coupled with the music was heart wrenching.
So many tears,
I love your writing, some of the best ive had the pleasure to read.
I dearly hope you have more in the works.
Wow this story is just amazing. Dammed discord is always the cause of human teleportation right next to twilight. I'm glad to see everything worked out. Twilight got a slap in the hand though. Sure she can't use magic for the time being but she's still op. So sad I'm near the end
hmpf... in hind sight... I have the suspicion that the 'Dark Star' is the crystallization of the arc force of Corruption,... neither evil nor lying, simply showing what would be your perfect path to corruption.
So fore the 'Dark Star' would be a far greater trial and if you are strong enough it would be a power far beyond mortal imagination.
And it would match perfectly the theme of its assumed makers; "Hide the greatest power right in plain sight, showing the greatest trial and greatest power in the previous level of ascensions trials, with giving only the slightest of hints of its true nature."
As far as I can conclude; the "Dark Star" has no true intention, no real goal, even so if it seams to have somewhat of a consciousness of its own.
The entire 'letting the weak fall in there corruption' thing seems for me more like the Stars way to call out to the world "Hey, here waits something, something important, something of great power, but as it is with all such things, if you are to weak, you will be shredded to pieces!"
If someone would be able to claim this force for them self without falling for its endless temptation you would be a real clairvoyant like "all that is and can be, is in my sight." and so fore ultimately indomitable if you learn how to understand the powers of corruption and have understood to overcome its temptation.
But also it would show you the world throw "colored glasses" it would taint your perspective in order to surpass the cosmic law of the gauss blur.
btw, that explains why all think the "dark star" 'lyes' to them in showing them the future and the way to accomplish there goals, its not true, the dark star needs to bend the rules of reality in order to show them that, and they simply fail the true trial of will and understanding.
Of cause you would need to be immortal first in order to gain the understanding and will for it and than accept that you need to give your powers up in order to gain access to the star and accept that you would need to become seen as evil in order to get the star from the island and probably only than you will be able to absorb its power.
I guess in order to do so you would need a fully charged orb of ascension and then give it willingly through the portal to the star to gain in exchange, an tainted orb or something like that... but here we venture in total random guessing already...
anyhoofs... here we are again... that is what happens if I'm too captured up with an story and can't get enough with it AND find some strange oddity in it concerning ... well... something seen as evil or bad or lying... there is no such thing... evil does not exists like so may fail to see it, Evil and Good are fractions, sides you can choose to follow, what the most believe Evil and Good are is in truth bad intend and good intend nothing more, "Even the devil, the Lord of all thing evil, holds good intend towards the world[...]"
...*arg*...
ME-> *ramble ramble ramble* man... I sure get old...
P.S. It took me far to long to finally read this story~
I love it ^^
Thank you Discord, you summed up my thoughts perfectly. While this is story is very entertaining at times and even touching at some points.
All the comedic moments make it hard to take it seriously (RapeDom? seriously?), and it's very cheesy especially in this chapter.
And I got bored after reading 1/4 of this chapter at just skipped to the happy ending where everything is good and happy, and filled with sunshine and rainbows!
My rating of the fanfic:
It was ok
9/10
~BearGlitch
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Lol
9/10 is ok apparently.
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10/10
Meh.
Oh my god... I feel so bad for Luna of all she lost, but find it funny of the bullshit maneuver that was pulled.
10/10 good fic.
Non-non is a friggin saint. I don't know if I could forgive Twilight for all of that, ever, let alone so quickly.
That said, there were so many tears of happiness! Bravo!
4647367 your about as bad as IGN hehe.
Ahh, the dear and acclaimed fictions of this fandom tend to amaze all of us, including me, in many ways we never expect; let alone be for better or for worse. Many of these stories affect our mind, soul and pants-- In ways I rather not speak about with cloppers-- several times. You just gave me a heart-warming story and upcoming, happy thoughts about the Sunbutt horse. In a lovey-dovey way, mind you.
You sir, have given me a profound and really powerful attraction towards Celestia with this masterpiece. I thank thee and thanks for this lovely story.
Also, just so you know, I read this fic twice. Ta-Ta~!
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I don't give a fuck if twilight was possessed by Satan. She built a fucking RAPE DOME abd she doesn't evenget a slap on the wrist.
fuck this story.
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I don't think horse have wrists
Finally.... the battle is done and everyone's made up, more or less.
I'M SO HAPPY! ='D''
let's all hug and eat doritos.
Awesome job man! Now let us see what happens next!
Finally.... the battle is done and everyone's made up, more or less.
I'M SO HAPPY! ='D''
let's all hug and eat doritos.
Awesome job man! Now let us see what happens next!
Ow. Someone. Please. Please help me. My feels.
That (completely true) nonsense aside, I loved this chapter perhaps more than any others. The ending was amazing, to say the last. Oh, and it is so amazing, I will probably be downloading it, but I cannot state how much I love the musical accompaniment. I literally just did nothing but read your story nonstop for 19 hours, and I still have the epilogue and two bonus chapters.
To the guy who said "literally perfect timing." As soon as I pressed "Post Comment" on my previous comment, the final note of the music played.
The epic airship combat, touching romance, hilarious fighting between Rarity and Rainbow Dash, Luna's hilarious rage, and that musical accompaniment to Celestia's return to power...... THIS is the summary of my reaction:
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Top notch!
Luna, as played by Vegeta:
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"It'll all end in sunshine and rainbows!"
-Pinkie Pie to LittlePip
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This story has officially become one of my top favorite stories on here. Good job getmeouttahere, good job.
It's been Months, and the deus ex machina "she was posessed" ending still Pisses me off. I mean it was her own stupid fault she got possessed - at least punch her out!
6505245 it wasn't possession really. Possession would mean she had absolutely no control over her actions. The Dark Star Shard showed her a false way to get her deepest desires, which happened to be the humans love. She was so desperate that she fell for those lies. She was completely in control of herself the whole time. Besides deus ex machina situations are used when a completely hopeless situation is resolved by the author pulling am absolutely bat shit final weapon out of their ass at the last second to make the hero's win.
Okay.
But does Anon become immortal?!
I need to know! I swear to God, if he doesn't, Imma wreck some shit
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I wouldn't say that. She's lost her magic and it won't come back for hundreds of years - the one thing that makes her 'Twilight'; her special talent and most defining characteristic is gone.
Are you joking, Luna? With all the chaos that Twilight inflicted on your country the last few weeks? Are you blind, or just plain clueless?
*Reads the rest*
Oh. Not NEARLY as bad as I thought it was going to be. Fully expected that to BE him. What with all that happened, and all.
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Yep. Sure, she went nuts and was apparently possessed, (twilight-can-do-no-perma-wrong fans), but this isn't the first time she did do something because she went a little nuts, nor is it the first time someone got hurt, and this time not only did people get hurt (and possibly killed even if it's not mentioned, and she DID try to kill several people deliberately!), not only did she prove herself not mature enough for the responsibility that her amount of magic (alone!) binds her to, and not only did she PURPOSELY try to wreck someone's ability to feed and house herself over several months, but she also abused her political power, stalked and raped someone BEFORE having gone totally nuts or ascended, ran the risk of possibly ENDING THE WORLD!
Plainly put, she has proven more than once that she is a danger to every. Living. Creature. On. The. Planet. If you don't want her killed, fine. But she needs at least as great a punishment as Discord....and then to be dropped into the deepest part of the ocean.
If someone had done all this in reality, yes, she probably WOULD have been executed. Heck, hearing what Nightmare Moon did and wanted to do back before I was a Brony, I bluntly declared that she should have been executed instead of banished, too. Though I like Luna, that opinion has not changed. Eternal night would have roasted all life to death on one side of the planet, and frozen/starved everything on the other.
good. I'm not even mad, Twilight was and is and god damn... but you know what? fuck it. I'm in the same boat as Anon right now and at the very least, she's used so much of her magic that she's lost it for a while. Not a fitting enough punishment, still, but at least nature did serve some justice, at the very least we got that.
Still, I am happy Anon is just on the beginning of forgiving her. I know Celestia is who she is and we all love her for it, but Anon has very good reasons not to instantly forgive his tormenter, just like he put it, so, all in all, not a bad ending for those us who felt the same, it probably might be the best one we could've gotten.
let's really think about it. Had Twilight been killed, or severely punished? t wouldn't have made for a better ending, it would've made for a more bitter and sour ending, imo, this is better.
in fact, you can see that all these alicorns are pretty guilty of doing something really shitty in the story. Celestia dumping her crown on Twilight without warning, Twilight.. do I even need to start? and Luna thinking of Anon as nothing more than a piece of meat to give Twilight, just so she's happy. It makes me wonder where Cadance was in all this? I think she might've been able to balance this out a little.
ok and for some final thoughts on the story itself, it was good. One thing I will say was lacking was this,
instead of being Told by Anonymous that Twilight was nice at some point, I would rather had seen those things play out into the story, just saying, it would've made this redemption and the whole ordeal a lot more meaningful, because the story started rather abruptly without it and now is just much more apparent of it. (edit: after looking at the author's stories, is I dream of Luna a prequel to this? from the description, it appears so)The parts with Twilight being obsessed over Anon though, way too fucking dark man... That was oppressive, not even hard to swallow, but they always left a feeling of oppression, which is why so many readers feel the need to lay down some justice on her. I just have to wonder, if it really needed to be this dark? I personally don't think it needed it, but maybe your intentions there were different, I know you made me feel well within anon's shoes, as well as again, many others.. so, maybe it was intentional. but it wasn't really that fun.
Still, a fun story, 10/10 fanfiction material, full with airships firing dozens upon dozens of canons and torpedoes, the characters assuming warfare positions and being thrust in probably the biggest war of the entire pony civilization, ancient technology that can eradicate civilizations, ancient artifacts and places of power, it's just a god damn 10/10 fan fiction...
and that's not a Bad thing btw, that's great, I love the insanity that comes from this and the degrees of freedom people take with this stuff! :D I don't think I would've read through with this all, if all that craziness wasn't played out just for the hell of it and to make up the best excuses to put them in at all times and they were awesome!
Some love to the Apples, Big Mac first of all, master chief Engineer and capable for when he was needed the most by Anonymous and Celly, seriously, this guy deserves all the credit for helping Anon out with flying that ship, Applejack, for being generally awesome, level headed and very true to her morals, a true friend and Applebloom, for being a cutie-patootie! and clubbing Fluttershy in the back of the head, with her CMC friends. Did I say I love how much of a fanfiction this story is? ^_^
and Pinkie Pie, oh my god she was written so well here hah! Nah, even with all the things I said above, I love this fic, how couldn't I? Celestia was easily the best part of this all, bar none, but just having everything else that made it so fun besides the excellent snark, Excellent.. I loved it all!
Is it weird that i wanted him to give the orb of asascension to discord? Who would reform back into alicorn clover the clever.
Please tell me that what follows is true.
A: Their trials are shown.
B: I recieve Immortality. Not Ian, he already is semi-immortal.
C: They show what happened to the Dark Star and what it's true nature even is.