Ponyville's resident human attempts to adjust to living with Celestia as his roommate while also avoiding Princess Twilight's crazy romantic overtures.
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That was some delicious imagery.
I gotta say, I'm really impressed. I mean this is no masterpiece by any means, there are some noticeable flaws, but where it does shine, it does leave quite the impression.
seeing Celestia mourn for her life is definitely new, I didn't even think it was this hard because of that, that honestly caught me off guard.. and her say at the end, is also pretty inspiring. even if she was pretty selfish in the start, but, who can blame her?
this rollercoaster is soon coming to a close (for me) and I'm still feeling it's not over yet. well, that and 3 chapters left, plus a hefty epilogue afterwards, I mean, duh... but I just know there's still more Twilight to come and that's all the really needs to be said about that.
Lewd.
No imortal Anon
This was one of the best chapters. Well done.
I need the original music for the scene that follows this line.
The last act of L-Train's Moonrise has been playing in my head for this entire chapter
This is the perfect song to go with her ascension, in my opinion. The name of the song is even "Sunshine". https://m.youtube.com/watch?v=TD7QlXFFY5k&pp=ygUac3Vuc2hpbmUgYWRhZ2lvIGluIGQgbWlub3I%3D
I think the Orb of Ascension should be more than just a crystal if it made with true feelings like theirs I think it should have a much stronger effect then just a plain thirteen gates Orb.