Ponyville's resident human attempts to adjust to living with Celestia as his roommate while also avoiding Princess Twilight's crazy romantic overtures.
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Even though this is the end, the story's still marked incomplete because there's a bonus chapter for it, but I'm too tired to convert it now. It'll go up sometime this week when time allows.
Yay, four chapters in one day! I liked the way you resolved everything at the end, I was wondering if he was going to go back and get another orb of ascension himself or not.
4058221 Ahem,Shut up and take my ......Like/favorite........Id i had more than one each per story id give ya em!
I...I...you just...
...thank you. For giving me such a wonderful story to read. And for so elegantly telling us the story of Anon and Celestia, and not just smashing the two of them into a relationship with nary but a few words.
Take my like, take my favorite (though you've had it for some time now), take a couple of internets and thumbs up while you're at it. This one is going in my 'Excellent Fics to Never Delete, Ever' folder.
10/10, would recommend to quality Fimfic connoisseurs everywhere.
bonus sex chapter anyone?
The best kinds of stories are the kinds that after you're done reading it, you can't really think. You just sit there until you realize.
That is, until you reread the whole thing.
This is without a doubt, the best story I have ever read. I know it's far too much to hope for, but a sequel would be incredible.
10/10 top notch amazing greatest thing ever holy shit why did it have to end. That is all.
EDIT: That's not all. I also have to say that I think this is THE greatest thing I've ever read, including books and everything with words in it, in all my years of life I cannot think of a time I read something that blew me away like this, if I could marry this story I would. That is all.
Best Celestia X Human story I've ever read, hands down.
Here's hoping for a Cadance x Human story next
I'll keep this in my favorites forever, because I know that one day I'll feel really down. And when I do, I'll read this story
Again, fantastic story. This and the Luna story are real gems, and make my work look terrible in comparison.
Thanks for writing this, it's really lifted my spirits as of late
GOD DAMN is this good.
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If I could, I would give this story every award possible.
Amazing.
Just simply amazing.
I'm tempted to threaten to bear your children in exchange for a sequel.
This is probably the best Celestia romance story I have ever read.
It had a very nice combination of humor, action and romance and I think I will be re-reading this story more than once in the future.
Well after reading the rest of the chapters, I am very impressed with the way you redeemed Twilight and brought this story to a very good conclusion. Well done, author!
Your world building is godly, your plot line was amazing, and all in all this story was gold. If I could I'd be handing you an award for this... As it is I instead offer you this.
I would literally pay for a sequel to this.
Even knowing this was complete elsewhere, I couldn't bring myself to go find it and read it there, it felt like cheating.
I found myself putting off everything else once i got the notification that this updated, going as far as dropping whatever game i was playing, once.
getmeouttahere, this was a wonderful, wonderful release. Easily the best romance story i'd ever read. Between this and 'I Dream of Luna', you've more than earned this follow.
This is by far one of the best stories that I've read, at the end of each chapter it made me want to continue reading it but I had to wait, but the wait was well worth it.
This story made my emotions fly. great job getmeouttahere on this awesome story
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This fic is simply to wonderful for Words, thank you SO much for Writing it!
Thank you so much for sharing this wonderful story with us. Just epic, and beautiful.
My only regret is that I cannot up vote this more times.
..I read the whole thing..
...This was amazing...Beautiful..Your choices of music, too, were beautiful..
You are impressively skilled at the art of pulling the strings of one's heart...
...My god, i'm crying.
I d-didn't think a story could make me cry..
That was possibly the best romance story I have ever read.
It was also the only second-person fic that I've ever read that was actually good.
Wonderful work my friend, thank you for sharing it.
wooooo! he got an orb! best love story ever!
It's sad to see this story end, but thank you so much for this epic journey you have taken us on. It was perfect from beginning to end.
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Wow, it's rare that a story leaves me smiling at the end. Good job, I'm looking forward to the bonus chapters.
Good god man. This story is absolutely bloody brilliant. I have so much praise I want to type up but I would probably take a couple hours just wording it right.
So here.
Amazing plot.
Well written narrative of said plot.
Comedy gold.
Nail-biting tension.
Astonishing ability connect everything almost seamlessly.
Held onto this particular reader and refused to let go.
Managed to confuse my emotions very thoroughly.
VALUABLE life lessons embedded within a fanfic; professionally published novels often struggle to have even simple ones!
WASN'T STRAIGHT UP CLOP.
And finally,
You have a gift for writing. What you have created rivals aforementioned novels in complexity and enjoyment. Don't let this talent wither away; it is something that can evolve into something truly great.
Because this was:
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(HAD TO BE DONE. I HOLD NO REGRETS.)
10/10, will be reading this again, easily. I hope to eventually see more from you.
Absolutely beautiful
I can't say anything that hasn't already been said. I loved this. Wholly and completely. Thank you.
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Nothing else needs to be said.
Utterly brilliant.
Once again, a brilliant story to remember through the ages.
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I second this.
Bloody hell man, that was quite the read. You've gone from Celly Milk and innuendo to one of the best action fics I've ever read. What a switcharoo!
Great work!
An entertaining story, with a nice blend of action/adventure/romance.
What probably lets this down most is the "Anon" crap. Yes, I know it's AiE, and yes I'm still going to criticise the story for that anyway. It's sad to see the story hampered by 4chan shit, because your writing skills for the most part elevate the story well above such trite nonsense. You and the story are both better than that, and that's why it's disappointing.
Edit: Downvoting for opinions is cool. Cowards.
I know it's been already been said before, but this story is amazing. This is one of the best, if not the best, stories that I have read on this site, and I've read quite a few stories on this site. I can say with certainty though, that this is THE best romance story that I have read. You sir are incredibly talented and should never give up writing.
Wow holy shit this wrapped up nicely. Everyone stopped being a bitch, and Celestia finally got what she wanted. What she deserves for all her hard work.
Thank you for bringing us this, author.
i have to say, of all stories i had the pleasure to read so far, this one of the few that i can give a 10/10 and say whit out a doubt that its my favorite by so far.
Fucking beautiful, truly fucking beautiful. I wonder how the conversation between Luna and Celestia went, must have gotten quite the earful. I'd be pretty pissed if my room was destroyed along with all my irreplaceable possessions... Especially if those fucking things were thousands of years old. Good thing I'm gonna die off before I get an ancient collection of crap. Bah ha ha ha. Amazing story, better than that Luna one, sorry to say... Shame we didn't get to see the rest of the girls with their new Alicorn forms. At least Twilight and Anon are friends now. And that fucker got married to Celestia, fan-fucking-tastic. Absolutely brilliant, definitely one of my favourites, won't be one that I'll forget either. I'll have in my memory for at least a week, now that's really good. Maybe I'll read it again someday, love that feeling of fucking nostalgia so I do bah ha ha ha. I'm excited to see what you've got for us next, no rush though, you've already done an amazing job with this so I'm no expecting another miracle so soon.
Perfect.
...I'm really sad. I felt like everything was touching and sad to see it end... also crying's a thing... ya jerk.
I'm going to read the first few chapters so I don't forget how to laugh or something...
I just noticed something...
I think all those trials are just based off of the actual Journey game.
Not that I'm complaining, just a possibility.
From start to finish, this was definitely one of the most intriguing, remarkable, glorious, superb (and a mixture of other related synonyms) fanfictions I have ever had the pleasure of reading.
All I can say is: Bravo, good sir. Bravo.
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Wow. Just, fucking wow. Story had a whimsical start, but it went from that to serious, with a seamles transition. I love how you wrapped up.the story, and explained Twilight's off-the-wal" obsession. I know I'll be reading this again and again.
This fic slowly improved over time. Its pretty alright.
ALTERNATE INTERPRIATION TIME
Luna is an arrogant hypocrite who hated what Celestia did simply because when she tried she wasn't allowed to, and Celestia didn't attempt to cause a mass extinction event at that, so what the fuck has Luna got to bitch about? She is lazy, spoiled, and is so convinced of her own superiority that she refuses to listen to anything anyone else has to say, and deliberately faffed about when dealing with an extreme threat not only to her but all of Equestria. I found her to be a complete and total cunt. She caused a lot of strife for no other reason than it was easier for her to do it, rather than try to run the kingdom by herself, which is what Celestia did for nearly a thousand years. Lazy lazy lazy.
Twilight is extremely lucky to have such good friends that not only forgive her, but also picked up her god awful messes. Dark influence or not, Twilight caused hundreds of thousands of bits worth of damages, wasted billions on frivolous personal expenditure, and deliberately ruined the life of another with the sole purpose of self gain, but the real nail in her coffin is that her actions nearly caused, potentially, hundreds of deaths. She damn near killed Luna, and in doing so, nearly caused the wiping out of half the city.
Celestia is actually mostly blameless for nearly everything. Sure, she jumped a bit at the gun, but upon realizing her mistake did she try to run from it? Nope, she kept on trying to fix things to ease the burden on others. A moment of "selfishness" that was a bit minor coupled by endless generosity and compassion. She was easily one of the most moral characters there, second only to Applejack.
TL;DR Luna is a lazy cunt who caused most of the suffering, Twilight was a crazy selfish bitch who put the realm in danger for her own ends and is lucky to have such forgiving friends, and Celestia is mostly blameless.
Huh. So I thought this would end up being another of those weird domestic-comedy stories, but it was at least well-written, so I followed along.
Then those hidden booster rockets fired and the story shot for the stratosphere.
...what I'm trying to tell you is SHUT UP AND TAKE MY FEELS.
Sequel plz? Luna deserves a special somehuman too. One to stand by her side as her airship naval XO or something.
(I already read I Dream of Luna and faved it. I mean Luna getting a special somehuman of her own. Not one to tease, toy with and set up with Fluttershy, AJ and Dash).