Ponyville's resident human attempts to adjust to living with Celestia as his roommate while also avoiding Princess Twilight's crazy romantic overtures.
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Good God in heaven, how do you write so much so fast!? I'm sure the vast majority of it was completed already but still!
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It was all completed, it just needed to be touched up for Fimfic. It took me a little over half a year to write this story in what spare time I had, so I wouldn't exactly call it fast, it just seems that way.
4069202 Several monkeys on typewriters.
Well... This is going to sound a bit odd at first. Reread it a few times, and I'm sure it might have a chance of possibly making sense after some serious thought and maybe illegal neural performance enhancers.
I hate you so much right now. You made me almost break out into tears - of happiness, there's a new one for the depressed bastard that is me - just as my parents walked into the room.
At the same time, thank you so much. Those last sentences were truly incredibly inspiring. I've been battling depression for years, and stories like these help me batten down the hatch that keeps the demon contained. The comedy, the sadness, all of it meshes together so well to provide joy. Not pure joy, but that's boring! Joy mixed with sadness, and bitterness, but joy in the end that we may take from it what we will, and ultimately become better, happier, and stronger as a result.
I feel like that's a quote from something, but I can't be sure. If anyone finds that, please let me know. I'd love to give credit to whoever planted that phrase in my brain.
4069242 Still a great story. Thanks.
4069242 A side story would be interesting where Twilight wins....though I just love obsessive twilight.
And to tie everything up...
This was great, your writing is the best I've seen in a while. I hope some more extras come out occasionally.
4069242 ....So we'd have to wait about a half a year for a sequel of equal quality to this story?........You know what,Its fucking worth the wait *Grabs his tent*
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Yeah, I'd never be able to resist the urge to post chapters once they were done like that.
To effectively write an entire story before anyone sees it? It's the comments that encourage me to write more chapters.
Good on you, man. And great work.
Excellent job as usual.
AWWWWWWW, THAT'S SO CUTE!
We need a sequel or at least a wedding chapter! I need to know about the wedding!
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Nah, he posted this on /mlp/ as greentext before he converted it into prose for fimfic. He didn't post the whole story all at once originally.
Where's Spike in all of this?
4069748 Okay then let Broly and I have what's left?
More Extras? :< Seriously, this is one of those stories I don't want to end.
Sequel? Married life? Eternity? Dealing with bitchy-exterior fanfiction-writing Luna? Fixing Discord? C'mon, so many things. Please?
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Oh my god that extra chapter! You mad genius!!!
Also, do you think you'll be doing a CadenceXHuman story?
I'm curious as to how that would play out, and I'm sure you'd make it interesting (especially if you kept Shining Armor in the loop)
All aboard the feel train! Next stop not gona cry village!
4069946 Oh yes please!
There's a disturbing lack of Human x Cadance stories on this site.
Can only think of like 2 of any quality off the top of my head. Stupid sanctity of marriage.
First, I knew that dragon was going to show up sometime.
Second, pure epicness.
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I heard that! We need more CadenceXHuman story! The sanctity of (Non-real life) marriage can eat a dick
Plus, hasn't anyone ever heard of an open marriage? My folks have one and their happy (37 years and still goin' strong).
I am saddened by the loss of what is certainly one of my favorite stories.
that was incredable
This story was a work of art.
I cannot commend you enough on how incredible this was to read.
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Camping trip to Story Avenue?
I feel that the time has come for a female human to enter Equestria. as far as i know, there isn't any. mostly because i have not seen any yet. IT MUST BE DONE
https://scontent-a-ord.xx.fbcdn.net/hphotos-frc3/t1/p403x403/1798439_458329977627134_315573040_n.jpg
4069946 That would be awesome!!!!!!
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Here you go, female in Equestria story that's good.
Twilight is going to be working her debt whit Equestria for the next 340 years (assuming 8 hours a day, no vacations, no free days)
That´s what you get for being immortal, I guess.
And so our window into this epic tale ends.
I'll give it 7/5; would lovingly caress every word again.
Speaking about epic tail, have you seen Celestia's?
is there by any possible chance that you could possibly make a sequel to this story that starts at the week before celestia and anon's wedding? and kinda develop that a little farther? like another story more focused on them and the events were the story stopped at? because this story is just to good to stop at just that saying yes to anons proposal and not even touch that side plot at all. but if you don't, then what ever, no harm in asking. but all in all this was an amazing story full of anger, laughs, and tears. good job on that. it is now one of my all time favorites.
So just Twilight is traumatized in the end?
After all the shit that went down, not even Applebloom (who was in the thick of the battle) has any PTSD?
Great story! I hope you do more like this one. It was wonderfully done!
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It's LONG, but Derpy's Human.
http://www.fimfiction.net/story/22582/lyras-human-2-derpys-human
4070368 there's also stranger among the voices.
And as for this *Squees* I just finished reading this story the day before this chapter came out and I was still riding the finished story high when I saw rthis bonus chapter, I woke my folks on accident with my joy.
4071315 He wont. He already retired.
Nice skyrim referance
Am I the only one who was dissapointed that there was no hot celestia on anon action? X3
Just have to say this, your story reinvigorated my love for Celestia. Both canon and fanon.
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It doesn't sound odd to me at all. Sometimes I ask myself just why I spent a good chunk of 2013 writing horse romance fiction of all things, and then when I see messages from readers like these the answer becomes as clear as day.
I've been in contact with a lot of readers who've expressed their thoughts about this story to me, some of which truly touched my heart. All I can say is thank you in return for sharing, and I'm glad you were able to find joy in it.
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Twilight's not traumatized, but she is heartbroken as one would expect. That heartbreak will eventually fade with time and eventually she and Anon are able to become friends again as we see in the Epilogue section. The reason she's in Canterlot with Celestia exclusively for a few months is so that she can resume her studies directly under Celestia's tutelage to learn what being a Princess, as well as what being immortal truly entails. It's also meant to give them an opportunity to reconnect and mend their damaged student-teacher relationship.
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1,000,000 hours of community service was Luna's idea since she was pretty ticked off about losing her beloved stamp collection. By the time Twilight's done she'll have nearly recovered her magic, so the timing actually works quite well.
Don't feel too bad for her, though, feel bad for the generations of students who'll have to sit through boring history lectures from Adjunct Professor Twilight.
4073498 Still, thanks.
If you ever need help - with anything - let me know.
I wouldn't mind helping with that weird, strange, incredibly stupid horse romance fiction that you write so incredibly well.
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I was referring more to the fact that after all of that, I would have expected all parties to have a thousand-yard stare at the very least, if not night terrors.
I don't have much to say about this story, because I really don't have any criticisms and there's no need to analyze it - the work speaks for itself. What I will say, is this: It's obvious when a work is a labor of love. It's obvious when a writer pours themselves into their words. When you're hearing a story as it actually happened: because, at least in the mind's eye of the writer, every last bit of it really did. Thank you for writing this, and thank you for sharing it with us. It was a real gift.
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Honestly, I thought that was more of a Tenchi Muyo reference than anything else really.
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As long as you don't butcher all in your way.
*motions towards the bolt pistol and chain axe in a 'gimme' action*
4070368 I have just two words for you, Lez Ponies.
This was a beautiful, glorious, and silly story.
My only complaint is the whole "2nd Person" bit. Really, the "Anon" character is just that, a character, and shoulda been just named and given an identity. Well, okay, two complaints: Dash isn't that bad.
But still, a wonderful story. Just... wow. So much win.
4069242 celestial went all opPulp Fiction with that miracle shit lmao