• Member Since 15th Dec, 2013
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Dizzy Daze


I often have the strange desire to balance random objects on my head.

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After the Equestria Games tryouts, Spitfire and Fleetfoot decide to take Rainbow Dash out for a few drinks to apologize for giving her a hard time. Soarin' decides to tag along as well (Why not get free drinks and an implied apology as well?). As the night carries on, the four pegasi swap stories, produce some fantastic belches, and take flight through a beautiful, moonlit night.


(Yes, this is a SoarinDash fic. Armed with that knowledge, you may proceed at your own discretion.)

Chapters (1)
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Comments ( 16 )

Some nice SoarinDash fluff. I approve.

Have a like.

Loved it. wish there was more.

Really good. I wish there was more to it though. I didn't see many errors so I think you're good for now.

Thanks for the feedback, I'm glad all you enjoyed it.

3858811 3858953 I'm not sure what you mean by more. Did you want it to be more fleshed out because it was too rushed (something I always do) or did you want it to have more content?

Sweet, I love it....direct to my favorites :)

3859266 Just wish there were a few more chapters. Like, how the next day went. Loved the story though.

3859709 I was thinking of maybe doing a few more chapters. I wasn't sure how this one would turn out and what kind of feedback I'd get. But it's a possibility... Once I have more time in my schedule, I'll try to put that on my to-write list. :twilightsmile:

That was your first? It was awesome! I only wish there was more-I like my stories to drag out a bit. But it was great.

And I see you do what I do-write in te early morning hours. Those seem to be my best thinking time.

Stay Awesome

RDD

3859266 oh sorry I meant more capters or something along those lines.

3859748 please sir, can i have some more?

I am Captain Ryan of the usaf and I approve this story.

D'awwww....so cute, makes me feel all fuzzy inside :pinkiesad2:

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