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Raidah
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3946680 it'll get better, trust me. Chapter 2 will be equally fun to read.
This is great, keep it up
I'll be watching you...
not bad, not bad at all. the dialogue spacing could be different, as well as the dialogue itself could use some polishing up, but this is a good story none the less.
3946694 yeah, I was kinda rushed as I had planned to publish this today. So I kinda speed-wrote it. Will go back and do some polishing tomorrow when I have more time.
Well, this is probably the first Clopfic I actually read, like through it all. And I can't believe I'm saying this, but clopfics aren't as bad as I thought. Not saying there bad, I just thought that I could never read one. So, yeah. Nice! And and I want to read more.
3946715 ok!
3947181 it's the first one I've written...
Hahahaha.....
Loved it...
Eeeeeeeeeeeeeeee....
For all those retards who disliked because there's no TwiDash or TwiJack; it's marked "incomplete" for a reason!!!
........ i could not tell this was your first
3977448 what, seriously? You couldn't? Wow... I'm better than I thought...
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Yeah you are keep it up i can't wait until the next one
3998335 chapter 2 in the next few weeks will also involve clop... So look forward to that.
Okay, so I took the time to read this, and it was pretty good, it just doesn't feel right when I read it...
Its like eating your worst favorite food, it a way at least.
4281149 I still see an upvote. So that's good enough for me.
4281149 and what I meant by that is that so long as people like them, I will keep writing stories. Because what's the point if no one likes them?
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Exactly, and I hope you do right more, because even though sometimes Ill be out of my comfort zone, your a pretty good writer.
That was fast...
Oh who am I kidding I loved it. 
4642341 meh. I need to expand on them more, don't rub it in.
NIce work awesome chapter I cant wait to see what happens next
yes, an update! i've been waiting so long....
4690316 I know... Sorry about that. Took a while to come to me but it finally did. Though I am going to go back and edit this later, extend the end scene and such.
4690341 your not gonna leave us hangin for so long again, are you?
4691136 hopefully
4691845 it's been 10 weeks. what's the update?
5063765 I know I know. I've been busy with other stories... I have the next chapter planned out it's just writing it that's the problem... I need the inspiration (which has actually just come around before I noticed this) so I'll be trying to get it done soon...
5063783 wasn't trying to sound impatient. i was just asking for an update. this story intrigues me quite a bit, so i just don't want to see it become forgotten.
5063790 oh don't worry, I never forgot about it. I just never got the time to write the next chapter.
You know, trying to argue that you're writing plot with clop rather than just mindless clop doesn't really work when you have scenes with random out of nowhere sex scenes for no reason and with no real emotional overtones.
5114892 RDxAJ scene 1: special wake up call on one year anniversary
Scene 2: they just got engaged, there will be sexytimes.
Scene 3: Twi x RD: extremely lust driven by feelings for the other.
Now tell me there's "no emotional overtones" in the scenes.
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Whatever on the first two, that's fine. Scene 3, ridiculous. Lust can work like that, but really, Twilight? Twilight is not a lust-driven character. She is logical and would never jeopardize a friendship by cheating with someone. Rainbow, sure, she might be flighty and impulse driven, but she also takes her role as Loyalty seriously, and would be freaking out. Perhaps emotionless is not the word I should have used, I should have gone with the simpler OOC.
5117172 Rainbow knew there was no way she was going to get out of that, so she just accepted it. As for Twilight; she couldn't control what she was doing. She was so overcome with lust that she couldn't think straight.
Ah, you've found yourself in the unenviable position of having written something which I have a personal pet peeve against, that is, the idea that libido is an excuse for any action. It is not. Twilight Sparkle is an adult. She may be inexperienced sexually/romantically, but she is a very intelligent adult sentient being. Some so-called adults do let themselves be controlled by their libido, but you have to examine their personality. Twilight would not let that happen.
Perhaps instead of continuing to defend your story, you think of complaints as a way to grow as a writer. Looking through the other comments on this, most are simply congratulations/encouragement for you. This is all well and good, but perhaps you should put more weight behind the comments that are paragraph length or longer, not the simple, "This is teh best thing evar!!!1!!" Every story gets those idiotic comments.
5118361 I'm not one of those retards. I'm simply defending my case. If you don't like it, I can't help that. I know full well I can't please everyone.
Great story so far. I don't ship TwiDash myself, but I definitely respect it, like I do with most ships. I personally think that you went a little too far with the whole lust thing, but who am I to judge? It's your fic and you can make it go where you want it. I especially like how you made Twi tell Dash her feelings. Mostly what led up to it, actually. Please continue! I bet AJ will find out. She always does, in the end.
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whens the update to this story?
5473047 I really can't say... Haven't been working on it a whole lot, been focused on other things. Sometime soon, hopefully. Once I actually get my ass to work on it...
She spread her legs
5553844 lol stay. The story gets pretty dark later on (later on as in unpublished chapters... That haven't been started... Get the fuck to work, Devs...)
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i wouldn't put it quite that harshly, but some progress would be appreciated. or maybe even a blog every now and then keeping us up to date?
5915697 I am already overworked at the moment. Plus I doubt anyone would read this since no one did when I updated two of my other stories recently.
Can you do more
6259050 read my comment below yours or my most recent blog post.
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To all that have wanted an update, here you go fam. Over a year later but shush I was busy with other things >.>
Good chapter can't wait for more and when dose rainbow love twilight and betrayal applejack
6728173 she said she's not gonna do that. Bruh. Can you read?
Nice job, Devs. Can't wait to see what happens with RD and AJ.
Ok so what they have a three way thine then but will twilight find her special some pony