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This is my attempt to write a version of 'Rainbow Falls' that does not contradict past episodes and deals with the criticisms of the episode by various commenters.

Taking place before the qualifying trials for the Equestria Games, Dash is joining Fluttershy and Snowflake (sorry, I like that name better than Bulk Biceps) to help Fluttershy with her shyness.
Of course, the Wonderbolts want her on their team, so Dash has the same hard decision to make.

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You didn't really make Spitfire behave better, if anything you made her behave even worse by threatening to ruin Rainbow Dash's chances of being a Wonderbolt just because she wouldn't fly for the Cloudsdale team. And on top of that this story felt rushed, not an actual rewrite of the episode. I'm sorry, but I don't think this is how people would've wanted the episode to play out. You had an interesting concept, but you didn't execute in the right way.

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