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[Scootaloo is Best Crusader]

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There are many fillies and colts that don't enjoy taking baths. Scootaloo happens to be one of them...

One day the Pegasus filly refuses to bathe, and Rainbow Dash knows that she must take matters into her own hooves.

A big thanks to RariHulk and NightWolf289 for editing.

Featured on: January 22, 2013.

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kinda:scootangel: cute!

This could actually be something that could take place on screen. Also, was I the only one who was reminded of that Spongebob Squarepants episode where Gary didn't want to take a bath? :rainbowkiss:/:trixieshiftright:

Great job. :rainbowdetermined2:

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I love that episode :scootangel:

3828389 :rainbowdetermined2: You asked for it! Now it's time for the, tickle monster! :rainbowkiss:

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No one seemed to mind....It's just an OC I came up with.

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3828792 Yeah. I don't think this story was supposed to be very detailed. I like it the way it is. It's a nice little story. Too much detail would make the story lose it's feel, ya know?

Comment posted by TheGreatEater deleted Jan 25th, 2014

It was cute as sh*t
I loved it ! :rainbowkiss:

3828763 Because Scootaloo obviously needs a parent for this fic.

Comment posted by Chat Noir deleted Jan 25th, 2014

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Awesome. But yeah other than that one bit. This fic had some rather adorable scenes with Dashie and Scoots.

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Thank you :scootangel: I will do my best!

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Comment posted by Rainbow Dash deleted Jan 25th, 2014

I feel warm and fuzzy after reading this. Nice.

heh, that's kinda like me with showers, makes my mom so mad over time. but reading this, it really makes me feel all warm and fuzzy and makes me want to cuddle up with my favorite teddy bear and fall asleep.

Pretty decent story, I'll give you that. I might as well favorite and follow :pinkiesmile:

Fantastic work. Another happy reader

4222396 Good story dude, liked it alot. Hey want to check out my story Ace Combat: Divided Feelings?

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Thank you. :scootangel: And sure!

Cute little story! 5/5 rainbows from me! :rainbowdetermined2::rainbowdetermined2::rainbowdetermined2::rainbowdetermined2::rainbowdetermined2:

Not bad. It's cute, family friendly, and funny. Nice work. :twilightsmile:

I hope she doesn't find me find me

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