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After meeting up with Pinkie Pie at Sugar Cube Corner, Dash gives solid advice when Caramel takes a liking to the pink earth pony. Pinkie, herself, adopts the pegasi's knowledge and does what she thinks is right.

A very short and simple vignette.

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Winston

Winston #1 · Apr 15th, 2014 · 1 · ·

As she pressed further into town, she eventually found a metal pole, and to the mixed horror and hysteria of onlooking ponies, she used it to smack her sore buttcheeks back and forth like a bulbous paintbrush.

Thumbs-up'd at this point because you win for writing this.

dashybrony2012

dashybrony2012 #2 · Apr 15th, 2014 · · ·

That was awesome! Great job it was a delight to read

Zeyon The Green

Zeyon The Green #3 · Apr 15th, 2014 · · ·

I kind of feel like it isn't complete, but it's a personal growth story so I guess it doesn't need it.

uhhh

uhhh #4 · Apr 15th, 2014 · · ·

4236802 This was sort of a spur-of-the-moment story, and I didn't have much of an idea about what I was gonna do with it. I even complained about it a little in the author's note. I thought of writing another chapter to include Pinkie and Caramel interacting, but I figured the story was more centered around Pinkie and Dash being friends, not Pinkie's future with a stallion. I probably won't write anything like this again without preparing a little better.

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Thanks for the comments!

Zeyon The Green

Zeyon The Green #5 · Apr 18th, 2014 · · ·

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That means that is complete then, I guess I just didn't look at it that way. It was more Pinkie and Dash's understanding each other than anything else.