I follow the light for it shows me the way, yet I will embrace the darkness for it shows me the stars.
Rainbow Dash has just woke up in an unknown location, is tied down to a table, and sees all sorts of knives and blades on a desk. Rainbow Dash realizes that she has to tell the truth now or she'll never get the chance.
This is a happier alternate ending for cupcakes (pinkiedash shipping & partial spinoff).
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You need to start a new paragraph when a new character speaks. I think… like this:
How do you know?" Pinkie asked "What if I do this again a-and I actually k-kill you?"
"Because I know you. You just weren't feeling your self. I promised you that I would never tell anyone and Rainbow Dash doesn't break a promise especially not a pinkie promise, but if you want to make sure that you will never do this Twilight could her eggheadness could help you out with therapy or something. You know Twilight is a great friend and I'm sure she won't tell anyone either." Dash responded.
"Ok are you sure about this though?"
Rainbow smiled at Pinkie and said
"I'm more sure of this then I've been of anything before." They sat there in the dark enjoying each others warmth.
It's also possible that this isn't how it works because I'm not english, but dutch and am very bad at the subject.
Ps: I would sent some smiley but I guess that doesn't work on the phone.
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Thanks for the tip and for helping me realize a mistake
Twilight could use her eggheadness and could help you out with therapy or something. You know Twilight is a great friend and I'm sure she won't tell anyone either." Dash responded.
This could really use some proofreading, but it looks very interesting. If it gets edited a bit, I might give it a like.
I really like it but it's kinda short please make a sequel for me pretty please with a cherry on top!
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Uh thanks I was thinking of a rainbow factory meets cupcakes kind of thing but I kinda want to see this one shine a bit more then this weekend I guess I could sit down and write it or a second chapter to this story maybe?
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yay!
This is a nicer ending to Cupcakes.
Good Work
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Thanks and uhh i wanted to get you guy's opinion on what I should do cupcake factory or should I do another chapter for this
3828454 Another chapter of this please.
3818790 your welcome
This is so adorable
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This weekend two more are going up and I don't want to spoil anything so you have to either be Russian or use a translator if you care for spoilers
так я думал о вводе в возможно положить в сексе видел и повышения уровня зрелости, чтобы подросток так что я не совсем уверен, если вы хотите, чтобы это было в истории
How did AJ know and why did she ambush her now instead of before?
Still can't see the TF2 reference, I think I'll wait for the next chapter.
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It is going to be explained in the next chapter
Oh and about the TF2 reference check the paragraph that begins with "it's alright I don't blame you"
Oh look. Another Cupcakes spin-off. One that's only been done 50 times and not 51. I cannot contain my excitement.
Oh, and what's that? It's not even well written? Well, this just has to go straight into my favorites!
How original..
Forget the haters I love it!
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Thank you so much. Honestly it was yours and schoolrulers comments that made me want to keep going with this story. And I'm glad you like it(writing from phone no faces sorry).
Wow an actual story that's going to get finished and I'm excited for the next chapter haven't felt that feeling since Steven King's, Bag Of Bones, anyway keep it up and please don't be like the others and just not update it anymore I love this story and to all the people who keep saying they hate spinoffs why did you click on this story.
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Thanks I've been trying to get 1 chapter up every Saturday and Sunday but I stay up till about 1 am every night so I need at least 1 day to sleep in but if I don't have school tomorrow do to snow then I'll try to write another chapter and thanks for the moral support
Ponyless-Jmart Don't thank me thank that writing skill you have, but glad I could help and if you need anymore Moral support come to me.
Chapter 5 coming soon I hope :) but take your time don't want it to be like 45 words long :)
Yay first comment anyway I have been excited for this chapter (As you already know) the technology bit doesn't effect me, well maybe a teeny weeny tiny little bit, but once again you have outdone yourself and once again can't wait for the next chapter (:
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Thanks and honestly people like you are the kind of people that make me want to keep going on. I like being able to comfort and help and make people smile and look forward to stuff, so I'm glad you seem to like it.
I have a question I uhh? might have missed this so please forgive me. but, Is dash the only victim of Pinkies Cupcakes. Because there was the Cape/robe made of cutie marks and wings, necklace of horns, not to mention Gilda's skull? I mean did I miss that in your author notes or what?
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Yes in the first chapter Pinkie says "you get the honor of being my first helper"
Now I know she is not the first in the original but whatever.
3905257 okay I thought that was her(pinkie) going through a kinda self rehearsed motions.
Hmm Hmmmmm HMMM Yes indoubludy hmmm Yes in my opinion, Best Story Ive seen so far and you actually update so yeah 10/10 Good Work and hopefully more coming soon (:
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Yea totally but thanks to snow days and a predicted snow storm on Monday sometime between Friday and Monday I'm hoping to get at least 3 more chapters up. I hate making you guys wait as much as I hate holding all my ideas in. Oh an minor spoiler I'm doing something that will either make or break the story. Oh and now I'm getting some lucrative help from my English teacher not telling her what it is but she is helping me with ideas and writing styles
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Wow three chapters up wow that's awesome, and I mean even though I love the story I don't mind the wait and something that'll make or break the story sounds exciting and frighting hopefully I still love the story after that anyway keep up the good work typing on phone or else there would have been Pinkie's smile so take this instead (:
I'm not trying to be mean or rude, but it's too good to be true. What I mean is it's too positive & needs a little bad in it. I love it, but we need a little chaos in this fanfic ("Poof" *Discord appeares beside me*)
Discord: "I Agree with the mare."
Me: "Uhh..."
Discord: "No need to worry my good miss. Just popping bye!" *Poofs away*
Me: "What just happened..?"
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Where did discord come from? Well he is very tricky. But honestly I'm no good when it comes to drama. And tragedies I don't like because tragedies ruined my life for a while. But anyway trust me I am going to get some drama in here because with all good intensions there are indeed repercussions and weather they are good or bad they are things we must learn to deal with
This is by far one of the Best and I mean Best story I've ever read in my entire duration of life and I mean ever Ever hopefully Pinkie doesn't go crackers again but you never know anyway all I know is you need an A+ in English my good Sir :D
I think it's supposed to be accepting instead of excepting.
I kinda like this sort of progression. Its a good change of pace since both characters are usually active and outgoing.
Wonder what rarity was thinking when rainbow dash of all ponys comes to her house at 9:00 asking for some jems for a necklace and then flys away just imagine the confusion rarity is in lol cant wait till the rest of the main six find out.
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Ok I see, thanks for the help
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Your welcome.
Outdone yourself yet again I wonder what happened to Pinkie's Element we'll see soon I hope. I also hope Pinkies element didn't turn into some mudererous thing.
i punched the screen when you made that 20% cooler joke
Cliffhanger (also: FIRST :D)
WHAT1!!!!!!?!?! SHE NEARLY FUCKING MURDERED YOU! AND SHE KILLED MANY OTHERS TOO!!!!!
Did you mean surrounding?
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Yea I know but in this rewrite rainbow was her first victim and the joke is cheesy I know
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thanks I should make you my proofreader
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Yea! How's that for ya discord!
Aww Im not first :( ah well again amazing chapter!
Uh oh
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Indeed.
Okay 4 things come to mind for the element
1 its turned grey.
2 The shape changed
3. Size changed
4. Glowing, blinking out of sync with others
Oh, GEEZ, either rainbow ruins pinkie train o thought and deathly cracks the elements, or it shatters. or she works it out
Pinkie is best pony, and my brother, Thunder Thrill's favorite pony is Rainbow Dash O.O...
Love the Fan Fic though!