• Published 20th Jan 2014
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Dark Magic - DawnedDusk



After Twilight's use Dark Magic, it begins to infect her. Causing damage to her mentality and is ruining her friendship. She seeks help and tries to stop the darkness from consuming her.

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Queen of Equestria

It's been a year since Twilight was corrupted, and Luna now ruled the land not as their princess, but as their queen. The blue mare sat quietly on her haunches on the balcony of the rebuilt castle. She had set aside a time in the middle of the one day to have both the moon and sun raised together to remind the ponies that there is both light and darkness and that time was over. With the glow of her horn, she lowered the moon giving her sister more time to stay in the sky. Luna sighed, lowering her head as she recalled the death of her sister. If only she were here, Luna felt that she was far from ready to rule Equestria on her own, but it was just something she would have to eventually get use to. She glanced around castle ground, spying the five ponies who use to be connected to the elements, Spike was with them too. Luna wasn't able to reduce his size completely, but he was at a state of mind that which was stable. Now, he just had the size of a large lizard. She had given Applejack, Rainbowdash, Pinkie Pie, Fluttershy and Rarity the job to be the royal guards of Equestria and she put must trust in the ponies. She smiled slight before walking away from the balcony to sitting on her throne.

She signed papers and read documents here and there the reported of progress, the building of new cities, and things of that matter. "It seems Equestria is finally recovering, my sister," she spoke turning her head to a large portrait of Celestia that hung onto the wall. Tears grew in her eyes as if she could hear her sister telling her that she was proud. The alicorn mare wiped them away gently with her hoof before levitating the signed documents to the side of the throne. Luna stared down to the floor, "If only I could bring back the one that was lost to us." She had been visiting Twilight, or Midnight which the mare preferred to be called, on a daily basis. Trying to bring her back in the right direction, but so far her efforts to reach out to the mare didn't seem to be working.

Teleporting herself into the realm, Luna stood in the light. She strided over to where the darkness and light matched in the middle and sat down. There in the darkness, she couldn't spot the shape of her body, but only saw the glaring red and green eyes that seemed to illuminate in the darkness. "Hello, Twilight," Luna greeted.The mare slowly walked forward, approaching the light but not going into it's boundary, "It's Midnight." Luna raised a brown in suprise, for this was the farthest time the corrupted alicorn had walked towards the light.

Luna rolled her eyes slightly, apparently 'Midnight' was determined to keep her newly found identity. The dark mare grinned. "I'm so proud of you, Luna," she poke in Celestia's voice. The queen stepped back, "Stop it." Midnight grinned again in a Cheshire smile before laughing. "Hurts doesn't it? You may have me trapped here, but unlike you I have not lost anything important. There is no pony I care for. Friendship may be magic, but it is not the kind I am after," and with that Midnight galloped back into the darkness.

Luna hung her head low, she felt that she was slowly accepting that Twilight may be lost for good. No, she thought, pushing her doubts to the back of her mind. She quickly raise it high and stood tall with a bold expression.

One day, I'll be able to save you. I'm not going to give up. I will show you the way to light, and I will bring you back Twilight. For me, for you, for your friends, and for my sister.

Author's Note:

Now that concludes Dark Magic finally. XD -Psych- After some consideration, I will make a sequel. It will not be out for sometime though, I wish to get my other stories started and completed. I'll give you there titles and descriptions here as a bonus to what you'll be seeing in the future.
Past Love: A rumor has been going around Ponyville that Discord and Celestia had a "history" together. The clueless Twilight wants an answer to what this means and asks the princess herself. Celestia refuses to speak of the matter to Twilight. The unicorn then back tracks the source to where the rumor began, which turns out to be Luna. After persuasion, Luna spills out the story of what happened between the two.
Grounded: The young Scootaloo just wants to know why she can't fly when all those around her can, even little baby Pound Cake. She's tried and tried, and ponies keep telling her that one day she will fly. She knows its a lie and just wants to know whats wrong with her. What is the answer? The orange little filly has be wondering and hunting all her life for it. And now, she just might get it, but is she ready to accept the truth?
A Princess, A Klutz, and A Timelord: Luna has taking a liking to the adventurous life with the Doctor. They travel through space and time for laughs and to make sure everything happens as it should. Luckily, her number 2 princess status makes things easier since she's not much needed in the kingdom. As they make their adventures, a new friend comes along who goes by the name of Derpy joins in. Luna slowly becomes jealous as she and the clumsy Pegasus compete to be his top assistant.

Comments ( 10 )

I hope Luna can get Twilight back to normal.

3835814 Shall be a mystery if she will for now. Maybe there shall be quite the :twistnerd: in it's sequel. MUAHAHAHAHAHA! :pinkiecrazy: Whenever that will be. The stories I posted in the descriptions shall be longer than tis' one here. Except for Past Love. -Looks at index cards I have scattered everywhere containing le stories- It's about as long as this one. So much writing to do. :facehoof:

3836530 I forgot completely about Blueblood, even so I don't think he's ruler material. Princess Cadence however shall be helping in the sequel.

Comment posted by JohnHoly deleted Jan 25th, 2014

You know, I imagined twilight sparkle becoming a darker purple, her mane, and hilights a darker color too. When she gets corrupted.

Is it just me, or did Twilight's descent into darkness throughout this story remind anyone else of this song?

I just finished reading, and, wow. That. was. AMAZING. I can't wait to start reading "A Dark Infection"! :pinkiehappy:

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Who knew MLP and heavy metal goes great together XD. I love Metallica btw. >:)

All I can really say is, I seriously hope you've improved after writing this.

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