A Princess, A Klutz and A Timelord

Luna has taking a liking to the adventurous life with the Doctor. They travel through space and time for laughs and to make sure everything happens as it should. Luckily, her number 2 princess status makes things easier since she's not much needed in the kingdom. As they make their adventures, a new friend comes along who goes by the name of Derpy joins in. Luna slowly becomes jealous as she and the clumsy Pegasus compete to be his top assistant.

Credits go to who ever created the lovely art I used for the cover. I could not find you. :c

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qazse

qazse #1 · Jan 26th, 2014 · · ·

Not bad, but don't suppose you could give up a prequel on how the Doctor and Luna first met, and their adventures together?

DawnedDusk

DawnedDusk #2 · Jan 26th, 2014 · · ·

3847223 There will be chapter that explains how she and him first met and first adventure of the many adventures they went on. It's basically Luna telling that story to Derpy.

Zamairiac

Zamairiac #3 · Jan 26th, 2014 · · ·

3847671

Sort out your grammar mate, I had to re-read certain bits a few times, and it was aggravating.

For example :)

Luna groaned as the stack of documents was placed in front of the alicorn's throne. She hated paperwork, but it was her duty as a Princess to do such things.
Levitating a quill, she gazed over at the window, gasping slightly as she realized the time. The Princess was suppose to meet with the 'alien' stallion soon, and she was already running late.
"Perhaps he won't mind if I'm not too late," she pondered silently, glancing at her work as she read and signed each paper.
As she continued, the princess started to realize that her mind kept reverting back to him. Luna thought about him often, perhaps she always thought about Doctor. He was consuming her every thought at an unhealthy rate, forcing her to contemplate that maybe, just maybe she was developing feelings for the brown stallion.
Just thinking about it made her cheeks go red.
"Do I perhaps lo-have feelings for him?"
Princess Luna smiled softly as she played with the idea.
If she told Celestia and her sister didn't approve, she could always run off with him. After all he was a time traveler and his Tardis would take them anywhere they wanted to go, so that was no problem.
"I will figure out my feelings for him in the future", she decided, placing the last document on the finished pile.
And if it turned out that she did possess those certain feelings, then perhaps she could even confess it all to him one day.
After all, when you're with a time traveler, you have all the time in the world.

Get a proof reader if you don't want to turn off any possible readers

Painting_Strides

Painting_Strides #4 · Jan 28th, 2014 · · ·

GAH! That's similar to my story title. The mailmare, the princess, and the doctor (i said similar, plus it's a whooves family thing with my OC as the princess part.) I made my OC an alicorn, and after a while, I thought "wut the heck, background story it is." XD

Eclipse LunarSol

Eclipse LunarSol #5 · Mar 9th, 2014 · · ·

I love Derpy x Doctor, and making Luna and Derpy fight for place as top assistant just like Spike and Owliscous! This is beautiful.

Eclipse LunarSol

Eclipse LunarSol #6 · Mar 9th, 2014 · · ·

Also, 20th like, LIKE A BOSS!

DawnedDusk

DawnedDusk #7 · Mar 9th, 2014 · · ·

4054078 Thanks. I think I was watching Doctor Who one day and got the idea of what if he had two assistants that both had a fancy for him? Hilarity would ensue and such then after that this was born. Before I start rambling. It should be off hiatus soon.