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Riku006


A long-time amateur writer constantly plagued by writer's block.

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[Includes mature themes, reader discretion is advised]

Before the Curse, there was prosperity,
Before the fear, there was love,
Before the downfall, there was resistance,

And before the monster, there was the stallion.
This is his story, unhindered and true.


Part of the Universe of the White Mare
Inspired by the video A Tale of One Shadow by Natasia Solitude, and by the Song of Storms trilogy by The 24th Pegasus.

Any and all constructive comments and criticism is welcomed.

Chapters (6)
Comments ( 8 )

It looks quite promising; I´ll give it a look later :twilightsmile:

It's nice to finally see another update from you, and your really put a lot of work into this as well. There's also the world building you've put into this making me think of this like and actual part of the establishe cannon. That's the sighn of a fine story when it's indistushibale from the cannon and it beats off disbelief with a fotress of pure imagination. I can't wait to see more!

Nice to see another update! The story really is picking up, and I'm glad that you are making Sonora relatable to us instead of instantly making him an outcast. Somber alive everyone else, grows , and so you are making him grow into the king, not born into it.

Well this looks to be interesting.

Nice to see he ain't that callous. Cutter I mean.

I love this story :pinkiehappy:
it deserves more likes

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