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Rutilus.Luna


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Upon her most recent loss to the Power Ponies, Mane-iac is admitted to the Maretropolis Home for The Criminally Insane.

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3787400 Given my lack of Batman knowledge, I'll just have to take your word for it :derpytongue2:

3782609 Well, this should be interesting... :pinkiecrazy:

3787720 Basically the jist of it is that Harley Quinn was a psychologist who ended up trying to analyze the Joker; instead he ended up driving her just as crazy as him, and she broke him out of Arkham and joined his crimes. At least, that's what I've gathered.

Definitely getting a Mad Love vibe from this. I feel like this was inspired by the Joker's interview tapes from Batman: Arkham Asylum, considering the way the tale's being presented.

That being said, I like the Mane-iac's reasoning behind her name not being important. I'm curious about her original personality since you've brought it up.

3792374 I actually had to look up what you are talking about. Pardon my ignorance :twilightblush: I've never played that game or read that comic. A fact my roommate is almost offended by :trollestia: Perhaps when I am done with this story i will give the comic a shot, but I already have a pretty good idea of where I want to go with this. Her original personality will be brought up again, eventually, so you can look forward to that. :twilightsmile:

Well, there's absolutely no way this will backfire on Redheart, right? :pinkiecrazy:

As for the posting thing, I guess posting the next progress report alongside another session might be good, but I personally am not too bothered by the small update. :twilightsmile:

3796957 maybe, maybe not. I try not to plan too far ahead in my stories. keep an element of surprise. although given the character I'm working with, the element of surprise is hard to lose.

3797803 Good point. And I'm jealous of you; even when I try not to plan ahead, I usually have it all mapped out by chapter two. :applejackunsure:

Mane-iac was right. If something that relatively harmless drove Nightshade to resign, then she'd been wanting to do so for a while.

I like what you're doing with her. The Joker vibes were definitely present during her episode, and you're strengthening those vibes with these sessions.

I'm starting to love this, please- do continue:duck:

3876187 Don't fret, I actually intend on finishing this one. I can't say when :twilightblush:, but it will happen. :twilightsmile:

Oh God.
Now I fear that Redheart might develop a fetish for licking. Thanks a lot, Mane-iac.
:raritydespair:

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Yesterday I stubbed my toe. Now I can't orgasm without kicking a wall really hard. :ajbemused:

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I'm sorry for your condition.

That being said, if that's the only way that the Mane-iac can show any sort of physical affection, whether she means it or not, then it's not exactly out of the question for Redheart to yearn for them until she inevitably breaks Mane-iac out. And maybe afterwards.

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You DO realize how dumb that sounds right? Redheart isn't going to attempt to break Mane-iac out because she got licked a couple of times. She is a Doctor. She isn't some tweenage lovesick filly.

And those spoiler bars are entirely useless.

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Yes, I'm aware of how ridiculous it seems.
Then again, Mad Love played out like this.
Harleen Quinzel was a doctor for the Joker. How well she was able to maintain her professionalism and curb her feelings for him? Is it really that farfetched to think that Redheart might do the same thing?

And I'll use the spoiler tags if I wish, thank-you-very-much.

Oh Redheart is going to be pissed when she hears that recording. I actually feel sorry for the Mane-iac now.

I predict a Dr. Harleen Frances Quinzel and Joker scenario from this. Anyway, it's a pretty decent story, hope you finish it.

I'm loading my trebuchet now.
:ajbemused:

At least you're adult enough to admit to no solid excuse. I haven't updated any of my stories in so long...
:raritycry:

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This story remind of this scene from Batman:

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NOT THE TREBUCHET! :pinkiegasp:

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I'm unfamiliar with the details of their story, and will continue to stay that way by choice until this story is finished. I already have a vague idea of where my story is going to go and I want to stick to it.

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I did something right! :yay:

Okay, one question, if Redheart knows what happened and there is recorded proof of what happened. Why hasn't Mane-iac's sister been charged with assault? Other than that, I loved this chapter, very nice work. It sucks losing an internet connection doesn't it?

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That is something that will be addressed, I simply couldn't fit it into this chapter the way I want it to go without it feeling forced or tacked on. And yeah, no internet sucks. I have my phone but it's not so good for writing.

4202069 Oh okay, well I look forward to that then.:twilightsmile:

....... yeah that came well out of left field dude, and kinda destroys what th story had. one thing for her to wnt ot kill her tormentor, another to kill someone randomly like that. just does not add up with what you were building up here, for her to try and just kill someone who gave her something.
considering she does not like to kill period, i am pretty sure she would not just randomly start to for something as stupid as to see fi she could. that is just.............. forced.

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Admittedly I may just scrap the chapter and start a new chapter. I wasn't comfortable posting it cause I figured that people wouldn't like it even if it was one of the originally planned plotlines. I don't know. I have had a plan on where to take it from here for a while. I wasn't sure how to ease into this or if it was even possible with how the story was going.

Well, um, unless Equestrian medical science is superior to ours, the Doc is fucked. Even if she lives she'll be at least partially paralyzed.

4225832 it is especially bad because, well, just moments before redheart was planning on going against maneiacs sister. this isn't the joker here in any stretch. she is crazy and violent but that does not mean murderous and without some sensiblity. redheart is an ally.

i can get her going after her sister, unconvinced she could be touched otherwise. her just wanting to practice murder on her only ally......... dumb to be honest.........
if i can make a suggestion, perhaps add a bit more drama to it as well, perhaps Redheart convinces maneiac that they could legally get at her........ corruption happens, and maneiac gets angry. feels betrayed by the world once again, and redheart is unfortunately the closest warm body to harm.

put ismply what you have built up does not go with how this chapte rwent down, like at all.

ISS

That's why we shouldn't try reform psycho criminals. Killing them is best solution.

3879119Just so you know, there is an alternate Harley and Joker who are both female, and I'm thinking that to:pinkiehappy:

Love this story, it perfectly merges the Mane-iac with the wit of the Joker...(eerie tone)and my love of humorous psychos deepens :pinkiecrazy:

I liked it, psycho criminals really don't seem to need many reasons to do anything do they? I like this whole story, a lovely mix of romantic potential, comedy, and crazy. As well as a big heaping dose of vitamin Mane-iac:pinkiecrazy:(Mane-iac laugh).

Jeezus. Her sister's a bitch, that's for sure.

Glad to see this revived!

Yes!!!!!:pinkiehappy::pinkiesmile::pinkiehappy:, finally!!!!!!:heart::heart::heart:, (spreads arms) hug me Mane-iac!!!! (embrace)...(weak voice) too...tight...(gasps) better...:yay:

How long until the next chapter, if you had to guess? A month? Three months? 6? I hope I am not bothering you.

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Soon. It's mostly written down in my notebook. I just have to transfer it to the computer. I usually prefer to write by hand.

>>Rutilus.Luna
Are you any closer?


6832681 Any closer (sorry for double post)?

This is really good, please continue :twilightsmile:

I'd say the big problem here is that it's not always clear who's talking, especially when there are more than two ponies in the room. Other than that, this is interesting.

Please continue
I love this fic

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