When it comes to being the heroes of Equestria, brothers Thunder Boom and Lightning Flash can't catch a break. That is until the Summer Sun celebration. Will they be heroes? Or will they simply croak? read and find out!
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- Member Since 20th Aug, 2013
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Hyena King
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Hyena King
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How in the world did you convince yourself that this was a good idea?
There are no words.
Chapters could probably be combined to give a better reading experience. They're too short and clicking the next chapter breaks the experience. I'm not sure if by coincidence, but the same could be said about your paragraphs. They're placed in seemingly scrambled and often provide an erratic storytelling experience.
I'm not sure how much fiction you've read before writing this, but try reading some more and get the hang of things.
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Ok... I haven't read it yet .. But... You posted every chapter...
Well your making this review im going to make quite lengthy
You posted all the chapters at once? WTF, and lol your retelling FIM with OC characters
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unnecessary
1. Not needed or necessary.
2. Done in addition to requirements; unrequired.
3. The OCs in this story.
4. The story itself.
Next time, if you want to put your OCs directly in the story, you should put an AU tag on it.