Rainbow Dash and Applejack share some time together on top of the Equestria State Building, and try to confront some feelings they have bundled up.
Written for EQD's Writer's Training Grounds #002: "Rarity Takes Manehattan".
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housedoc
I'm a person. I like to read about ponies, and I would also like to try and write about ponies. That's all there is to it.
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This was very cute :-) Its well paced for a small story and all those moments from the episode with Appledash fluff is adorable <3
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Thanks, glad someone liked it.
I quite dislike it myself, unfortunately.
I feel in hindsight that I sort of forced this story out of nothing, just to finish it on time.
3761362 Oh I wouldnt worry about it :-P You wrought in scenes from the episode and added Appledash VERY narurally :-D
I cant help but watch the episode now and notice Rainbows hat and all that gosh darn lovey dovey fluff!
Dont put yourself down, you will improve over time I just know it! (Especially,hopefully in appledash<3
You seem to be dissatisfied with your own work, which is a shame, really. Because it's good work. You have a evocative style of writing. You didn't have to go into every single detail to make it believable or understandable. It just... works.
This was a sweet little tale.
Thank you.