The Doctor never meant to find another companion. He'd seen enough pain. After Fluttershy helps him, he's ready to go, spend the rest of time somewhere else, someWHEN else. But when Fluttershy follows him, he's already on his way to a random time. When they show up, they have no idea what to do when they're put up against a lethal enemy: The Weeping Angels. With everything at stake, who can stop them? How about FLUTTERSHY!? Can she help save the doctor, and stop the angels?
Thanks to Romaji on fimfiction for the new cover art. On deviant art he's sporex2-paints. Great job
Hey, its my first fanfic ever! Might add mane six tag later on.
3798889 Sup...
We're tentacle monsters...
And in equestria...
It's the tentacle monster club...
Should be a group...
I saw about three errors.
1. Near the beginning you said regained twice in a row.
2. Handed should be hoofed.
3. Coarse is spelt course.
Otherwise.. I liked this story a lot. I will be giving it a like and a favorite :) I look forward to reading more of this, admittedly because I want Fluttershy to use the stare on the weeping angels. Good luck!
There is no "c" in Dalek. You spell it Daleck. Thought you ought to know
3800257 thanks, I'll fix it later
3800029 thanks for pointing those out I'll have to fix those tommorow.
3799894 the tentacle monster club? Hmmm...
Backstory material eh? Why not go for a situation where talking got her or a friend of her's in trouble, like, for instance, in a court trial or police (I suppose it would actually be Royal Guard) investigation. Believe me, I've seen alot of backstories like that, and the writers pull them off exceptionally well.
Also, nice work with Fluttershy's reaction! She really needs to be featured in a story that brings out her courageous side more often.
3805402 thanks for the idea! Ya have anymore, you can post them. This story is somewhat planned in my head, but I love ideas. And if you like this one, there's one by pen brush that also includes fluttershy and the Doctor. Its good so far. Highly recommended by me.
yo bro have some pinkie!
3824149 thanks
I really like the fic! Keep up the good work!
Hey look! Is that my Aunt Mabel I see in the cover art picture?
No, she's dead. Never mind!
3919783 I know.
the art isn't mine, but maybe ill make my own... TO WORK!!!
3919817 temporary pic, til mine is done
3919783 I messaged myself on accident...
But still getting temporary pic. If you hate, then whatever I made it .
Well, this isn't mine, but mine IS almost done.
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3805402 not sure how I did on the back story, but the OC is mine. If it resembles anyone else's, I can change it.
If this is the Eleventh Doctor, Why did he said Allons-y?
4226906 Technically, the fandom never specified WHICH Doctor it was. I'm probably going to use it, because it's one of my favorites. ONE of, so I will probably use more.
How long have you been working on this? Its very good, the doctor seems to be portrayed as a combination of a few doctors. I'm really fond of how you included river in this... Lets see how it turns out... But no SPOILERS.
Aside note, a friend of mine posted a fic, its called The Power Of Three, if you wouldn't mind reading it and posting i think it would help him
4240907 I think that this one of mine could be better... I'm my biggest critic. And I think it might be buried under the hundreds of fics in my read later list.
Well best of luck with the fic, can't wait to read more chapters. Hopefully your able to get more views, you deserve them. I also believe that we are more critical about our own works, its just how we are sometimes. Good luck and remember... SPOILERS...
4241033 Understood!
YAY!
Oh..I mean... yay!
4226945 Time Turner, the brown stallion, is supposed to be like number 10. That one guy in canterlot with the top hat was 11.fc05.deviantart.net/fs70/f/2011/356/a/7/11th_doctor_whooves_by_tsume_pazur-d4jvhiu.png
This is eleven.
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This is ten.
4450877 Yeah, well, shove off.
4450975 I was just trying to be helpful...
4450985 I know, I was just kidding. Sorry if I upset you.
4450992 It's Okie dokie! Oh dear, I'm turning into Pinkie...