The foals of Ponyville have always enjoyed Hearth's Warming eve, everyone is so cheerful and they get great gifts from their parents. But this years something else has come to pay them all a visit, and it is not happy with how they have been acting. Is hides in the dark and wait from them.
this is a Krampus story, for those who don't know who that is, he punished wicked children.
There is a lot of foalabuse in this story so if you don't want to read that, please don't read this story.
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This is a very good story, and the punishments that are dealt out in it are rather fair and fits the foals they are dealt to; plus, I loved imitating what the Krampus was saying, they were such good lines.
I have a couple of questions though. 1: what happened to Diamond Tiara, though I enjoy seeing her punished, it feels kind of odd that we don't hear anything about her through the rest of the fiction; did Krampus take her to Tartarus to torture her further, and bring her back next year, or did she appear a couple of days after in even vorse condition than the other foals.
2: What is the correct spelling of Fenteutink, English isn't my firste language, so I sometimes struggle with somer words, and it doesn't get better when they are germanized.
Again, very good story, and one I'd probably come back to read again sometime in the near future.
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1. When you are REALLY naughty the Krampus stuffs you in a bag and drags you to hell forever
2.Venturing
Okay, thank you very, very much.
So wait..... explain what the CMC's punishment is?
Surprising, considering that it is Snails. Also, good job on the German Accent for Krampus, considering that he does come from Central Europe.
In my opinion, the ending would have been better if it revealed naughty children of other species from all other nations when Krampus isn't in Ponyville.