What do you do when your taken from your home and dropped into a new world? What do you do when you only know bits and pieces of this new world? and what do you do when you have a tender life to look out for while you adjust to this new world? These are the questions Andy must answer after he has been pulled into Equestria.
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Good story, more please
Damn it!
How dare you catch my interest.
my interests, you has them
good so far, feels a little rushed though
who is lucky? is that Fluttershy's bunny? if so his name is actually Angel
also just after entering Fluttershys house you switched the names around once
good good now ill read chapter 2
like it you have my reading pleasureful
This story is very interesting.I definitely want to see where your heading with this.It's certainly a new approach than most H.I.E.'s.It was a little rushed due to lack of details and short conversations but not overly so.Overall I thinks it's one of the better stories and deserves a thumbs up :).
I approve of this and will be awaiting updates as they come
Cool Chapter.It answer multiple questions and creates even more.I can't wait to see the next update.
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She is just that angry, poor Twily
yay for good health.....
But I have to ask... how does one pony check another ponies prostate?
They have hooves! Not fingers!
(I could not find Rainbow blitz of this so Rainbow will have to stand in)
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Now you know why Baker really didn't want to get a prostate exam
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I have no plans for anything real shipping in this story, it is all about Baker and Light
...Okay, I'll admit it... I sang that song out loud
You made and broke my early morning, guy. I was about to hit the hay, when i saw this get updated. Yet, i must read on!
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EDIT:
Finished reading, and i must say, Andy seems like a know-it-all which rubs the wrong way then off to the right alternating between the two as i read each chapter. The former because i dislike know-it-alls and the latter because I want to see what kind of trouble he'll get into or how the story will progress if he keeps this up. Again it would've been nice to have his back story explained a bit in the 1st chapter.
Another thing is there are several typos and a few grammatical errors to point out, though i don't mind coz i autocorrect when i read. Though the grammar nazis of the site might not appreciate that. All things aside, keep up the good write.
To be honest this was a hard chapter to write, I didn't want to make Derpy's life so awful but i couldn't think of any other way to do it.
You need to make use of descriptions in your story, filling the majority of it with dialogue can make it seem a bit bland.
And that is the end of Baker's story. BTW all the characters introduced in the epilogue are the children of the Mane 6, see if you can figure out who is who.
very nice. The ending does feel somewhat rushed though.
1632485 endings always seem rushed for me
Agree with the others, the story was nice and interresting, until the end wich is totally rushed.
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To be honest, I ran out of ideas. I didn't want the story to limp on so I finished it with a flash forward, I wish I could have done better but this is all I had left.
I love this chapter. I work in a library myself and it's so much easier using the Dewey Decimal System.
You're saying that Equestria has a National Health Service?!?
That's better than I expected. Reading the word 'diapers' in earlier chapters suggested that this was written by an American but to portray Equestria as having a proper welfare system suggests it was written by a Brit. At best I thought that only essential healthcare would be free and the rest would have to be paid for, just not for profit (refer The Ticket Master).
I'm disappointed that there's no analysis of the beliefs and languages mentioned when the protagonist reorganised Ponyville's public library but apart from that, and your acknowledgement of A Canterlot Wedding, this is a marvellous work.
when i was middle school i work at liberty. it was fun for few years.
well fluttershy backstory been undercover now. so your is AU one.
i hate year skip like it ruin the story for sequel and confuse.
I forgot that Pinklestia exists.
I'm surprised Equestria doesn't have an actual organization system for books, and I KNOW how eh, passionate Twilight can be about organization, especially about books. In other fanfics, Twilight rearranges the books so often that no one can remember which books they want. Plus, I haven't seen ponies other than the Mane Six actually go to the library, save for Cheerilee, who prolly occasionally visits for help with her lesson plans.
Sequel please
Yeah Bruce traumatized me when I first saw him.
I can’t go into any body of water in my dreams. But so long as I don’t think about him he doesn’t appear.
Celestia is stubborn, racist, clueless, and dark. Is the best words I can describe my four reasons why I hate Celestia.
Why didn’t you include bananas and cake!?
Oh your names Andy!? I got someone that would like to see ya “reaches behind back and pulls a woody doll from Toy Story.”
What’s an abacus? Is that like the tantubus?
What about gamer Luna.
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Why not Bright Mane? Since Jermaine is kind of part of a pony name.
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Loved the rewrite of “art of the dress!!“
Smart kid!!
What’s this PVA-93 mean?
Oh big tough guy are we!?
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What about cupcakes?
Well that was obviously a quick ending but I can’t help but post this.
Smart guy. I'll await his exploits
Holy crap, Andy really doesn't beat around the bush. He went straight for the stem, tore the root out, ground the entire thing into shreds, burned the mix down, smoothen the ashes, and snorted it down his throat.
It's a bit fast for my liking but it's a nice break from the convoluted intros a lot of newer fanfics have.
Classic, Dewey Decimal System.
Old fics really have a lot of these.
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Most likely a postal system of some kind.
I kinda like how Baker' speedrunning the whole "Settling into Equestria" thing.
That is a load of exposition.
That's an abrupt ending, but better than nothing really. Thank you for completing the story.