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Just before going to the cinema, Pewdiepie and his girlfriend Marzia are sucked by a portal and left in Equestria.
Why where they there? Whas it destiny? Or was it some's draconequus fault?
Advise: If you don't like or hate pewdiepie, make everyone a favor and DON'T READ THIS. This fic is for bros and people that won't hate if they don't like it.
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So far good, only time can tell if it will take off.
3688031 Thank you. I shall do my best.
I think it's a very interesting story idea. Have a thumbs up!
It was good at first but that last line has me hooked
Oh God...
Don't mean to be a dick, but Christoper Odd beats pewdiepie hands down.
Anyway, onto the story.
I don't get peoples' obsession with youtube people but i'll let that drop for now. Your fic is fairly well written (I'm not much of a judge i'm afraid) and it was easy to understand. A whole lot of screaming going on and at times the speech seemed a little bland but eh, once again i'm not really in a position to critizise.
While I don't think I will continue to read this fic (purely because of the subject) I don't think it is awfull enough to warrent a down-vote. My suggestions are to just maybe spice up the speech between characters with a larger varitiy of words and all that jazz and also prehaps focus a little more on characterisation before jumping right into the plot. This is probably redundant considering your MC is pewdiepie and no-doubt a large number of people will already know him but it can't hurt to fleash him out a bit for those not familiar with him.
All in all this fic has potential so I will possibly look at it later but for now i'm going to give it a pass.
3688745 I can understand that you won't read because of the character, and i respect that.
For the dialogue subject: I will try to have better dialogues between characters when they meet the main six.
Thank you for commenting.
>that cover art
do not want
God I hate Pewdiepie. I don't care how well written the story is, Pewdiepie just ruins everything.
HEY I WANT SEVEN DISLIKES ON MY COMMENT TO.
3690970 Oh thank god! I'm not the only seeing that.
3689204 I feel stupid for commenting this but...
I don't understand your comment
Please don't hate me.
3691808 He hates the cover art.
3691808 It was made in pony creator. Like every bad cover art is.
Guys, if you don't want it, don't read or comment on it
I dunno why so may people are disliking this, it's writen better than a thug I've done
3694240 One word:
Protagonist
I think...
3690501 I am sure that there are people who are worse. Baraka: You really gonna be like that
3694237
Why don't you make me because that's never going to happen.
Posting a story on a public forum such as this means you will get good comments and bad comments. Some are warranted and some aren't and this includes the good comments. The idea is that you can't dictate what kind of comments you're going to get and if you try you're probably going to garner a lot more negativity than you would otherwise.
As for this story, I don't like it. Part of that stems from the fact that I really don't like Pewdiepie. So I give this thumbs down and state my displeasure at such a story. Deal with it.
3694334
Wouldn't it be better for all of us and the sake of the author to just thumbs down and leave?
3690501 It's not really Pewdiepie that's bad, it's just that his fan base is... Ugh.
3694399 If we did that they wouldn't know why we don't like their story.
if you don't like then you can
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Hm.. I wonder how pewdiepie will react if he sees a barrel in equestria
3694399 Not really. People need to know what's wrong with their fics or they'll keep making the same mistakes. If you stop criticizing fics, bad ones are going to flood the site.
This is for all past and future comments: Seriously people, if you don't like a story, who it's based on, or the story line, then don't thumbs down it or leave a nasty comment, just go back to the home page or exit the site. Comments are for when you have something positive to say or ask if you got confused on a part, not hate. If you hate Pewdiepie, big woop, leave and move on, don't just sit there and write nothing but hate, do you have nothing better to do in your lives than criticize peoples story.
If you ain't got something nice to say, then don't say anything at all.
GamerAlPedo, your doing real good, don't let other people say otherwise. I want to see this story finished.
3696023
No use in trying to explain, they'll just keep giving unnecessary comments that is not needed nor constructive criticism
ok let me just say first i so far think that this is exactly how pewds would react if this happened. Now secondly i'll move on to what i have to say to the people and YOU know who YOU are if you are going to downvote a story leave a comment afterwards letting the author know why you downvote it cause if you don't we all just assume you were just being an insensitive imbecile and just couldn't have the common courtesy to write out an explenation. Thank you that is all
3694458 some of them can be a little....ya but all in all he ain't a bad guy
3696023 Um... If you don't like a story, isn't that what the downvote button is for?
3697480 Yeah, that was basically my point.
3694399
Sure, that would be great if you didn't want to hurt the author's feelings with actual reasons why you didn't like the story and instead just have them sit there in confusion why everybody hates it without saying why they hate it.
Meh, it's Pewdie's VOICE that irritates the fuck outta me. This being a fanfic, is going on my, "Rainy Day" list.
OH DEAR LORD!!! THAT IS THE BEST PORTAL IN THE UNIVERSE!!!
3694541 Sure, just let me leave a dislike while I grab my coat.
3696023
Actually, if I don't have anything nice to say, I can say it because it's my right as an American citizen, you fucking Communist.
#1stAmendment
I honestly like this story. I don't see what's so wrong about it. I mean, yeah there aren't that many Pewdiepie fans, but that's probably what the majority of the dislikes are from. Other than editing errors that can be easily fixed, and the pacing, this is pretty promising!
I'll give not only a like, not only a favorite, but a Spike Moustache
, and a Trolling Celestia! 
Hmm, let's take a look at the description to see if this will be good.
Very poor image with two badly posed OCs? Check.
Summary that is completely dull? Check.
Description filled to the brim with spelling and grammar errors? Check.
Pretentious note on the description which is bold and also filled with errors? Check.
Well, I don't think I need to even read this to know the level of quality it'll end up being.
keep up the great story
3701735 Thank you, I will.
3701632 Thanks. You and the people giving like are the reason I keep writing this.
3701727 ... Technically they are ponyfied humans
REAL LIFE humans
As a pewdiepie fan
I VOTE FOR CAT MARIO
PEOPLE. I HAVE A VERY SIMPLE SOLUTION.
DON'T LIKE? DON'T READ.
EDIT: Wow, what's with the thumbs down? That wasn't even an opinion. It was just me using my brain. You know, That grey mushy thing between your ears?
3707203 I hate that