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Autumnschild


Words are coming.

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Dear Twilight Sparkle,

You’re invited to Sugarcube Corner for a fantastically important Hearth’s Warming Eve event! Hope to see you soon!

P.S. You like being scared, right? Okay, good!

See you later with my alligator,

-Pinkie Pie


Special thanks to Blood Lord for pre-reading.

Chapters (4)
Comments ( 15 )

There was no Ponyville.

What a :twistnerd:.

Have some of this :heart:, and this :heart::heart:, and especially some of this :heart::heart::heart:.

AC, this was gold, plain and simple.

By the way, what was in the presents?

That reminded me
"There was a hole. It's gone now" - Silent Hill 2 :pinkiecrazy:

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I wrote out a few things, but in the end I wasn't happy with any of them. I will leave it to your imagination.

That was mind-bendingly awesome, especially the very end.

Oh, you. :unsuresweetie:

"Never look the gift horse in the mouth."

SONOFABITCH. HOW DID I NOT SEE THAT COMING. My sides!

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I think it works best if you assume they're just standard gifts you would give to those characters. Something Wonderbolts for Dash, some kind of book for Twilight, and so on. It's so much funnier if you take the way ending portrays the Gift Horse and just run with it to the logical conclusion.

Haha couldn't stop imagining the drowning in horseshoes YouTube mlp reviewer guy.

This story is criminally under read!

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Thanks for your comment! I have a nasty habit of writing hidden gems it seems. Could be worse. :pinkiesmile:

THE PUNCHLINE JUST BLEW MY MIND:pinkiegasp: ...and its gone...:pinkiecrazy:

I didn't understand who it was, but I thought it would be Santa.

I saw the punchline coming from a mile away, but good job! :twilightsmile:

4638261 it was santa claus... in a rubber horse mask. from an alternate universe.

Both ridiculous and delightful. "Squeaky little horse things", and Raritys' reactions to the grabbers are extremely amusing. And while I saw the words of the ending coming, the manner in which we got there, and the way in which they were used was a very funny surprise.

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