Fast but I like it... More please.

This is great I am loving it.

great story...updates a little long but still one of my favs

3816978 Sadly it won't be updated again till mid February
3814570 Trust me this isn't fast, if I was being fast they would be F***ing each other already.
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Notha chapta plz........

4052527 I'm really trying to get one out as soon as I can, but fact is school is raping my free time. My finals are in May, so I don't really have any time for writing. However I do have a little free time during the end of March through April so I may be able to get something done.

4052840 Pinkie: Let's have a party for the new chapter coming soon! *hops around* Me: YESSS!!! *jumps around feriously*

This is wierd... I like it!!

The Usain Bolt?

I want more

And also the arbiter

Mostly arbiter

4902728 Next chapter will be done by Sunday at 11pm GMT roughly. No, I'm not joking when I say this. I'm back for now again.

4932349 All will be explained in time. Especially Chief having slightly more emotion than what you may be used to seeing from our static 7ft hero of badassdom.

Nooooooo you turned the chief in to a pony how could you:'(

4936386 Because PONIES ARE BAD ASS AS ALL HELL YEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAHHHHH.

4937454 no just no i like ponys but they are not badass in anyway........only luna wait what?

I believe THIS is a real example of Cheif's personality

4932546 am I right to say that luna reminds chief of cortana?

5038124 *Taps nose* I ain't saying nothing. I just needed the time to finish the next chapter, which after a long time has actually happened.

5039997 No... one year

5533686 If you knew the hell that year was you'd wish you couldn't have lived it........ surprise. I'm not dead yet it seems, somehow this year I've been given free time and stuff to do in it that doesn't make me want to cry in a corner. So I guess you could say I'm back partly, I still need to finish my school year (10 weeks till exams) and then, then I should be fully back. And I know that there is absolutely no reason for people to read either of my novels after all this time, I absolutely understand it if people just say "fuck it he took too long" because I know I did. And all I can do is apologise and say that despite what I said last year I ask that you try to understand that last year.... it was a personal living hell for me. But I'm past that, this year I'll pick myself up and dust myself of. I'm already working on new chapters for both of my stories and they should be done as soon as possible giving my currently limited free time due to exam revision.

But hear, hear I arrive on my pale horse. Ready to finish this fight. I will never forget what last year was for me, but I will move on. I still care for you readers and everyday that I couldn't write I actually felt like punching a wall because its my favourite hobby and not being able to have a chance to sit down and do it made me feel even worse especially know that I let quite a lot of people down.

https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=q_pAa9252Uo

5557482 Welcome back, can't wait to see what becomes of this year and good luck :)

5726566 yuss, got a reply, it's about ammo! :P

How long until the next chapter

5796448 Its all dependent on when I actually have free time. I have exams just after Easter holidays (Scottish Easter holidays), so free time is kinda getting shot in the foot left, right and centre. Sorry, I know people really want a new chapter but academics comes first over hobbies. Sorry to keep you all waiting like this but I should be able to finish off the chapter during the 1st week of my Easter holiday... hopefully *touches wood*. However after May 15th I am completely done with my exams so I will actually have free time between work and everything else in life.

WHERES THE ARBITER?

5826457 Maybe you'll see him pop up soon. Who knows.

5832162 please more chapters

I can imagine when Big Mac get his ass kicked

is the Arbiter married to Twilight? If she is, then she's extremely lucky to have him.

6313998 Not married no, more like really close friends. But that's just at the current point of the story. I never actually decided whether or not to have them in a relationship.

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I understand, but if you do decide to put them together, it would be a very good pairing, but that's just my opinion on the matter. This is your story write it how you wish.

Are you still writing this story because it's awesome you can't just leave such well written story alone to gather dust.
Please say you are still writing this story

6528361 Rest assured. I am trying to find the time to write. Trying being the keyword. Writing is a hobby and regrettably hobbies come second in life. So as usual shit keeps turning up to stop me doing my hobbies, writing being the foremost one affected. I expect to get some free time this weekend. So maybe, hopefully I can actually get my arse into gear.

6529380 well thanks for letting me know it means a lot to me

Dead?

6541000 No. Dealing with my life comes first before a hobby.

6545760 kk. Just confirming. Do wha tty you gotta do

hows the story going

Oh well...

Its ok but its missing a bunch of halo lore

7654076 It ain't. Trust me on that one. Also its only three chapters in, so you don't actually know what else I could put in there.

plz continue the storie