Commander Shepard lives with a bloodstained past. All the choices he made leading up to the moment Death takes him for good.
At least that's what the Commander thought.
Finding himself in a land with all kinds of mythical creatures (mainly technicolor ponies), where war and violence have no place, he must choose to let go of the past be absorbed by Equestria's hidden darkness.
Little does he know that Fate kept him from Death for a reason.
A long vanquished enemy will return with a vengeance, shedding light on parts of history that were better left in the shadows.
Chapters (2)
i think there's a word missing here , in the Description
I think it's really good, can't wait to see where it goes from here :D keep up the good work
I loved it and I hope to see more of it
Really creative, I love the way you mix science and magic, and the ponies are totally in character. This is as well written as a real episode!
Interesting but I feel it requires some editing.
Good Luck!
so far it's good! i like it
if he's alive he can be found. they have geth, enough said.
Oh boy. This is going to be one heck of a day for Shepard. Who cares this is going to be fun, and a vacation for him.
Hey, sorry for the wait everypony^^
The next chapter is done, and now I just have to type it. I'll get it out as soon as I can!
Go on... Go on
Well this is interesting
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I am looking forward to continue this story
Spoken like a true Krogan.
7633960 Yup, which reminds me...I really need to stop procrastinating and write the next chapter :p
7635372 yes, yes you do.
7635375 *groans* If only I hadn't lost the paper copy of the next chapter >~>
7635379 that's why I just write coded shorthand notes in my journal.
Example : Quantum Jump/ Era po/ Edin Prime/ monk/ mta jmps/ Wted/ explore/ Nightingale descend/ trapped temple/ (see Maya Origins) / plasma rapid pistols / Nightingale Scouts / sp in mo.
7635391 oooh, neat!
7635399 And impossible to figure out too! Only they who writes it knows the code.
And what if it told you that short message contains the plotline for the whole story?
7635440 I'd be impressed :3
7636264 can you understand it at all?
7636330 not really
7637926 he he he......................That's the point. You should try it sometime. Useful for those sudden moments of inspiration.