Cool! I wish for more!

Oh come o. You just have to picture him falling into the bed face first

Not even bothering to move so he can talk

I always like a halo crossover with mlp. But they way Master Chief talks and acts so far doesn't portray his character to well. He is seen as a man of few words and doesn't feel like an average person would with emotions. At the end of Halo 3 and 4 we just barley get to see him show feeling over the loss of SGM Johnson and Cortana. A good way to start with his development with emotions would be depression from Cortana's death, also more calm about his currant situation. Chief isn't one to panic and I don't think he would be so quick to trust a new unknown race of colorful ponies. The way the two princesses talk and interact with Chief isn't what you'd expect. But the way they do with each other I find ok because there still sisters and there always should be time for them to act as two sisters should. But I still like the story regardless so nothing but love from me. Thumbs up!

clips for the sniper, fifteen clips for the DMR, fifteen clips for the assault rifle, four clips for the magnums

I think this is the part where everyone screams "They're magazines, not clips!!"

5405521 It is now the part where I must say, their magazines not clips.

Now to the part I explain the difference, A magazine like on most modern weapons stays with the gun and feeding rounds (Usually via a spring pushing them up) them up into the chamber until it is empty where then the user inserts a fresh one to continue firing, key phrase is stays in the gun

A clip is more uncommon and just used to quickly reload a weapon the best example is the stripper clip used to load the M1 Grand or a speed reloader for the revolver.

Here is a link to Wikipedia on the matter

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Real One: I know that you commented a long time ago, but, I this writer sees Celestia as a open-heart motherly goddess, and Luna as hr little curious sister, which I think is very great, if I have my preferences.