The story is cancelled
I'm sorry to everyone who asks me to continue, but I'm not ready yet to write in English again, good god.
Matt Garetty has spent two years looking for answers that can absolve his doubts, traveling through the Earth, seeking an explanation for his psychic abilities, while escaping the consequences of the events in Seattle, which has marked the history as the ultimate proof that humans can develop psychic abilities.
Living a nomadic life, traveling from town to town, evading the authorities, who have made an exhaustive search for his capture.
While in Equestria, a mare show, channels an invocation to bring a being to be taught powerful magic based in stories (poorly founded).
But something did not went well.
Result: Matt is invoked by the Great and Powerful Trixie
Now in this world full of magical ponies, mythological creatures and situations that are strange and awkward, Can Matt survive the challenges faced in this new world?, How the ponies react to Matt's psychic abilities?
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A Chronicle crossover with MLP Friendship Is Magic, this my first fic, the English is not my native language, I accept constructive criticism.
Your could really use an editor. Ask around in a group like this one. Good luck!
Is this gonna be like a piano man? Where Trixie traps him or something? I hope not..I hate Trixie :P
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Alot of EDIT:
I'm more concerned about Trixie if she antagonize Matt
I expect moar chapters!
Hey, I'll edit this. Really needs it, no offense. Pm if you want, but before you do. Know that I use email to receive chapters. And I'll send it back in copy and past form hehe.
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, but someone is already helping me
thanks for offering
3586209 damn, alright then. Um unless you remove the story from the group of editors. You should write that you have help in the description. Helps me and others out
I need a villain
Yayyy. Thanks for the update, I'm just hoping that he won't be a pushover. He should be able to get out of the shackles easily!
3663235 It would be hilarious if he went like the boss from saints row 4 when he kicked zinyaks but.
3663360 oh for the love of god make this happen xD
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3663179 so Doctor Bright is your villian for now? Anyways keep the updates coming k.
I'm really sorry, I couldn't get very far into the story due to the linguistic challenge. The premise is okay, but the grammar Nazi in me kept me from enjoying your story. Again, sorry.
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don't worry bro, I understand and you support me with your comment
edit: but heck, I will not stop, I have the idea in my head and I'll write like a madman
Are you planning on continuing this?
Pleas continue
So......is this going to go anywhere, or is it dead? Because the concept has a lot of potential.
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I'm so sorry