Jul

21st

2020

So what now? · 5:29pm Jul 21st, 2020

Ok, I finished editing my second story but along the way were a few hindrances that help me be more critical with my writing.

Some of them were understandable and others were infuriating.

Here I left the logs of my editing and some comments of those times.

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Do you believe in Ghosts? A Ghost team, stranded in a new world, goes to war alongside the Equestrians. by Material Defender 145,471 words · 1,196 · 45
ARTICLE 2 An alien crash lands in Equestria. It calls itself human. by Muppetz 228,756 words · 5,174 · 177
Living in Equestria A young man finds himself in a world beyond his wildest imagination... by Blazewing 613,909 words · 1,551 · 123
The Equestrian Wind Mage Classic: Season 1 After a teleportation spell goes wrong, Vaati finds himself in Equestria. The world's most powerful mage is about to learn about the world's most powerful magic: Friendship. by LordSiravant 142,202 words · 1,473 · 48
We will catch you if we can When put against a whole new race, a human must keep on running for the sake of his freedom by proto-alpha 89,165 words · 753 · 98

and many more!

Smashing Down A partial Ace Combat: Assault Horizon crossover. A Russian MVD Spetsnaz team find themselves in the wreckage of their Mi-24... Without a clue as to where they are, they will find that they are not alone, and under attack from everything around them. by Merchent343 0 words · 403 · 36
Recasted What if during the Summer Sun Celebration, Twilight didn't meet the rest of the main six? What if she met different ponies? What new things would she learn from these different ponies? by The Fiery Joker 86,930 words · 381 · 36