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Your evil knows no bounds Malideus .... planning on stealing Christmas .... my god
I wanna see a chapter titled "Ain't Nobody Got Time For That". It'd be hilarious.
Ponies believe you are either good are evil it's just black and white for them, they just can't say malideus can't be evil despite not being able to fully corrupt the crystal heart, because he's a human. Humans are neither good nor evil inherently we are true neutral beings we can be whatever we want when we want so any argument that celestia, cadance or even luna can make about his alignment are invalid!
We each choose which rules we live by!!!
http://easydamus.com/trueneutral.html
Yeah the horn snapping was a little much
This guy is crazy!!!!
The story is good.
But it is getting a bit redundant through
Yes, let the hate flow through you...
I wouldn't touch you with a... 49 and a half foot poll!
You sir, have managed to keep me away from studying for finals for a good 30 mins. That deserves a thumbs up in my book.
...See? a botched spell and Another Chuckle-fuck of a follower! I called it!
Now Malideus' posse is uncomfortably similar to my own circle of friends... Steal Christmas, Malideus, but do not fail where Grinch did.
Godspeed, Gentleman.
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I saw what you did there
Grinch reference!!! WOO!
hmmmmm.......needs more bitch slapping
I'll stick with the sea-sick crocodile.
3644667 How else would he summon the demon?
3644849 Instead of stealing presents he steals children?
3645259As a more serious fic? Yes. For comedy? This is the fic.
Just in time for Christmas..
He should propably think about recruiting a small army one of these days. Twilight wasn't the only one with a horn on her head. Maybe he could even start to experiment with different reagents.
3645259 I like and read them both They've got different directions, both of which intrigue me quite a lot.
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Except the problem is Chris isn't WRITTEN like a normal human with realistic goals. He's just doing what he's doing just because it's evil and it's what people expect evil people to do. Now admittedly, having Luna show up in his dream to try and actually point out he's not whom he wants us to THINK he is, that's good, as is TRYING to talk a LITTLE about his past, which we desperately need to know considering he know very little about him. But he hasn't got very realistic goals nor does he behave like a real person. He's essentially the young equivalent of that guy in a black top hat and moustache who ties people to train tracks for not paying their rent. Now, that can be FUNNY if done right, of course. But the problem is his story seems confused about what it wants to be. There are parts that work well, but they're tragically buried under a mass of cruelty that seems borderline misanthropic, and his actions aren't funny, they're just harsh. Like breaking off her horn, then ordering the demon to rape her.
Alright, that's it. Malideus has officially become a Saturday morning cartoon villain.
Hmmm, you know, I don't think Malideus's head is screwed on just right.
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This is my problem with the story and you. When Chris does something horrific and cruel, you say that that's perfectly fine, but if anybody else even does anything remotely close to it, or even does something as basic as invading his dreams to try and reason with him and get him to understand what he's doing is wrong, all you say is off with their heads! They deserve to be raped and killed! But it's okay when the PROTAGONIST is a jerk because...because...uhhh...look! He's stealing Christmas!
You can't have a hypocritical double standard like this. It's not okay for him to do morally questionable things but for him to insist he's in the right to punish others for their morally questionable actions, it just makes him look like a jerk who thinks he doesn't have to be held accountable for his actions.
Everything that has befallen him was a result of him making poor decision after poor decision. He's the one that started all of this by not only insulting the mane six, but attacking them, stealing their stuff, killing innocent people, trying to commit genocide, and attacking their leaders. But he refuses to acknowledge that what he has done is wrong, or insists that he doesn't care and that he's somehow justified in what he does just because he doesn't like their lifestyle. This is not the way normal people act. He hasn't expressed any desire to go home, doesn't talk about how he misses his family, doesn't even talk about his likes or dislikes! Who IS Chris? We know next to nothing about him the chapters into the story. This needs to change.
I honestly forgot Mal's real name half we through this awesome story Let's see how this little plan go, shall we?
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Yes, that's equivalent to anything he's done to them for no reason other than KICKS. He invaded THEIR lands and tried to take over. He does not get to expect privacy after all he did. He had chance after chance to just STOP what he was doing and he blew it over and over, just deciding to be evil just BECAUSE and deciding to destroy everything just because he can and because he wants everything done HIS way with no consideration for the needs of others. That's called fascism. Characters like him make good antagonists to act as a foil for the main protagonist. Ones this flat who are not given any real backstory or motivation beyond why they do what they do other than "just because" make for poor protagonists. There is nothing TO this guy!
So cheesy, yet so funny!!!!
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Yes, one doesn't involve killing anyone for fun. Like he wants to.
Also, it's not that impossible to think up. I'm willing to give the author some credit because dreams are often about our own lives, our subconscious fears or likes or dislikes made clear. So I'm willing to give that point a pass, especially because it's been the ONLY real instance of something actually being revealed about Chris's backstory after ten chapters which basically amount to "Chris is a jerk to someone, a fight ensues, he does nasty things and runs away". The story is basically just Chris dicking around Equestria and being a dick. That doesn't make for a very compelling, nor a very funny story. Beating people up and using lots of swears isn't funny. Real humor requires set ups, planning, cause and effect. What he's doing isn't even humorous in a slapstick fashion, it comes off more like violence towards women.
You have to make Malideus force Whip to turn into a dog with a horn.
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That is not a backstory. Your main character's backstory should not be able to fit on a Post-it note.
Well that was an interesting chapter. I'm kinda surprised that Mizzy didn't at least ask, "Where is Trixie?" I'm sure she at least thought it. After all, she suggested the alliance. I'm sure there is still time to get her back, but not much till morning and things going wrong where she gets the other ponies to storm the cave.
Well obviously the summoning failed cause he used a substitute, an alicorn horn, instead of a unicorn horn. You never want to do that as an inexperienced summoner. Only an experience one that could craft their own summoning spell would know how to adjust the ritual correctly.
So you're having him play the role of the Grinch. Interesting
Well we'll see if Whip starts impersonating Twilight in the next chapter.
I seems kinda strange that he would decide to do something so trivial as try to ruin a Christmas-like holiday. All it really does is get people mad at you and a few sad faces. Unless he does it in a clever way, which would be to set Twilight up as the Grinch and make people hate her. That's actually pretty clever. She would be broken in spirit and easier to extract information from.
He should try to use a growth spell to grow unicorn horns in order to have an endless supply of them. I wonder if you could do it with only the horn? For example snap the horn in half use the spell on both of them and presto, you have two horns now.
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No, I just don't like advertising on other stories.
I don't do it to others, they should not do it to me.
Evil is the solution to everything
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Evil and grinchiness.
3646513 It has a dark tag for a reason......................
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Oh, boo fuckin' hoo. You want a night light?
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Many apologies, good sir, but I must ask you to stop complaining about how dark it is. That's what the tag is for.
3647961........fuckin hell....now I look like a complete piece of shit. When the hell did you add the Gore Tag!? That (imo) is the difference between Dark, and Grimdark.....I'll just...erase my unintentional "spam".
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It's okay, I did add them a little late, purely my fault.
Again, many apologies.
3647809 You call this grim/dark?!? You obviously don't read much fanfiction.
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You're giving away nightlights? I can haiz? It gets dark in this box..
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*gives minecraft torch*
You will need this for your cubical home.
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Yay!
*Accidentally lites box on fire*
NOOOOO safety torch why?