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I hope so, because this fucker took a day and a night to create.
HAHAHAHAHAHA
4195811
It tends to get confusing when the characterization is next to nonexistent, doesn't it?
4196212
Maybe, for the next crossover we might have, they invade and it'll probably go something like this:
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Ha! Like he's going to ever THINK about those two again!
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You know, there is still the possibility of these two invading...
Here's a secret:
they stole the Red Soapstone of the Nudist INvader.They have a mark in Ponyville4196306
Remember, though, Malideus can call Giantdad as his homie, Saints Row style. Hmm... that just gave me an idea.
...Nathan is gonna need something powerful ta fix dat mouth.
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What can we say? Always angry, all the time.
Okay now. No wonder you have the random tag on this story. I think my mind exploded.
It feels odd now that his inner voice is now practically a separate sentient being. I think he's just going insane.
I almost thought Nathan would finally recognize Mal for his former friend. I guess that's not till later.
So is there finally going Tobi a point? (See what I did there? ) I mean he's pretty much conquered everything. Canterlot has fallen. All he needs is to demand surrender and it's pretty much his. You're starting to get to the point where this happens.
or this
or you may end up at this point
Perhaps you just need to throw a huge threat to the entire world their way. Then after that the entire galaxy, the entire universe, then the entire multiverse. Finally it would be the real world. Must save it from bad fanfiction.
I'm sure that would occupy them enough till he finally realized who he really is, what he really wants and say The End. Anyway enough rambling.
Good chapter. Lots of laughs. Look forward to the next one.
hahaha i love it! two of my favorite storys in one! what next?! till next time keep up the good work!
Angry marine reference woo hoo
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...so...two people...from the Naruto universe....just....pop in...to randomly help....
This is why the story is bad. This is a big lipped alligator moment. Deus ex machinas just pop up to help the unlikable protagonist succeed at everything JUST BECAUSE HE NEEDS TO GET OUT OF A SITUATION HE PUT HIMSELF IN. You can't just toss in people from other fandoms randomly into your story to automatically fix whatever issue your main protagonist is having troubles with, that's BAD WRITING, it's a cop out!
The amount of Dark Souls in this story is too damn high!
And, I'm okay with that.
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To me it seems like this story went off the rails and has no clear sense of direction.
4196881 Oh, it does. It's just that the story he crossed it over with in this chapter was absolutely... random. Yeah, let's go with that.
Also, Gordon. Is that the actual name of the demon being held in the dungeons or did he just make it up to call it something. If it is the actual name, how did he know what to call it?
"Mein gott..." I muttered aloud, but Giantdad payed me no mind, focusing instead on protecting me from the wall of guards that stood before him, causing me to realize something incredible: I just summoned Giantdad, and he's (more or less) on my side! Eat your heart out, Celestia!
I was kind of waiting for The Wall to be summoned too, but dear god, did I have a giggling fit.
Also am dying from anticipation from waiting for my OC to make it's appearance.
4195811 Well, I'm the element of Confusion but even I have limits of confusion! Malideus seems to be more of a walking deus ex machina with a constant randomness for sake of humour complex that means I like the situations he causes like the Giant Dad summoning, yet hate the character. Now, characters that just seem to be fragments of different personalities can be done very well, but Malideus feels more like a tool for causing trouble and walking wit dispenser than character. Now, he is meant to be fragmented due to outside influences like the Narrator, but when taken too far like this, it's annoying to read through.
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The amount of Dark Souls in the entire "Humans Acting Villainous" universe is juuuust right ^_^.
I actually did beat a Giantdad one time...though it was from pure luck and dark sorceries.
I played with just default Brigand's Armor +10, +15 Zweihander, Tin Darkmoon Catalyst with 36 faith and 34 intelligence(Tin Darkmoon Catalyst scales with Faith, which is sweet),and I had the Greatshield of Artorias(Fucking amazing Greatshield,highest base stability in the game.) I had Pursuers, Dark Bead, Dark Orb, and Chameleon in my lineup for spells. Why Chameleon? Because I love telling those invaders to stop breaking the queen's pots while being a pot.
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Yes, how dare I point out how utterly random, out of nowhere and unfitting it is for these two to just pop in NAND immediately fix a problem the villainous protagonist has. What am I, a guy who expects a good story! (Rolls eyes) Nah, I must be just a hater! In fact, that's the only reason ANYONE could POSSIBLY dislike ANYTHING at all!
4196718 ... no they are from a partner fanfic... They were cosplaying as was the main character from all these types of fics.
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You can't just suddenly decide to do a crossover 25 chapters into a story! This sort of thing has to be built up. You have to say that you're doing a crossover at the very beginning of your tale! Or at least put in a disclaimer that says that people from other works might pop in for a cameo every now and then!
Imagine how you'd feel if James T Kirk from Star Trek suddenly popped in to the third Star Wars movie. You be thinking that it made no sense and it was just plain stupid and silly.
4198151 It has been built up. The authors use each others often it is part of the League's thing. It fits the authors style and is part of his groups coalition method. If you knew the author and what group he writes for you should have seen it coming. Not to mention all the other beings from other worlds...
I hope that helps explain things.
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Okay, look, I'm sorry this turned out as terrible as it did, but it was a late-night effort, and I'm sorry. Tell you all what, I'll make it up to you next chapter. I'll add some direction, a goal, some punishment, all the works of a good story. Trust me, I'll make this work. Hell, I'll even throw in an epic final fight and some cake.
I have seen the error of my ways, and am working to repent for them, just hold your horses, kay? Next chapter will be the best, I promise.
4198587 I wasn't complaining. I actually liked the chapter, specially when he summoned Giantdad. Was just pointing out to the other dude that the reason this chapter was so random was because it involved a crossover with the other story that happened to be really random.
4198587
... I just can't think of anything to say.
Calm your tits bro, add some filler. Everyone loves filler. And shamelessly gay guys prancin- oh wait, not allowed to say that here.
4198151
Ah, look who's come crawling back. Run out of perfectly good stories to troll, have we?
4198612
Oh, okay.
Well, glad you liked it! Though if you have any suggestions, feel free to voice them. I just love new ideas!
4198680
"Run out of perfectly good stories to troll"? So by your own admission this story sucks?
4198687 No suggestions, you're doing great on your own. But you never answered my question from my original comment.
4197870 Do you want to see malideus die?
Y/N
So Nathan is suposed to be the "classical HiE" suddenly getting an "indestructible armor", "saving the world" and whining about how earth is evil and humans are bastards.Interesting element.
4198151
Now you expect THIS story to make any sense.
4198693
As the writer of the two ninjas, I can safely say that my own story sucks. Go criticise my half of it.
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Eh, It's actually Gondon. But as for his name, I may have to fix that later.
Ponies don't even care about the guards.
Why are Nathan, the Mane 6, and the guards all so unrealistic?
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wat?
Ohh shit... Did you just make Nathan a 'evil' guy for a few seconds? Or that green guy in Dick Figures?
And Now they have Chakara power... (Naruto vs Tobi in Naruto Shippuden: Ultimate ninja storm[ skip to 45:02])
This is going to be Glorious...
And BTW I have no idea who should be who... Mal'= Naruto or Tobi same to Nathan= Tobi or Naruto. IDK
Shrek is love Shrek is life
Original Story
>I was only 9 years old
>I loved Shrek so much, I had all the merchandise and movies
>I pray to Shrek every night before bed, thanking him for the life I've been given
>"Shrek is love" I say; "Shrek is life"
>My dad hears me and calls me a faggot
>I know he was just jealous of my devotion for Shrek
>I called him a cunt
>He slaps me and sends me to go to sleep
>I'm crying now, and my face hurts
>I lay in bed and it's really cold
>Suddenly, a warmth is moving towards me
>It's Shrek
>I am so happy
He whispers into my ear "This is my swamp."
>He grabs me with his powerful ogre hands and puts me down onto my hands and knees
>I'm ready
>I spread my ass-cheeks for Shrek
>He penetrates my butt-hole
>It hurts so much but I do it for Shrek
>I can feel my butt tearing as my eyes start to water
>I push against his force
>I want to please Shrek
>He roars in a mighty roar as he fills my butt with his love
>My dad walks in
>Shrek looks him straight in the eyes and says "It's all ogre now."
>Shrek leaves through my window
>Shrek is love. Shrek is life.
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Oh... Kay...
I can feel Malideus's pain having to deal with two little shits that push the fucking buttons just to see what'll happen. Gotta hustle dat babysitter SWAG.
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Toni and tosh I were really annoying thank god they won't be back in this story right..?
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