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MMA moves? Nice, i value such skill. You got my attention here. And PIMP-slap was glorious.
So, Luna is defeated and likely converted, what happened next?
P.S. Dath Vulcan still better.
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Ugh, I know.
Hard to compete with the sith, after all.
But I thank you for your kind words, and as for your question, I don't know what happens next. Maybe I'll make it up as I go along? Maybe someone will give me an idea? Only time will tell.
3693631
Chrysalis comes to Mal and offer to crash Celestia together. After being aсknowledged she IS Chrysalis, he slaps her, hunts her down to hive and then beats to pulp. And Whip gets a chance to land Thanks-for-ruined-childhood kick.
But who wanna hear about this.
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That certainly SOUNDS like Malideus...
I'll consider it.
The fight with Luna could have been better, but I like the idea of Luna now being under Mals control. Mind-control via bitch-slapping.
Poor Luna, she got stomped. But we got to see that Chris still has SOME good in his heart, no matter how hard he denies it. Good chapter :D
3693720
Eh, I rushed it. Sue me.
3693722
Why thank you.
However, I feel that his humiliation of Luna may have backfired.
First off, does his helmet represent his identity as Malideus? Without his helmet, can he still identify himself as Malideus, Evil overlord?
And second:
Is this true, or is he just very tired and making a joke?
3693735
No, without his helmet, he is Chris, but with it, he is Malideus.
As for your second question, It's a little bit of both.
3693750 So if he were to lose his helmet, would he suffer a breakdown, and Mizzy or Whip would need to retrieve his helmetto get Malideus back?
3693754
I suppose.
3693762 Couldn't he go on a rampage as Chris?
3693764
No, because Chris is a naive-as-fuck, goody-goody shy guy who is vastly incapable of destroying or harming anything.
3693772 K thanks for clearing that up for me.
3693774
No problem.
Oh my God... If you're going to do a sequel to this, make it like, maybe several centuries or melennia in the future and then have some cultist or other keep the staff as a holy relic... That'd be awesome... The Cult of Malideus! All hail his Pimp Hand!!
3693782
Will do, bro.
Another amazing chapter to an amazing story. Keep up the good work sir
Now we see Nightmare Moon: First General under Overlord Malideus
Out of curiousity, had Maladius ever refilled on pocket sand in case of an emergency?
Why do I have the feeling that he only wishes to force Equestria to to mature to a point where it amounts to a PEGI 12 rating?
Please don't let him ever go soft. Oh and in the words of you know who evil always finds away.
Véri gudi tchépiter.
3694168
Yep.
"the bitch-making process"
I have a feeling he never truey beat Luna. That instead he was locked in a dreamscape the moment he entered ponyville, and everyhting he did that night was in his head while Luna looked on in sadness. And that he woke up without realizing it, thinking he had won.
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That's twisted.
3694310 Gnarl was always my second-favorite part of the Overlord games.
3694511
What was your first favorite?
He should've taken the god damn crown
Since mizzy said that i was awaiting the glorious moment when luna is beaten and bloody. Asking him to finish her
Then he takes the crown, throws her to the ground and walk away
Pimp hand was okay BUT HE FORGOT THE CROWN
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"Grah! I knew I forgot something!"
~Malideus
The main reason I like this story so much is simply that, the main character is a villain! I almost never see a villain story in all the fanfics I've read. But, I'm sort of confused. Since Ponyville seems to be abandoned, is it Malideus's? If so, shouldn't controlling Ponyville give him more mana? Assuming that his mana works like in Magic: The Gathering, wouldn't it be more profitable to go after a small settlement such as Apploosa? Since it is pretty common knowledge that the Elements of Harmony live in Ponyville, it seems to me like Mal didn't go after Ponyville out of power, which I thought is what he wanted, but went surely out of spite?
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Spite, my friend, the power is just a bonus.
Again with the misanthropy and cynicism. And I know plenty of people like to say "come on, how often do we see cynical protagonists"? To which I say HAVE YOU NOT LOOKED AT THE INTERNET? This isn't FUNNY! Its CRUEL.
Despite EVERYTHING Chris did, luna tries again and again to be kind to him and show compassion. This is NOT how normal people act! And I find it ridiculous that he's just able to beat her so easily when she and her sister are practically gods. Its offensive to the source material.
This story is not funny. It is trolling.
3694752
So you say.
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But, in the same way, it's fucking briliant!!
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No, so says the internet. http://memebases-my-little-brony.wikia.com/wiki/Uberdeathninja
And so says YOU. http://uberdeathninja.deviantart.com/journal/Uber-s-advice-corner-359295121#comments
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Ah, yes, Everyone already knows about that.
Way to go, captain obvious.
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I don't gotta 'splain nuthin'.
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They know NOW if they didn't before.
See, I get my joy from writing stories that make people happy or touch them in an emotional way. You get yours from pissing people off. That's called being an elementary school bully.
3694901
Meh, to each his own.
i like this story cause i dont really have worry about a deep plot and i can just read it for lolz (sometimes, ripping twilights horn was a round house kick to the "wtf just happened" town
3694752
Source material as in the show?
Celestia gets beaten by a damn changling in the show. She's not some super powerful god. She's just a very old and powerful magical pony.
3694531 It's not too late to fix it. Just throw it in there.
3695090
Nah, I'm too lazy.
3695093 Aww poo, I'll put my trust in your lathargic nature then. Ya know, just cause the rest has been entertaining.
3695101
Zzzzz...
Huh, wha? Oh, okay.
3695082
Who was the QUEEN OF THEIR ENTIRE RACE! Chris is just some guy who LUCKED INTO power. He isn't smart or wise or charismatic or magically skilled. He just had everything handed to him or stole power by being a jerk. That's not good characterization.
He's not like the Grinch, who you loved to hate. He's like Davey from 8 Crazy Nights. Unlikable protagonist with a vaguely sad backstory that treats even the people who try to be nice to him like shit. Guys like him make piss poor protagonists.
3695160
You're just jealous that you never thought of it first.