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Griffins can't take any demon, but they could take quite a few.
Darth Vader references bitches!
Freakin Epic!!!
trixie is gonna bring twi's friends to the cave aint she?
And suddenly Trixie becomes the new Element of Magic and Gilda (who is visiting Dash) curb-stomps the demon, earning her right of passage as a Griffon adult.
I'd love to see an Alicorn horn be a part of a different spell, that instead summons a sentient chuckle-fuck of a demon into Malideus' ranks.
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Something like that...
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The point is eventually theres going to be something demons can't solve, amazing I know demons are a great problem solver, and when that something happens, you're going to want to be able to deal with it in a.... different way.
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Exactly!
His planing reminded me of this.
http://youtu.be/SWynPcFRzWU?t=15m9s
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So he, like, planned around their plan to out plan his plan of planning against... against... plan...
*head explodes*
Did I just see a Doc/O'malley RvB Reference with the Red bull?
Booh Yah!
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Hell yeah!
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"All will taste Oblivion! Which tastes like Red Bull, Which tastes disgusting!"
Now where have I heard that before....
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Any resemblances to persons or abominations existing or otherwise is entirely coincidental.
3629985 i got a star wars and red vs blue reference niiice
that was great the force choke
Now we should try for a non violent solution.
Only replace the word 'non' with 'extremely'.
And after the word 'solution' include the phrase 'blood-explosion extraordinaire'.
I've said my piece on what doesn't work. Now I will be fair and talk about what does. Diving in a bit into the mythology of the world, like how changelings don't live long for example, that helps to establish the world around him. THAT is good. As is having his...well, not sure "friends" works...allies, I guess...bring up his xenophobia and how he needs to work on addressing his actual FLAWS. Having other characters point out flaws in the main character is another example of good writing.
HECK YEAH, FORCE CHOKE!!!
Im a little stunned he let Trixe live, you NEED to kill of some more characters and not just faceless guards or else my blood-lust wont be satisfied
You know that title really fits the chapter here.
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The funny thing is, he did think he killed her.
"I regret nothing!
That was rather nice. Quite liked the ending as well.
3630853 No lose ends!! Forget tying them, cauterize them close!!
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Why thank you.
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Don't worry... Once he does the ritual, it won't matter who survives until that point: they're all gonna die anyway if they don't run.
Oh god yes I was waiting soooo long for this to update! And that "maybe it's Maybelline." Part made me crack up.
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Glad I could please.
I really like this story. I hope this story continues a long time, because I don't wanna give up the almighty pimp-slap!
3629787 With your penis!
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...
Just... no.
I do hope Malideus doesn't try summoning until he's read more of the book. I think he's missed some info since there must be more than just the summoning part. You need a way to bind the summon to your service, or at least bargain them into your service. Also, summoning like this usually doesn't have a limitation like in video games where you can only summon one to make things fair. But life isn't fair so he should build an army. Still, it would take a while to do so since summoning can take a while to master. At least Malideus has a silver tongue which may come in handy.
I'm sure he'll eventually start necromancy as well. This would be awesome as he would be able to have the equivalent of both The Scourge and The Burning Legion as his underlings.
Yay! Trixie is in the story. I'm wondering what's next for her though. You made her seem unimportant since you didn't even summarize her life story.
I still think she can be useful. I don't think Malideus was thinking straight when he tossed her aside. He should have been more like, "You will have your turn soon enough. For now let us return to the cave." After all he needs someone to lure each of the mane six one by one starting with Pinkie Pie since she could be the most troublesome. I suppose Whip could do it though. Still, I hope you will bring her back as a loyal minion soon. Otherwise she could warn the other ponies and lead them to the cave.
Here's an idea for hilarious hi-jinx. Malideus accidentally gets the Want-It-Need-It spell cast on himself. Cue running for his life.
Now what is the best order to take the rest of the mane six down? You have the cornerstone of the group, Twilight, so who should be next? Pinkie should be next since she's a wildcard, but it would be wise to take Rainbow Dash at the same time if you could in since she would be able to gather outside help the fastest and could still lead the others. Applejack is the next one since she could still lead the others. Fluttershy should be next since she may be able to call on the help of her woodland creatures. Rarity is too self-absorbed to really be a leader so she should be last.
The taking of each of them down should be subtle and swift in order that they not rally. I suggest Whip impersonate Twilight in order to pull this off. Then as each of the mane six is taken out Whip impersonates them to make it seem like they are leaving Ponyville for a time. At least for Pinkie saying she's visiting her parent's rock farm.
Anyway, I hope this helps.
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I like it.
I will try to use these ideas soon.
I actually like the Want-it-need-it spell idea, so I might try that soon.
Eh,needs about 200% more deathclaws. And just to be sure, make them Legendaries.
And then throw in some nightstalkers for good measure.
200% of 0 is still 0.
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WHERE IS EVERYONE GETTING 200% FROM!?!?
offer Twilight's Virginity as the sacrifice! consensually demons are hot as fuck.
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This ain't a porno, dude!
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Why not just summon an Incubus? The male version of a succubus, It would be the PERFECT demon to subdue all those female ponies. And possibly a few male ones.
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500%?
this is ponies, and theres no melancholia tag. i can't help but think that by the end of the story, his thinly veiled incompetency will bite him in the ass, or he'll switch sides, or (and this would be badass) he gets what he wants, all of it, but at the last moment another vilain shows up and takes credit cause they summoned him. those two battle it out, and malideus ends up being a hero, while still loathing them all.
3630853 Oh well my bad.
and then... the demon he summons just happens to be a mashed potato addict.
I got an idea kill flash sentry
i hate that guy he would try to save twilight because hes her personal guard so destroy him without mercy
p.s twilight loves him so it will be super evil to her
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I like that last idea.
Buttsecks. Oh, TF2, how wondrous you are.
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Maybe some Cazadors and Super Mutant Behemoths, too.