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Why do I think that Nathan has an appearance mixing between Knight Solaire and Knight Lautrec...(I cheesed that cocky bastard's ass a while back in Anor Londo...and then proceeded to repeatedly invade everyone who dares set foot in Anor Londo...)
4014470
You can cheese the archers...
But you cannot cheese...
The Silver Stout Shako!!!
Does anyone else want to punch Nathan in the head?
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Funny thing is, my best character was originally planned to copy OnlyAfro's Wall build. Now I'm running around with default armor(upgraded to hell and back), Greatshield of Artorias, and a +5 Lightning Zweihander... Funny how planning to do something turns into doing something else, huh?
4014507
Yep.
EVEN THE GUNS HAVE GUNS!
YOU GONNA DIE CELESTIA!!!
I find it quite funny how he hardly needed any of his other workers. Most of their jobs consisted of guarding, yet no one came to fight.
4014536
Yeah, he really doesn't ever call anyone to help him unless he's forced to.
It may become a problem later.
4014543 What ever happened to Discord?
4014548
He's probably on a lovely cosmic cruise through the Netherverse.
I don't know, maybe super brony can swoop in and . . . pfft, sorry. I couldn't help myself. As soon as I reached the part where it started showing signs that the new guy was a brony, I couldn't stop myself from laughing. For that battle, don't have Malideus come in as usual 'I am an evil jackass (I don't say this to be mean, but he can be kind of a dick when he's committing evil on an Overlord level) and love it' attitude but super serious. Just systematically tear the new kid apart piece by piece with sheer wordplay for his folly in believing that simply because he was fighting for 'justice and good' that he was going to win. Because after all: Evil always finds a way.
Oh, and PREPARE THE LAZER BEAM!
Welp, it's been nice knowing you Equestria.
Still needs more dakka though.
4014637
It's a fucking Chromehound.
It can have as much dakka as you can put on it, and it won't be enough.
FINAL BATTLE?! NO! IT CANNOT BE! IT CANNOT END SO SOON! And so help me, if there isn't a sequel, the very earth beneath my feet will burn with the rage I hold as I march to your place of living, as it becomes merely the place to which you once lived, but no more.
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Of COURSE it isn't, you pancake-headed oaf!
It's just another cliffhanger, just wait for the next chapter, and you'll be fine.
Celestia is either going to die, or be shot by the orbital pimpslap cannon. Also, when're my OCs gonna be featured?
On distance that thing is death, but in close combat it is rather vulnerable~~~ ^^"
4014720 KILL THEM ALL, I BEG YOU MY LORD SPILL THEIR INSIDES ALL OVER THE PLACE, DO NOT LET MALIDEUS LOSE/DIE YOU ARE THE BEST PERSON EVER FOR MAKING THIS
Imagine the darking abilitys if mechromancing magic was added.
A giant-ass mechnoid.
I thought you liked the idea of pain-o-phobic incest changelings, I thought that was the point of adding Ribbon, but I haven't seen head nor tail of her.
This cant end too soon
As a connoisseur of 'Mech, that is way to short to be that heavy. Your giant stompy robots must be realistic.
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We'll get to her, it's just not time right now.
Trust me, she plays a more important role than you think.
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I changed it. Thank you for telling me.
4015246
A more important role? don't tell me I want to be superised.
Who the fuck is Nathan again?
Oh, fuck the hell yes.
Also, Heavy Lobster music for the win. The mech must now be referred to as the Heavy Lobster.
I almost hope that Nathan goes in there and destroys the H.O.U.N.D, celestia and here allies have been nothing more than a cakewalk so far.
the mech needs more guns, i dont think it has enough
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Nathan walks up and sees the mech.
"Holy SHIT, what is this, Metal Gear?"
I approve of this mech.
As for Nathan, he seems to be a little bit of a twat, but at least it seems he means well. I hope that ax turns out to be seriously magical, and surprise the hell out of both Mal and Nathan.
I actually hope Nathan becomes, at the least, a thorn in the side to delay the inevitable. This really has been too easy for Mal. So much so that his challenges come from random demons that he so happens to stumble upon.
Damn, Malideous has a chance to get a huge xp bonus from the battle
4014864 should totally put the pimpslap cannon in and have malideus say "Surprise muthafucka!!"
Jesus, I think Malideus has effectively won at this point, he had subdued one of the celestial sisters putting one in a fucking coma, promptly told the Crystal Empire to fuck right off and never interfere in the south again, vassalized the griffon kingdom, killed an old god (although its unclear how powerful gods are in this verse vis a vis wizards; see the lolfails of the celestial sisters), made the everfree his bitch, has an army of devils at his beck and call, has a dragon girlfriend and a legion of waifus, on first name terms with Nico, a book of infinite spells, the trapped souls of legendary warriors from a planet that breeds them like its for fun and profit, regularly vaporizes the local military elites like its nothing, usurped the weather control centre of the entire country, is immune to the orbital friendship cannon, has a growing daemon within his soul that is slowly consuming who he is and will unleashing UNSPEAKABLE EVIL and a has Goddamn mech and is literally slaughtering innocents for evulz.
And what, Celestia has Nathan? An impressively armed and armoured human? Not to belittle the awesomeness of medievally armed and armoured modern day humans with little to no magic in the world, its pretty much what I am specialising in my own fic, Nathan needs to step up his game. Like, holy shit he is beyond buggered into oblivion, even if Malideus loses his mech, there's practically no way he can lose at this point unless someone knives him in the dark or he just dies and the mantis daemon unleashes UNSPEAKABLE EVIL anyway.
I love the fic so far ninja, but you're running on fumes when it comes to adding the tension here, unless I am COMPLETELY underestimating this Nathan character, which I hope I am because otherwise Maly waly is gonna punt him like he was an anaemic puppy.
Of everything in this fic, the worst crime commited in my book is Celestia not telling Nathan that Malideus is also human. Kinslaying is unforgivable in my book. Human should not fight human.
Ok, I've read all the chapters in the story and although I like the shenanigans Malideus get into, I can't help but think that he's getting OP. In the first chapters I liked him because he was a lovable coward that trumped his enemies through wit and luck, like a true underdog. However, as he gained more power the guy became an unstoppable asshole that went outta his way to kill ponies that never even met him or who simply tried to defend themselves and their species. The guy pretty much seems to be a Karma Houdini as any punishment he receives is light compared to what he does to the ponies and most of the time he ends up getting more power. Furthermore, other than being an antibrony, the guy doesn't seem to give the Equestrians, or the readers, a true reason about why he hates ponies, as even when he was powerless he was willing to antagonize ponies that wanted to help him due to their awareness of his supposedly tragic life on Earth, or why he is willing to commit actions that would get him executed/punished in the real world. I mean he slapped Twilight because he thought that she was a disguised brony in his world's party without thinking that he could have gotten the crap beaten out of him/sent to jail for assault and he ignores his common sense in favor of his ego as a villain. His domestic life with Mizzy and his interaction with his minions are pretty much the only good thing he kept from his time as a great underdog. He is both my favorite and least favorite character in the story because he pretty much represents an over exaggeration of an antibrony. I respect the fact that Nathan actually wants to do the right thing by helping the abused ponies and behaves as a friendly guy. On the other hand, his enthusiasm at being in Equestria and willingness to play the old-style chivalrious knight, just like Chris' willingness to behave like an evil sorcerer, rather than behave like a normal guy ALMOST makes me wish that Malideus kick his ass as the guy is a stereotype of a brony. Still, as much as I enjoy Chris' adventures, I really hope that he gets knocked down a peg because the guy's acting quite cockily for someone who relies on stolen power, luck, and plagiarized ideas from a videogame. Don't misunderstand, I enjoy the story but I'm getting tired of him always winning and how he's being dehumanized by attempting the Pony Holocaust. Still, it's your story so regardless of what you do I'll supported because the story is good.
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Unfortunately, H.O.U.N.D.s don't get lasers. However, they almost always have high-power explosive ordinance; I,E: Cannons, grenade launchers, rockets, hell, even gauss cannons.
4016345
Agreed.
4017399 So what direction are you taking this Nathan guy? Don't kill him too quick, let him confront celestia or accept that he has to kill a fellow human. He's too interesting to kill off so soon.
I don't believe Malideus will completely destroy Las Pegasus, I mean it's the city of sin! Where else can he drink and gamble? Where else will he detonate nuclear devices (Well, I guess he would use cities since he doesn't care...)? At the most, he turns it into New Pegasus, with all the filth, rubble filled streets, radiation, giant rats, Fistos and violence that entails.
"Hey, Soldiers! Get a load of this!"
"Hey, Mages! Get a load of this!"
"Hey, Civilians! Get a load of this!"
"Hey, Las Pegasus! Get a load of this!"
"Hey, Celestia! Get a load of this!"
"Hey, Equestria! Get a load of this!"
"Hey, White Knight Hero! Get a load of this!"
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Gauss Cannons? Yes.
Celestia vs. Mech. In the end, it won't matter who wins, POCKET SAND WILL SAVE THE DAY!
Nathan worries me though. I saw the Villainous fic end with the guy being taken down by his friend, and if I see the same thing twice, I may...quietly sit here.
Here is a little song :
Stand up and fight,
stand up and see the sky turns dark,
my H.O.U.N.D. will exterminate you.
Stand up and fight,
stand up and feel the fear in your heart,
I will kick your ass now.
Stand up and fight,
stand up and fight...,
stand up and fight !
4017498
I would NEVER kill off such an interesting character just after we meet him. What do you take me for, a spy?
*hides butterfly knife behind back*
4018181 What? A spy? Never. All my friends wear paper masks of themselves from time to time.
No but seriously, give Mally some good light-side enemies, not a rival villain, nut aholy paladin of some kind.
Quick Celestia use pocket sand!
I want the H.O.U.N.D to curbstomp Nathan
the spear is mightier then the 500 ton Armageddon machine
TITANFALL
Your mech is pathetic. Git gud scrub.
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The angels cometh. And they bring nothing but the destruction of filthy casuals.
Edit:
Kirby is 2 much m8. I'mma get rekd b4 I could face off.
That's better.