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3581723
I wouldn't call that violence. It is merely the verbal abuse of the intellectually disinclined, a victimless act of merriment and pleasure.
Whaaaaat. Did they just...are they going to...
Whaat.
Well, we all know what happens next. Shiny throws Cadence.
nigga got laid.
3581820
I know, I'm just trying to be humorous so I can decrease the amount of hateful comments you two will spew at each other.
3581830
Yep.
'Cept it's funny, 'cuz he's so pasty, little kids think he sparkles in the sunlight.
3581831
Hate? No, no, no. I was factual and tactless, but not hateful.
3581845
Not you, I meant him. You may use logic, but he's going to say something, and I don't need any more flame wars in the comments section. I apologize for any offence done to either party, but I wish to keep this story a peace-zone.
I hope you understand.
3581851
But that's not fun.
3581837 muhfucka I told you i work at burger king!
3581853
I guess you're right. From now on, you may pick fights with anyone you want.
Carry on.
3581859
... What?
3581861
Damn you! Politeness is my one weakness! It's like Kryptonite, it's Politonite!
3581828
*shrugs*
It was inevitable.
...I think that chapter just got you boosted to the 2nd tier of my 'Villain's Favorites' in fanfiction...That's kind of hard to do when you've read thousands of stories.
3581876
My apologies. Here, let me be nice and strengthen you:
Get your hateful ass out of my comments section before I come over there and kick your ass so hard you'll have to use toilet paper to wipe your nose, you sack of bile and wasted genes!
That better?
Bet her Uncle will try to kill him once he finds out what they've been up to... XD
3581882
Why thank you.
i would say it would be wise for him to learn to be a more diplomatic villain; after all; after all, every villain in every fiction i have ever read has either been brought down when he is invading, or when he faces the heroes/armies of the people he/she has pissed off due to being a cruel tyrant.....
Then again, he is so much more fun to read in his villainous state that I don't think I could ever bring myself to suggest he do anything different. Short term enjoyment vs long term stability. Yeah, the evil is to much fun to watch, keep going.
3581889
I almost never have strong feelings about random people of the Internet, so it's literally impossible for me to be hateful. I cannot "remove my hateful ass" because it was never in your comments section in the first place.
3581922
My apologies, then, I meant no offence, just being humorous.
It is clear to see that I have failed.
3581831 The crystal heart is the next target, very nice idea my friend! Can't wait for the next installment!!!
3581939
Thank you. It will arrive shortly, just you wait!
Whoa! hold on a second..... Uncle Bolas? Multiverse? I really hope that this is a MTG reference and it is
Nicol Bolas, that would make my day
Good thing I skipped the 'section' then
3581965
Yep. Seriously, there should be warnings before those scenes, someone could get hurt!
3576014 They were.
3576487 ...White...Supremacist...What about....Black Supremacy? ...It exists too...
Read the first half... Then theres a god damn sex scene out of nowhere. Yeah, Teen with Sex tags are sexual innuendos and loosely implied at best, showing the scene should have instantly bumped it up to mature. And no god damn warning? Not everyone likes clop. Either take it out or bump Teen to Mature, and either way you've lost a reader.
3582092
I gave you a fair warning. Besides, it hurt me just as much to write it as it hurt you to read it. So, I guess I'm sorry, and hope you find a better story.
So you have sex with a dragon who can swim in lava. Then you wake up to find out that your eyes are now capable of bursting into flames.
Dude you have an STD!
3582123
More like STW:
Sexually Transmitted Weapon.
3582129 Flaming headbutt of DOOOOOOOOM.
3582147
Whilst singing the doom song.
... I guess.
I'm really loving this fic.
Thanks for the quick updates!
3582162
No prob.
3582155>>3582148 ... Im gunna sing The Doom Song now!
Doom doom doom doom doom,
doom doom do DOOM,
DOOOM doom do-doom,
DOOM do-doom doom doooom,
doom doom dooom, do-do-DOOOM!
(6 months later)
Doom doom doo doom doom,
DOOMY-DOOMY-DOOM,
doom do do DOOM,
Do do DOOM,
doomy-doomy-doomy,
Doom doom doom THE END and beginning of one huge headache.
You should probably bump up the rating of the story to Mature...
Wait, what happened to the plan of making a staff with the alicorn amulet gem?
3582092 Actually he did post this sentence before it began:
I think this was enough warning as it was. He even posted a It's safe to read now.
I myself like how the story is going and I really wanna see how our glorious her- .... I mean our despicable villain will act in the crystal empire.
And just like that
BAM
Enter Nicol Bolas..... Well maybe Nicol Bolas, If it is the legendary planeswalker from MTG.
If he actually meets him I have to wonder if he will be either aware of Nicol's "Touch" or if he is going to experience it first hand.
Dude, you've got to update your rating to mature for this chapter.
3582209 three words. Sex. Crazed. Dragon.
Youu would forget as well.
3582404 I'm so used to that sort of thing I'd keep a clear head nonetheless. Seriously, happens like every other day.
I think I died a little inside.
3582407 irl though you'd maybe forget
3582101 love your work man... not completely sure about sex with a dragon but its fun trying something new eh ?
The more the story continues the more unlikable and unrepentant he becomes. He's not even FUNNY in his cruelty. He's just mean and dirty. This whole story is without any real joy or humor. It's just mindless cruelty perpetrated by a flat, two dimensional character we do not empathize with, sympathize with or admire in the slightest and his equally cruel girlfriend who are just hurting people just BECAUSE.
That is NOT GOOD WRITING.
3582443 I did mean irl, did you think I was RPing or something? (although I could probably try to RP a bowl sometime)