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Jamin P Rose
I write fetish clopfics and other things. Commissions: Not Open, working on existing commissions.
Jamin P Rose
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The idea is excellent, but the execution... not so much.
I mean, I've always wanted to see a fic where a changeling and pony have sex during the actual invasion, but this one seems extremely fast paced and somewhat lacking in general.
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I will be revising it soon and trying to make it better. I have a hard time slowing down and I am working on it.
Edit: Still thinking of revising, but I have a few things to take care of first.
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When you do revise this, you should make it much longer, and put it in several chapters.
Yeah, it seems like a one-shot gag fic without a real plot. From that angle it's not too bad, but it was really too short to truly enjoy. ;)
now lonely rose has something to brag to her coworkers about
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Still thinking of revising this into a longer story? It has been over a decade since this story was published.