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TheLoveless
i'm a brony who just wants to have fun, and make stuff people can enjoy
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I love you right now
3526717 why? i dispize what i wrte
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This is awesome
Nice job loveless on the story
3526733 its disterbingly creepy
second lol
3526738 ;-; this is why people should have mature turned off.
sorry for writing this flutter
3526745 why sorry I don't care what u write as long as u have fun writing it.be happy what u write
3526758 i don't remember if i liked writing it or not, i can't remember if i did or didn't
i don't enjoy it to much, and my friends are reading this smut
don,t be it was cool.
idea great, but the flow and grammer are crap. actions to take scrap it and redo it from scratch or .......ummmm.......crap I got nothing but option 1 so ya just go with that
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i don't know
3526764 come on don't be sad turn that frown upside down fc08.deviantart.net/fs71/f/2012/049/6/f/pinkie_pie___come_on_and_smile_by_cawinemd-d4q60i4.png
3526745 Stop being down on yourself. This was a okay fic and I know where you are coming from. Writing my first clop wasn't easy either. This isn't bad and I've seen a lot worst on this site. Use the experience to make a better sequel. I like the idea of Spike being with the shy princess of the changelings.
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use his idea.3526781
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its been approved.
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3526791 sequal?
3526785 well as cute as that was, i can't,
3526781 sorry, no can do. i'm never going to screew with this again, unless required
3526800 read what is typed above, never unless neded.
3526804
iv'ed read the story.
3526804 It's an option. If not you somebody might. Heck, I might do if I have your permission and I get some of my other fics out of the way.
3526804 please images2.wikia.nocookie.net/__cb20121229135432/mlp/images/a/a2/Spike_is_happy_that_Rarity%27s_eating_his_pie_S3E9.png
ok, besides it not bein my cup of tea; t fic was a... interestin read
3526812 i might do one. i don'y know i'm overflowwed with stuff
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3526817yur horrible! using my favorite carector against me!!!!
3526825 Either way, if I decide to do a sequel or something involving your character I'll make sure to ask first.
3526830 I'm sorry
3526834 okay, thad be okay
3526848 next chance i get i'm gonna use discord and fluttershy against you.
be warned.
i'm out of it to night.
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or at least write somethin else to get this out of ur mind? 
awww, it's ok tak some of that pink stuff n' maybe u'll feel better later
3526861 good luck with that. Hehehe. ;)
3526864>>3526869 i tried posting a coment on some one's blog thing, and it said stop right thier crimana scum. i feel worst now. and to add on, my heart is hurting.
don't ask, don't bother.
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try to ignore it n' keep ur chin up 
aww, that thing was just bein a jerk
3526804 why not have idea potential just need to fine tune it
3526875
comon it cant hert your
right it was a good story.no
?look up to the bight side
Me enjoyed
Well, I suppose even if you didn't like this story yourself, it showed some pretty decent potential for writing other kinds of stories, the only true problem I had was the pacing- Not just stories like these, anything, you need to take more time to tell the reader what they're supposed to be seeing, and try to skip over as little as possible. Good descriptive writing is the key to success. That said, if you hate this go ahead and never write anything like it again, it's entirely up to you and lets face it- there are hundreds of writers ready to fill the void while you happily work on your own stuff.
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you remind me of a person i didn't like.i probly won't write a story like this, and i know its skippy, didn't get much time to write it,
but some one would gladly fill the void if i don't/
but then again, this is actualy constructive advice3527174 i felt pain in my chest, and it hurt a lot.
like it stopped or smethign. i'm not avrage human
3526960 the start of that sentance confused me. i can't fine tune it, i never am left alone to write stuff like this better, and i'd rather not re write it right now. maybe later on.
More effort and a little background wouldn't hurt. MAYBE ass why and what lead to this.
I'm ok with this,
Thank you for the story man,
Reading stuff like this makes me whole!!!!!!!
(NOT THAT WAY)
3528297 i'm glad it made you whole
... not sure how to interpret that at all
but glad its okay with you
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Keep Calm, and write on man
3528323 kk. i just have one thing to ask you, in PM
awesome, but could be so much longer, could make a story out of this and the action felt rushed. If you don't mind, I'd like to do a continuation of this.
3528606 some one asked me t do a sequal. but make a cntinuation if you'd like.
just don't make a berriex spike fic.
3528652 Oh, Well, I was wondering if you don't mind me using Berrie as a character. i plan on having spike end up with all three.
3528657 sure. if its all three and spike, by all means do it.
i'm just going to use spike and berrie
3528692 what?
jeb 4th? what do you speak of!?