Uncertainty (Not Proofread)
Chapter 4
Uncertainty
The next moring
Spike decied it was time he faced his fears. After poseing in the mirror for about five minets, he got his trike and drove all the way to room 237. This is it, im going to tell whatever behind that door to scram. If I don't face this now, these ghosts or whatever they are will never go away. This is all in my head, and its about time a prove it.
Has he turned his scooter into the next hallway, he saw somthing he didn't excpect. The door to 237 was wide open.
Meanwile
"Ok ya'll, you guys go comforter Fluttershy," said Applejack In the meantime, I'm gona go speak ta Twilight about what the hay happened between the two of um."
"This place is evil... We can't stay here... There so much hate..."
Since they took her back last night, Fluttershy had gone into a catatonic state. The poor pegisus was constantly rocking back and forth, her eyes refusing to close. All four of them had took tern comforting her that night in her room. Now it was morring, and Applejack was ready to get the honest truth behind what really happen yesterday.
Applejack whent toward the louge where Twilight was normaly riting her essay. As she approch she thought she heard the famlar sound of her quill. However, as she got closer, she realisied that that was not what she was hearing.
In side the louge, Twilight head layed beside her pappers in a restless sleep. She was moning with fear. "Stop plealse, don't make me do. I don't make me do it. No Spike, not you to. Why I am I doing this?
Applejack put her hoof on twilights back, casing twilight to jump up from her trance. Her eyes were opened wide with fear.
"Twilight, whats wrong, ya look more scared then a rabbit runen from a Timberwolf."
"Applejack, I just had a dream I murdered all of you."
Applejack froze. It was here turn to be scared. However, she tried to keep her composure infront of the started Twilight.
"Twilight it was just a dream, ya know ya never do th-"
"But I didn't just kill you, no ,no,no I didn't just kill you. I mutilated you and tour you to peaces By the time I was done I couldn't even find your cutie marks in the pile of ripped flesh. I must be loseing my mind."
"Twilight its ok, it's...Oh horse Apples its Spike."
Spike walked into the room, as pale as a gohst with a large bruse on his face. He walked towards them for a bit before calapsing on the floor. The others walked in from the other side, just in time to see the poor todler fall down. Both Applejack and Rairity ran to him."
"Oh Spikey Wikey, who on earth could have..." she slowyly turned her head towards Twilight. "It was you wasn't it, you were the only one who wasn't looking after Flutershy. How could you do this to him. You are like a mother to him.
"But Rarity, it wasn't...."
"Get away form us you disgusting brute."
With that Twilight stormed out of the lodge.
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Soon she found her self in the ballroom sitting on one of the benches near the cider bar. She sat there for wile wishing she could have at least one bucking glass. How long had it been since she last had some? It might have only been a couple of, but to her it felt like years. She lowered her head onto the wood of the bar table and sighed.
"Just one bucking drink thats all need."
"Can I get you somthing to drink Ms. Sparkel,"
Twilight lifted her head to see a red unicorn stallion with a long horn. Behind him the once empty sheves were now filled with bottles apon bottles of cider. Under normal circumstances, twilight would have been mind boggled as to how a pony and gallons of cider suddly pooped into existence. Instead she greet the staillion by name, even thowe she never met him in her life time.
"Bar Tender, how is the best Celestia dame bartender in Equestria doing."
"Very good Ms. Sparkle, very good. So, What will it be."
"Just dish me a nice cold one with some ice, mama need her Cider bad Tender, so tend to it."
With his red magical grip he uncorked a bottle of cider and poured her a glass. Then he levitated some ice cubs and dropped them into to cup. Took the bottle in her own magic and raised.
"Thank you so bucking much Bar, you are the best." With that she took a sip.
"Is everythin all right Ms.Sparkle, you seem rather tense."
"Well I'm having a little bit of trouble with those with my bitchy friends."
"That is unfortunate" he said without any change his expression.
There was a acward pasuse before Twilight spoke again.
"They are so ungrateful to me. I can't believe the princess want's me to learn about friendship from these losers. To think they would acusmy of hurting my baby dragon. He practicably my son. I love the little fucker."
Twilight paused for a moment to take a another sip of her cider, wile Bar Tender kept his composure as if nothing was wrong.
"Ok I hit once ok. He scattered my letters. I whent to pick them up and I hit him with my hoof by mistake. It could have happened to anyone. Yet my so called friends won't let it go.
"Twilight are you in there." cried Rarity
Twilight blinked her eyes and found the bar to be empty again. She turned around saw Rarity with a worried look on her face.
"There some one in room 237. She's the one who hit Spike."
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J.K Rowling.
Pretty sure you mean Stephen King there. Also, there is A LOT of errors on this page. Get a proofreader. And from what I`ve read so far, it is way too similar to the original movie.
And yes, I know you said you would do proofreading, but you should think about hiring someone else.
300975 That was directed by Stanley Kubrick. That's why it's interesting for me. Not much of a King fan myself.
1899009 I was making joke about how almost everyone in Harry Potter dies.
1899009 Also sorry for rushing. I'll get someone to correct it tomorrow.
1899355
Technically, Shakespeare is the one in which almost all the characters die (Hamlet) But I see what you mean.
2086685 It's suppose too.
lilbeibs
It's good, but I wish you would continue it. Ps, this is WAY to close to the. Shining. You might get in trouble for copyright.
3587111 That's one of the reason why I canceled it. It was a learning experience. I'm going to put this fic up for adoption in my new group that helps find new authors for abandoned stories. Maybe they can give the idea more justice. As for me, I have way too many other stories to work on at the moment.
5261071 This was my first story before I new I could actually find people who be willing to edit my stuff. I knew it was poorly executed and kind of plagiarized the Kubrick version too much (I even borrowed from the script)
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Grammar and spelling is my biggest struggle, even with my current fics that are a hell of a'lot better than this. Finding people who have the time and patients to help patch my stuff up is hard, but it doesn't stop me from posting new content.