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Mantodea is a changeling who cannot shapeshift; or at least, not yet. He avoids attending Nightmare Night in fear of what his fellow changelings might think, but his friend Tamite takes him along regardless.

Based in the universe set by my other fanfiction, The Shaded View.

This is more or less my first attempt at a one-shot, but hit or miss you'll never get better at firing a gun unless you practice (heh, pun...). I hope it's worth reading, as I did put a good amount of time into writing this. So please, do enjoy!

And if you enjoyed this, check out my other story linked above, cuz that one's even better! It has an editor, pre-readers and everything!

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Comments ( 30 )

Hey we have so much in common!
I have dumb ideas all the time!
But im sure this one will work!
*Puts on his muffin powered jetpack.*

This story needs a like.

3403119

First of all I doubt that jet pack's gonna work, and second, you're a common sight in the comments for changeling stories.

3403884
Well i do love a good changeling story.
And if your going to read it,
you might as well post a fun comment or two.

3403925
I also have muffins!
*Tosses muffins into the air*

3403941

*face hoofs with one hoof and uses the another to grab the muffin*

3403949
See ,
Fun is contagious,
And everyone needs to get infected!!

3403959

You do realize that you're talking to an actual changeling, right?

3403967
Well of course silly,
im a "real" changeling too.

3403979
And you assume i am?
I take offence to that,
Simply because i have been removed from the hive mind,
And been driven reasonably insane,
Doesnt make me any less changeling.

3403991

I didn't mean offence but...well...you kinda sounded like you didn't believe me.

(P.S. I've been removed as well, though i'm not giving any details.)

3404001
Oh did you accidentally reveal the location of the hive,
To a group of ponies who looked liked they really needed muffins,
Too?

3404012

I...don't think so, but occasionally a few other changelings get a bit of my...
outbursts...

*starts eating said muffin from before*

3404028
Well in my defence,
How was i supposed to know that that shiney stuff on them,
Was royal guard armor,
I thought they just liked shiney things as much as i do.
Anyways who needs the hive,
When we have good friends and good muffins.
If you ask me, all the "yes my queen this",
And "it will be done my queen" that ,
Was quite annoying.

3404082

Yeah that is annoying, but...
*odd feeling* wait did I just...?
:facehoof: *sigh* I did it again...

(If you're wondering it's the "random broadcast" thing)

3404094
Welp dont worry,
Your old pal Soft Shell is here if you need me.

Aren't Mantodeas those enemies in Final Fantasy VI that have a special attack for 9999 damage on a single target?

I loved this story man, gives some nice insight into the culture and characters. Makes me happy to be a Changeling! :pinkiesad2: A few spelling mistakes but nothing too big. Great job!

~DeepShift

3403467
and you need a thank-you! :pinkiehappy:

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3404136
:pinkiecrazy: heyy, I came back to find 19 comments on my newest piece of literature. one was actually about what I posted. the rest was from you two.

:raritydespair: I mean come on, I thought for a second the story was garnering itself a decent bit of attention. but nope. you don't just do that to a guy!

3404418
upon doing some research into the matter, yes it is. That was not my intention though; mantodea is a technical term used for the mantis subspecies of insects.

3406545
glad I could help. :pinkiesmile: and thank you, that's nice to hear.

3408049
Umm..
*Looks back and forth between Fluxercry and Star flame*
Well this is akward....
*Rubs his arm*
I kind of....forgot who was the author.....
Heh heh sorry....

3408082
s'fine. just disappointed me, really... :duck:

Good job on this. I'll likely be reading the rest of your stories sometime soon.

3602932 Well thanks. :twilightsmile: I could have done a better job on the ending, but I'm glad you liked it anyways.

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