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A few missed capitilisations but other than that an interesting story. Loving the "Octavia kicked me out. Again?"
Tracked
Could use a bit more proof-reading, but I like the idea! It's got a real episode feel to it. Tracking, and looking forward to the next part!
so far so good, looking forward to more
Classico - Tenacious D
If you don't continue this I will be angry. This story is amazing so far! I am waiting for the next chapter, with much impatience. You just can't delay awesomeness.
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Well, you can't rush it either, The next chapter will be out as soon as I'm satisfied with it. The last thing I want is to fall short of your expectations.
Thanks for reading!
Lol again again again, can't wait for next chapter!
Tracking it! Can't wait for more!
hey vinyl, guess what?
again? again? again? again? again? again? again? again? again? again? again? again? again? again? again? again? again? again? again? again? again? again? again? again? again? again? again? again? again? again? again? again? again? again? again? again? again? again? again? again? again? again? again? again? again? again? again? again? again? again? again? again? again? again? again? again? again? again? again? again? again? again? again? again? again? again? again? again? again? again? again? again? again? again? again? again? again? again? again? again? again? again? again? again? again? again? again? again? again? again? again? again? again? again? again? again? again? again? again? again? again? again? again? again? again? again? again? again? again? again? again? again? again? again? again? again? again? again? again? again? again? again? again? again? again? again? again? again? again? again? again? again? again? again? again? again? again? again? again? again? again? again? again? again? again? again? again? again? again? again? again? again? again? again? again? again? again? again? again? again? again? again? again? again? again? again? again? again? again? again? again? again? again? again? again? again? again? again? again? again? again? again? again? again? again? again? again?
Short chapter is short '-_-
Lol I agree with applejack
Panic disco, rave party, seems like Pinkies style
Rather short, but a great chapter! Keep it up!
I missed this so I'm glad to see it back :3
I too am glad to see this continued, keep it up!
Twilight wrecking their date, dick move.
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She's doing it for the good of Equestria though, don't forget that part.
Still a great story. Only minor errors, but it doesn't ruin the flow of the story. So overall, good job! This could definitely turn out awesome!
Is this epic or is this EPIC? I'm leaning toward the latter. Great job, and I HATE CLIFFHANGERS YOU SUCK
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Cliffhangers keep you coming back for more, I actually think this is one of the least cliffhangery chapter endings so far. (Cliffhangery is a word now. Deal with it.)
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LIES. you dont need cliffhangers if the story is awesome
then the pure awesome will make them come back for more
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well, all I can say is that if you hated this chapter's cliffhanger, then you're REALLY gonna hate next chapter's
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Aw. Thats cold. So very very very cold
really liking the story so far,
I love the couple vinyl and pinkie make
, and I feel sad because they can't be together
Eh... capitalization errors abound in this chapter.
TF2 reference was a bit silly but fit in context.
It was entertaining, I'll agree. And you've introduced some conflict. Next chapter should be good.
Last Chapter folks! (well except for the Epilogue) It sure has been a ride!
also: rating is now Teen because of violence and mild language.
WHAT A TWIST
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). But so many capitalization and punctuation errors... You wan't me to help this once
Want me to edit this one for you. You know it won't be much (I'm horrible
Great ending man
jk
Nice to see it finished.
Will there be a sequel
Oh pinkie love is all about being creepy and nutty
<_< DAMNIT VINYL
what did i tell you about sitting on tavi's instruments
the story has interested me, much as your muffins vs cupcakes has intersted me....
you have a knack for interesting me i must say
also lovin' the "again" gag
welp, ONWARDS TO THE NEXT CHAPTER
oh my
you planned for that pinkie?..........nice
<_< vinyl.....are you sure you know what you're doing? this is PINKIE PIE we're talking about
don't care if it was short...sometimes the short chapters are the best chapters
i agree with everypony in that party....HOW DO YOU SET ICE ON FIRE? EVEN IF IT'S DERPY
you stay out of this derps
p.s. i see i'm not the only one who thought of "pony rock" and 'tis even scarier cause you have the exact same lyrics that i think of
are you psychic or something?
anyways, likin' it...likin' it
shite just got real, yes somehow still retained it's funniness (is that a word?)
i'm not much of a proof-reader/editor but i did see one minor spelling error, not important but i thought as i saw it might as well point it out for you
should be lot* of exercise
this, i like this
also, am i the only one who isn't overly bothered about twilight trying to ruin the date? or maybe i'm just a heartless bastard
)
<_<...sorry vinyl
(please don't resign as my pic
biographical cookbooks.......
celestia damnit twilight
my brain...it hurts from all the disguises
nah jokes...i like, i like...just took a second read through of the last couple of paragraphs to catch up with what had happened
silly twilight, you forgot to take pinkies pinkie sense into account (though for the life of me i've no idea how SHE of all ponies forgot to take something into account
)
again, am i the only one likin' something in the chapter? first it was messing with the date (sorry vinyl <_<) and now it's the cliffhanger
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inventing words at random
you...i like you
inventing words is fun
me: *sees chapter name*
in my mind
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THE PINKIE IS A SPY!!!
dem cliffhangers
don't worry, i like em....even if nopony else does
i consider an epilogue a chapter....SO IT AINT OVER YET BUDDY
shite just got even more real. i liked it
epic twist was epic
NOT YOU!!!
ugh...confound these ponies, they drive me to insanity
i really enjoyed this story, and i look forward to the epilogue
there is hope for you yet vinyl....there is hope
pinkie pie!!! you do NOT screw around with twilights letter
i'm impressed she didn't attempt to put an end to your life
or did she? doesn't really give details as to what happened AFTER pinkie messed with the letter
nice way to end the story with a letter to celestia, made it feel almost like an episode (if the show did the whole romanc-y thing)
speaking of the show
1 WEEK TILL EPISODE 10!!!!
and now i have naught to do but read more fics and await an update to muffins vs cupcakes
until we meet again
-stiggerzz and vinyl scratch
heheh Panic! At The Disco :D
I'm gonna give Octavia a huge spanking for her actions towards Vinyl!